Avalyn Piper - Revision history

Livingdeadkat at 21:06, 18 February 2015

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Livingdeadkat at 05:52, 24 January 2015

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Livingdeadkat at 05:46, 24 January 2015

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Livingdeadkat at 06:38, 22 January 2015

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Livingdeadkat at 06:37, 22 January 2015

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Livingdeadkat at 22:19, 4 January 2015

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 | stat_3_value = 3/15
 | stat_4 = Marital Status
-| stat_4_value = Single
+| stat_4_value = Taken
 | stat_5 = Occupation
 | stat_5_value = Artist
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 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Positive</span>'''''</u> ===
 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Neutral</span>'''''</u> ===

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 | title =
 | gender = Female
-| citizenship =
+| citizenship = Gridania
 | race = Hyur
 | clan = Midlander
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 === <span style="font-size:medium;">'''''<u>Flaws</u>'''''</span> ===
+*Too dependent on others.
 === <span style="font-size:medium;">'''''<u>Fears</u>'''''</span> ===
 === <span style="font-size:medium;">'''''<u>Talents</u>'''''</span> ===
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 === '''''<u>Weapons</u>''''' ===
+*Fists/fist weapons
 === '''''<u>Magic</u>''''' ===
+*Healing magic
 === '''''<u>Crafting</u>''''' ===
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 *Mother: Joann Piper
 *Sibilings: Unknown
 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Positive</span>'''''</u> ===
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 === '''''<u>Name and Lifestyle</u>''''' ===
 ==== Nicknames ====

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 | stat_4_value = Single
 | stat_5 = Occupation
-| stat_5_value = Mercenary
+| stat_5_value = Artist
 | stat_6 = Sexual Orientation
 | stat_6_value = Bisexual

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 == Appearance ==
-'''Height: 5'5'''
+'''Height: 5'5"'''
-'''Weight: 120'''
+'''Weight: 120 lbs.'''
 '''Complexion:&nbsp;Fair'''

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 '''Height: 5'5'''
-'''Weight: 170'''
+'''Weight: 120'''
 '''Complexion:&nbsp;Fair'''

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	But though she was once shy and easily flustered, she has changed. She seems more confident and bold. Her old self can still shine through in certain situations, with certain people. With most people she meets, she can be somewhat quiet, but she is less scared of speaking her mind. Months of bad experiences have bolstered her. She has learned she must stand up for herself and defend her honor, because there might not be anyone else around willing to do so. To some peoples' surprise, this might mean using less than nice language. Another lesson she has learned is some won't listen unless you use their own language against them.		But though she was once shy and easily flustered, she has changed. She seems more confident and bold. Her old self can still shine through in certain situations, with certain people. With most people she meets, she can be somewhat quiet, but she is less scared of speaking her mind. Months of bad experiences have bolstered her. She has learned she must stand up for herself and defend her honor, because there might not be anyone else around willing to do so. To some peoples' surprise, this might mean using less than nice language. Another lesson she has learned is some won't listen unless you use their own language against them.
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		+	As of late, she has come off more violent, which people take as her going insane. Few know the true reason behind her oddly and overly angry behavior.

	===Relationships===		===Relationships===

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	This is the man most people will hear from her about. She openly speaks of the things he has put her through in the name of what he calls love. He has abused her emotionaly, physically, and mentally. He is the reason she is slower to trust and more wary, but also the reason she has forced herself to be stronger. They have a son together named Aiden that she has since put up for adoption due to his life previously being in danger from Ryo and others.		This is the man most people will hear from her about. She openly speaks of the things he has put her through in the name of what he calls love. He has abused her emotionaly, physically, and mentally. He is the reason she is slower to trust and more wary, but also the reason she has forced herself to be stronger. They have a son together named Aiden that she has since put up for adoption due to his life previously being in danger from Ryo and others.

		+	'''Zau'ir Tayuu'''
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		+	Zau'ir, or Spoon as he was previously known, is a close friend to Avalyn. They were once romantically involved but she found they didn't want the same thing from life. They are happy just being friends.

	===Other Notes===		===Other Notes===

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-While Ava is still far from being intimidating, she is a more imposing than she once was. Her figure is less soft and more athletic than it once was, from her training in hand-to-hand. You'll see her in less robes and more leathers. She rarely wears casual clothing anymore, and always has some type of weapon on her.
+While Ava is still far from being intimidating, she is a more imposing than she once was. Her figure is less soft and more athletic than it once was, from her training in hand-to-hand. You'll see her in less robes and more leathers, and even now frequently plate and mail. She rarely wears casual clothing anymore, and always has some type of weapon on her.
 She was clearly made to reside in temperate, shady locales. She has very fair, white skin, freckles dotting her face and any other place that sees sunlight. She keeps her hair short now, leaving behind her preference for her long, almost unruly red hair. Her large, doe eyes, are somewhere between blue and green. Depending on what light she's in, they can pass for either color, but in some places they are a nice mixture of both colors; the color of the ocean.
-As for scarring, it might be something that is rare to see. She keeps bandages around her neck to hide the scarring that mars it: horrible bite scars that was clearly, and oddly, caused by humanoid teeth. She also has two scars on her abdomen, an incision running downward from her navel, and a larger scar that runs across her belly, and seems to have been slightly burnt, like the weapon used to cut it was heated.
+As for scarring, it might be something that is rare to see. She has some slight scarring on her knuckles from her training as a pugilist, as well as small scars here and there from every day cuts and scrapes. She also has three scars on her abdomen, an incision running downward from her navel, a larger scar that runs across her belly, that seems to have been slightly burnt, like the weapon used to cut it was heated, and a stab wound overlapping the long scar to the right of her navel.
 ===History===

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 '''Ryo Sanada'''
-This is the man most people will hear from her about. She openly speaks of the things he has put her through in the name of what he calls love. He has abused her emotionaly, physically, and mentally. He is the reason she is slower to trust and more wary, but also the reason she has forced herself to be stronger. They have a son together named Ryat. He is now thought to be dead.
+This is the man most people will hear from her about. She openly speaks of the things he has put her through in the name of what he calls love. He has abused her emotionaly, physically, and mentally. He is the reason she is slower to trust and more wary, but also the reason she has forced herself to be stronger. They have a son together named Aiden that she has since put up for adoption due to his life previously being in danger from Ryo and others.
 ===Other Notes===