Bloodfeather Condor - Revision history

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Helix at 04:12, 16 May 2018

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Helix: THE DANG IMAGE WORKS NOW

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Helix at 03:41, 16 May 2018

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 The birds stopped their feasting, looking at the huntress with glassy eyes. Then all then cackled in unison. “Girl,” one condor began, “You do not know the laws of the land. We thrive because we do what we must to survive. You die because you cling to what worked for you in a land that is not yours now.”<br>
 While the huntresses were still at a loss for words, the condor tossed a leg of the sheep towards them, relatively untouched by scavengers. Gingerly, the woman who led the outburst picked it up, taking it to the fires. It was the first substantial meal many of the clan had.<br> The next day, the huntresses sought out the condors, and fell prostrate before them. “Birds, we have wronged you. Help us survive in this land and we shall revere you.”
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 The birds stopped their feasting, looking at the huntress with glassy eyes. Then all then cackled in unison. “Girl,” one condor began, “You do not know the laws of the land. We thrive because we do what we must to survive. You die because you cling to what worked for you in a land that is not yours now.”<br>
 While the huntresses were still at a loss for words, the condor tossed a leg of the sheep towards them, relatively untouched by scavengers. Gingerly, the woman who led the outburst picked it up, taking it to the fires. It was the first substantial meal many of the clan had.<br> The next day, the huntresses sought out the condors, and fell prostrate before them. “Birds, we have wronged you. Help us survive in this land and we shall revere you.”
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 Bloodfeathers remain sexually dimorphic, with males larger than females. Surprisingly, condors have a similar dimorphism, and are the largest of their kind. Seeking to emulate their kingly size, Bloodfeathers have increased in average size since their founding. Some of their most surprising changes were their sharper senses of smell and digestive system. Compared to other tribes, Bloodfeathers have stronger versions of both, able to sniff out decaying carcasses as well as eat them safely. Stiffer tails are a result from a mutation that weakened tail muscles governing lateral motion, making Bloodfeathers' tails less likely to do sweeping motions. And, purring noises are rendered impossible due to a loss of rigidity in the larynx. The other half that causes their inability to properly pronounce normal Miqo'te vocalizations is simply cultural.<br>
-Just by nature of being an isolated clan with very little influx of members, it's a given that some traits are more often seen than others. This can be Ginger-colored hair as well as heterochromia. Skin color always tended to run a gamut between all shades, a medium brown tone being most common, but drift did not remove dark or white tones from the range of skin colors. However, after the Calamity, many members lost the tans that darkened their skin, shifting average tone of skin to a lighter color.<br>
+Just by nature of being an isolated clan with very little influx of members, it's a given that some traits are more often seen than others. This can be Ginger-colored hair as well as heterochromia. Skin color always tended to run a gamut between all shades, a medium brown tone being most common, but drift did not remove dark or white tones from the range of skin colors. However, after the Calamity, many members lost the tans that darkened their skin, shifting average tone of skin to a lighter color. Constant cloud cover and a need to stay indoors to be safely warm is what keeps many from developing tans again.<br>
-Female-identifying members are notably much more muscled and will sport short hairstyles. They have much more scarification tattoos as well as warpaint, signifying their accomplishments and standing within the tribe.
+Female-identifying members are notably much more muscled and will sport short hairstyles. They have much more scarification tattoos as well as warpaint, signifying their accomplishments and standing within the tribe. Traditionally, face, shoulders, forearms, and leg flanks were scarified, with any of aforementioned regions being painted. With Coerthas' biting cold, traditional fighting and gatherings have been adapted to be performed indoors or in deep summer, when a huntress can safely brave the weather to show off her tattoos and paints during ritual. Extensive tattoos are seen as a sign of inner strength and tolerance, and males are not really expected to get extensive scarification tattoos, opting for more complex paint markings. Extensive paint is masculine, while scars are more feminine in their culture.
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-Bloodfeathers remain sexually dimorphic, with males larger than females. Surprisingly, condors have a similar dimorphism, and are the largest of their kind. Seeking to emulate their kingly size, Bloodfeathers have increased in size since their founding. Some of their most surprising changes were their sharper senses of smell and digestive system.
+Bloodfeathers remain sexually dimorphic, with males larger than females. Surprisingly, condors have a similar dimorphism, and are the largest of their kind. Seeking to emulate their kingly size, Bloodfeathers have increased in average size since their founding. Some of their most surprising changes were their sharper senses of smell and digestive system. Compared to other tribes, Bloodfeathers have stronger versions of both, able to sniff out decaying carcasses as well as eat them safely. Stiffer tails are a result from a mutation that weakened tail muscles governing lateral motion, making Bloodfeathers' tails less likely to do sweeping motions. And, purring noises are rendered impossible due to a loss of rigidity in the larynx. The other half that causes their inability to properly pronounce normal Miqo'te vocalizations is simply cultural.<br>
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