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 ==== PC Rumors ====
-* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Vane? Aye, I met 'im. Long ways back 'fore the Calamity. Got ourselves into a good bit o' fun. Listen, forget all them tales ye heard. Ain't so hard to get on with the man, ye just got to think o' it this way. Draw a line 'cross the sand, put on one side everythin' in this world that keep Vane sailin', free, an' rich an' then on the other side put everythin' in this world 'at ain't helpin' Vane ta do none o' those things.  Right? Well everythin' on at other side? The one that ain't helpin'-- is expendable. If ye ain't got a use he'll give ye one, make ya another victim ta grow his legend, aye? So 'en it's real simple ta get on with Vane... when the chips are played an' 'em dice come down... ya best make sure ya on the side o' things helpin' Vane." - '''Captain Lemieux of the Lemieux Skytrade Company.'''</p>
+* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Vane? Aye, I met 'im. Long ways back 'fore the Calamity. Got ourselves into a good bit o' fun. Listen, forget all them tales ye heard. Ain't so hard to get on with the man, ye just got to think o' it this way. Draw a line 'cross the sand, put on one side everythin' in this world that keep Vane sailin', free, an' rich an' then on the other side put everythin' in this world 'at ain't helpin' Vane ta do none o' those things.  Right? Well everythin' on at other side? The one that ain't helpin'-- is expendable. If ye ain't got a use he'll give ye one, make ya another victim ta grow his legend, aye? So 'en it's real simple ta get on with Vane... when the chips are played an' 'em dice come down... ya best make sure ya on the side o' things helpin' Vane." - '''Captain Tristanaud Lemieux ''of the Lemieux Skytrade Company''.'''</p>
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+* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Vane? Aye, I met 'im. Long ways back 'fore the Calamity. Got ourselves into a good bit o' fun. Listen, forget all them tales ye heard. Ain't so hard to get on with the man, ye just got to think o' it this way. Draw a line 'cross the sand, put on one side everythin' in this world that keep Vane sailin', free, an' rich an' then on the other side put everythin' in this world 'at ain't helpin' Vane ta do none o' those things.  Right? Well everythin' on at other side? The one that ain't helpin'-- is expendable. If ye ain't got a use he'll give ye one, make ya another victim ta grow his legend, aye? So 'en it's real simple ta get on with Vane... when the chips are played an' 'em dice come down... ya best make sure ya on the side o' things helpin' Vane." - '''Captain Lemieux of the Lemieux Skytrade Company.'''</p>
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-* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Lemme tell ya somethin' about Vane, kid. Ya think he's born to be a conqueror of the seas? PFAH! I remember the very first day that Vane came to this den. He was just like ya, all skin and bones, head more filled with dreams than his belly was filled with food. The kid said he wanted to be a cap'n, and they laughed at him. Things don't work that way, do they, heh? To be a cap'n ya must know things that kid of his age don't. Learn, sail under the wings of the best. So he asked around to join a crew, and one eventually told the kid all he had to do was to beat the best fighters in a brawl. That Vane kid, he came day after day, and they beat the shit out of him more than once! But he had it in him, ya know. He had what it takes. He earned their respect, day after day, man after man. That's how he begun his life of piracy. Never forget that." - '''An old cap'n.'''</p>
+* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Lemme tell ya somethin' about Vane, kid. Ya think he's born to be a conqueror of the seas? PFAH! I remember the very first day that Vane came to this den. He was just like ya, all skin and bones, head more filled with dreams than his belly was filled with food. The kid said he wanted to be a cap'n, and they laughed at him. Things don't work that way, do they, heh? To be a cap'n ya must know things that kid of his age didn't. Learn, sail under the wings of the best. So he asked around to join a crew, and one eventually told the kid all he had to do was to beat the best fighters in a brawl. That Vane kid, he came day after day, and they beat the shit out of him more than once! But he had it in him, ya know. He had what it takes. He earned their respect, day after day, man after man. That's how he began his life of piracy. Never forget that." - '''An old cap'n.'''</p>
-* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Howling Vane's crew? Yeah, I'm part of it. Why did I join? Heh, did you take a good look at us? I can't tell how many times I was disgusted when I tried to join other crews: you're not elezen, you're not hyur, you're too short, you don't have boobs, you're not from that nation, you don't believe in that damn god or whatever. All that I fled from this fucking society, it's corrupting even piracy. But not him. Vane...all he asks is that you fight bare hands and prove to him that you have what it takes to survive. If you can convince him, he doesn't care where you come from and what blood you have in you. The only exception is for women. I've been told that he had to shot a female member once because the men were getting all crazy and jealous. Never saw a woman in our ship since that story." - '''A crew member.'''</p>
+* <p style="text-align: justify;">"Howling Wind Vane's crew? Yeah, I'm part of it. Why did I join? Heh, did you take a good look at us? I can't tell how many times I was disgusted when I tried to join other crews: you're not elezen, you're not hyur, you're too short, you don't have boobs, you're not from that nation, you don't believe in that damn god or whatever. All that I fled from this fucking society, it's corrupting even piracy. But not him. Vane...all he asks is that you fight bare hands and prove to him that you have what it takes to survive. If you can convince him, he doesn't care where you come from and what fucking blood you have in you. The only exception is for women. I've been told that he had to shot a female member once because the men were getting all crazy and jealous. Never saw a woman in our ship since that story." - '''A crew member.'''</p>
-* <p style="text-align: justify;">"That fucking asshole thinks he can just go into the den and rule everyone like a king or something, but I tell you, we're all free and fuck him, fuck Vane and his made-up reputation. I don't care what they say, that man is a plague and one day we'll be rid of him. All he cares for is his fucking name!." - '''A bitter rival.'''</p>
+* <p style="text-align: justify;">"That fucking asshole thinks he can just go into the den and rule everyone like a king or something, but I tell you, we're all free and...fuck him, fuck Vane and his made-up reputation. I don't care what they say, that man is a plague and one day we'll be rid of him. All he cares for is his fucking name!." - '''A bitter rival.'''</p>
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 * <p style="text-align: justify;">"Be a sea pirate for so long and never getting caught, he must have quite a hell of a hideout. There are many seas we would not dare to sail, too difficult to navigate, or shores crowded with deadly creatures. I bet captain Vane settled in one of those islands no one whould risk their life to reach." - '''A limsean captain.'''</p>
 * <p style="text-align: justify;">"Honest, I swear it was him! He was mad at two men, I was there, I heard them. I eavesdropped the conversation. He was like "I told ya to guard the crates and ya managed to have one stolen. I gave ya one fuckin' job, just one fuckin' easy job and ya fucked it!" and they were like begging for their sorry ass. So he took his pistol, ya know, pointed it to one of the guy and said something like "Are ya a useless fuckin' guard or just a fool?" and that guy said he was sorry, that he fucked it and would try to fix it, catch the thief and all. So the captain, he just stated "Then ya're useless and ya're fucking our reputation", blast that guy's brain, and then pointed the pistol to the other one. "So, are ya useless too?" he asked, and the guy said no. So he shot him too. "I can't allow fools to hinder my reputation either" he said. He saw me. Smiled. And just walked away!" - '''A traveling merchant.'''</p>
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 '''Clothing:''' <p style="text-align: justify;"> As Captain Vane, she usualy wears long dark brown coats with an ishgardian pistol in her belt. She has a tricorn hat symbolizing her position and an eye-patch hiding part of a scar obviously made by a blade. She carries a 2-handed sword with her, crafted like wings, almost as thin as a rapier, from which emanates a ghostly glow and produces a howling murmur.</p>
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 The man tried to mutter something but Vane interrupted him abruptly. "What ? Are ya sayin' something? Speak up, boy. Louder. Louder, I can't hear ya." Vane grabbed him and forced him to stand on his feet, putting his arm around his waist as he made him face his own crew. With his other hand he unsheated a dagger. "I said louder." He plunged the blade into the man's flesh and his cry of pain died in his throat. "Louder. Cry." The man's scream escaped his lips as blood flowed from the wound. "Cry for help." Vane thrusted the weapon in its flesh. Again. And again. The scream filled the air untill the body laid flat on the floor. Vane cleaned the dagger on the dead man's jacket, before his one eye stared intensely at the sailors. A deadly silent fell on the seas, and only the unnatural howling of Vane's blade could he now heard amongst the clashing of the waves. </p>
-<p style="text-align: justify;"> "Now, ya have a choice. Everyone of ya is a slave. A servant to the city-states. Oppressed, blinded, chained. Yar slave driver is dead. Ya may now chose to live like a free man, or die like a dog. I can free ya, one way or another... If ya chose to stand up and join the nation of the free men, then ya'll have to fight for it, 'cause one thing that angers me is cowards and weak bitches thinking they can join my crew just because they want to live. There's not room for everyone, ya'll have to -earn- it with yar bare fists. As for the others, they'll make a good example. I'll hang ya with yar guts on throw yar bodies on the shores for everyone to see that none can mess with pirates and get away with it." </p>
+<p style="text-align: justify;"> "Now, ya have a choice. Everyone of ya is a slave. A servant to the city-states. Oppressed, blinded, chained. Yar slave driver is dead. Ya may now chose to live like a free man, or die like a dog. I can free ya, one way or another... If ya chose to stand up and join the nation of the free men, then ya'll have to fight for it, 'cause one thing that angers me is cowards and weak bitches thinking they can join me crew just because they want to live. There's not room for everyone, ya'll have to -earn- it with yar bare fists. As for the others, they'll make a good example. I'll hang ya with yar guts on throw yar bodies on the shores for everyone to see that none can mess with pirates and get away with it." </p>
 Some would usualy dare to stand up. And amongst them very few survived the trials. But those who did were now standing by Vane's side, butchering the others, flooding ships with their blood, and taking what was theirs. What they deserved and earned by their own -respectable- work. "One day", Vane thought, "I will make a nation where all free men would gather. Fuck their laws. Fuck their rules. Fuck the city-states. I am free and I live by my Code."}}
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 '''Demeanor:'''  <p style="text-align: justify;"> Charlie really enjoys wearing masks. She likes playing different roles to roam in the city-states and resell her stolen goods to anyone naive enough to trust her. After all, if they are stupid enough to be cheated then they deserve it. When she acts like a travelling merchant (Archival Meanie), she would be friendly and warm to everyone, putting a smile on her lips and giving all of them compassionnate look and understanding nods. She would always try to establish the kind of profile of the people she talks to, and tells that person what she wants to hear, what she needs to her to be convinced to do what Charlies wants. And it's all part of her game.</p>
-'''Nature:''' <p style="text-align: justify;"> Charlie has the soul of a revolutionary. She is angry. Dissapointed. She feels betrayed by the civilization which took everything from her when she was a little girl, small and helpless. She feels betrayed by the laws of the city-states and their misconception of justice. She feels betrayed by the disgusting hypocrisy of the people. So she decided to live a life of freedom where she would be the one taking what she wanted from all of these pigs. With time, she begun to enjoy cheating them. She enjoys making them suffer, putting their meaningless life to an end in the most spectacular and aweful ways. She enjoys it and she thinks she deserves the right to deliver this "justice". She follows the rule of "the smartest and strongest win, the other may die like I want to."</p>
+'''Nature:''' <p style="text-align: justify;"> Charlie has the soul of a revolutionary. She is angry. Dissapointed. She feels betrayed by the civilization which took everything from her when she was a little girl, small and helpless. She feels betrayed by the laws of the city-states and their misconception of justice. She feels betrayed by the disgusting hypocrisy of the people. So she decided to live a life of freedom where she would be the one taking what she wanted from all of these pigs. With time, she begun to enjoy cheating them. She enjoys making them suffer, putting their meaningless life to an end in the most spectacular and aweful ways. She enjoys it and she thinks she deserves the right to deliver this "justice". She follows the rule of "the smartest and strongest win, the other may die like I want to." Moreover, she likes violence, and enjoys the heat of a good fight.</p>
 '''Trope:''' <p style="text-align: justify;"> She considers herself as an example of freedom. And as an example she would do anything to make-up a good reputation, and by that she means a reputation so legendary, so filled with awe and unbelieavle tales that everyone would sing songs on Captain's Vane crimes and message. As a matter of fact, she spends a lot of time trying to find new ways of making people speak of her, and gradually inspiring other people to follow her path out of the oppression. She dreams of establishing a free nation where pirates could gather and live as they want to.</p>
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 '''Clothing:''' <p style="text-align: justify;"> As Captain Vane, she usualy wears long dark brown coats with an ishgardian pistol in her belt. She has a tricorn hat symbolizing her position and an eye-patch hiding part of a scar obviously made by a blade. She carries a 2-handed sword with her, crafted like wings, almost as thin as a rapier, from which emanates a ghostly glow and produces a howling murmur.</p>
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-'''<p style="text-align: justify;"> Charlie has a problem with authority. Justice is something she stopped believing in since the death of her mother. She failed to understand how men could live by following the rules, even though it was only making them suffer and die like rats in the streets. The only law she follows is the law of the strongest, and she's done believing in the lies of a civilization she dims as hypocrite and weak.
+'''<p style="text-align: justify;"> Charlie has a problem with authority. Justice is something she stopped believing in since the death of her mother. She failed to understand how men could live by following the rules, even though it was only making them suffer and die like rats in the streets. The only law she follows is the law of the strongest, and she's done believing in the lies of a civilization she dims as hypocrite and weak. As a matter of fact, she would challenge anyone trying to have the slightest control over her. If anyone tries to tell her of to do something, she's likely to reply with violence.
-Charlie also has a huge problem with men. She's disgusted by most of them, and their attitude towards women. She's disgusted by what it means to be a woman in her mind, what it represents in her life. With what happened to her mother, she has always thought that men could abuse women without being judged or punished for that. She never wanted to face these problems, and she keeps thinking that being a woman is a weakness in such a violent and harsh world. She keeps thinking men are almost all hypocrites seeking physical pleasures. As a matter of fact, she also despises any woman who lets men have power over them.
+Charlie also has a huge problem with men. She's disgusted by most of them, and their attitude towards women. She's disgusted by what it means to be a woman in her mind, what it represents in her life. With what happened to her mother, she has always thought that men could abuse women without being judged or punished for that. She never wanted to face these problems, and she keeps thinking that being a woman is a weakness in such a violent and harsh world. She keeps thinking men are almost all hypocrites seeking physical pleasures. As a matter of fact, she also despises any women who let men have power over them. In her state of mind, if you are a victim, you deserve it. She would not be more merciful with women because of this, quite the contrary in fact.
 She also thinks Ishgard is a city-state of corruption, which she would gladly set free by selling her goods with cut-prices to all who wants to fight the current system and differences between the lowborns and the nobleborns.</p>'''
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 ''' <p style="text-align: justify;"> Charlie is a woman and she considers being a woman is a weakness in the world she's living in. That is why she thinks she needs to conceal the truth, it is her greatest secret and only one person knows it so far. She would do anything to keep it that way, as she thinks her reputation could be greatly hindered if people starting picturing the dreadful voidborn Vane as a girl. She fears people would stop respecting her, that her intimidating power would wither, and that would make her even more violent and crooked.</p>
-<p style="text-align: justify;"> As a matter of fact, after what happened to her mother she considers most of the men as pigs. She's disgusted by them if it must get physical she must dominate them. She would not bend to any one of them and would never let one of them have power over her.</p>
+<p style="text-align: justify;"> As a matter of fact, after what happened to her mother she considers most of the men as pigs. She's disgusted by them, and if it must get physical she must dominate them, or else she's likely to get violent as a reaction to her worst fear, "being under control". She would not bend to any one of them and would never let one of them have power over her.</p>
 <p style="text-align: justify;">She is a gambler. She likes playing very dangerous games, just because she thinks she is so smart and she'll never be caught. That leds her to put her life at stake just to enjoy the pleasure of feeling so great.</p>
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 ! <div align="left" style="font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#000000;" size="2">'''Diane Aven'''</font>  '''(''' <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">✖</font> Deceased ''')'''  -  '''Charlotte's mother'''</div>
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-| <div style="font-size:12px; font-family:Georgia"><p style="text-align: justify;">'''The system's victim:''' Diane was Charlotte's mother, a maid serving a lord of a minor house in Ishgard. He raped her, she feel pregnant and he didn't want to aknowledge the child. He put a roasy in her belongings, accused her of thievery and she was dimed and executed for heresy.</p></div>
+| <div style="font-size:12px; font-family:Georgia"><p style="text-align: justify;">'''The system's victim:''' Diane was Charlotte's mother, a maid serving a lord of a minor house in Ishgard. He raped her, she fell pregnant and he didn't want to aknowledge the child. He put an heretic rosary in her belongings, accused her of thievery, and she was dimed and executed for heresy.</p></div>
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 ! <div align="left" style="font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#000000;" size="2">'''Theodore Aven'''</font>  '''(''' <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">✖</font> Deceased ''')'''  -  '''Charlotte's father'''</div>
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-| <div style="font-size:12px; font-family:Georgia"><p style="text-align: justify;">'''The system's slave:''' Theodore was a cobbler and the loving father of Charlotte. He tried to raise her as he could, as Diane spent so much time working she would barely see her daughter. He died of malnutrition and sickness in the Brume while Charlotte was holding his hand.</p></div>
+| <div style="font-size:12px; font-family:Georgia"><p style="text-align: justify;">'''The system's slave:''' Theodore was a cobbler and the loving father of Charlotte. He tried to raise her as he could, as Diane spent so much time working she would barely see her daughter. He died of malnutrition and sickness in the Brume while little Charlotte was holding his hand.</p></div>
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