Chi Chibi - Revision history

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 === ''Family''<br/> ===
-Chi is an only child, having been sired by Bibiki Chibi, a prominent member of ''"The Passage of Rivers."''<br/><br/>As per custom; Chi was boarded, at an early age, at the prestigious ''Thaliak Theologian Academy of Higher Learning''. He's not seen, nor had communications with his biological parents since that time (a not-so-uncommon practice for sons & daughters of ''The Passage's'' members). One's studious dedication to Thaliak and scholarly work is a prized asset of any devotee, thus bearing little time to develop a 'relationship' with one's kin.<br/><br/>Thaliak serves has Chi's counselor, advisor and mentor. Fulfilling all the roles that any parents would for their children. When Chi is in need guidance, he need only to open a book and beseech his deity. There, will he be provided his answers.
+Chi is an only child, having been sired by Bibiki Chibi, a prominent member of ''"The Passage of Rivers."''<br/><br/>As per custom; Chi was boarded, at an early age, at the prestigious ''Thaliak Theologian Academy of Higher Learning''. He's not seen, nor had communications with his biological parents since that time (a not-so-uncommon practice for sons & daughters of ''The Passage's'' members). One's studious dedication to Thaliak and scholarly work is a prized asset of any devotee, thus bearing little time to develop a 'relationship' with one's kin.<br/><br/>Thaliak serves has Chi's counselor, advisor and mentor. Fulfilling all the roles that any parents would for their children. When Chi is in want of guidance, he need only to open a book and beseech his deity. There, will he be provided his answers.
 === ''Friends''<br/> ===

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 Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.
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 === ''Hobbies / Talents''<br/> ===
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 === ''Family''<br/> ===
-Chi is and only child, having been sired by Bibiki Chibi, a prominent member of "The Passage of Rivers."<br/><br/>As per custom, Chi was boarded at an early age at the prestigious Thaliak Theologian Academy of Higher Learning. He's not seen, nor had communications with his biological parents since that time (a not-so-uncommon practice for sons & daughters of The Passage's members). Ones studious dedication to Thaliak and scholarly work is a prized asset of any devotee, bearing little time to develop a 'relationship' with one's kin.<br/><br/>Thaliak serves has Chi's counselor, advisor and mentor. Fulfilling all the roles that any parents would, for their children. When Chi is in need guidance, he need only to open a book and beseech his deity. There, will he be provided his answers.
+Chi is an only child, having been sired by Bibiki Chibi, a prominent member of ''"The Passage of Rivers."''<br/><br/>As per custom; Chi was boarded, at an early age, at the prestigious ''Thaliak Theologian Academy of Higher Learning''. He's not seen, nor had communications with his biological parents since that time (a not-so-uncommon practice for sons & daughters of ''The Passage's'' members). One's studious dedication to Thaliak and scholarly work is a prized asset of any devotee, thus bearing little time to develop a 'relationship' with one's kin.<br/><br/>Thaliak serves has Chi's counselor, advisor and mentor. Fulfilling all the roles that any parents would for their children. When Chi is in need guidance, he need only to open a book and beseech his deity. There, will he be provided his answers.
 === ''Friends''<br/> ===
-New to the unfamiliar land of Eorzea, Chi has met will little time to form lasting bonds. But he consciously considers all whom desire mastery, in any field of study, to be his 'friends.'
+New to the unfamiliar land of Eorzea, Chi has met with little time to form lasting bonds. But he consciously considers all whom desire mastery, in any field of study, to be his 'friends.'
 === ''Enemies''<br/> ===
-Chi has met with little opposition in his travels. Nothing noteworthy to deem as a primary enemy, thus far.
+Chi has encountered little opposition in his travels. Nothing noteworthy to deem as a primary enemy, thus far.
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 == <span style="color:#0000cd">Rumors</span><br/> ==
-Chi has little interests in rumors. However;&nbsp; speculations that lead to facts are worth pursuing.
+The pious lifestyle of a Disciple of Thaliak bears little interests in ''rumors''. However;&nbsp; speculations that lead to facts are worth pursuing.

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 Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.
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 === ''Hobbies / Talents''<br/> ===

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 === ''Dislikes''<br/> ===
-Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.<br/>
+Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.
 === ''Hobbies / Talents''<br/> ===
-Chi can squeeze into tight spaces. Though he considers that more a consequence of his races small size, over being an actual talent.<br/><br/>He is a fast reader! But so to is required of all student who are institutionalized at the Halls of Ivy. So Chi doesn't consider that to be a talent either.<br/><br/>Upon further contemplation, Chi feels that his voracity with sweets is worthy of note. None could devour a dozen Ginger Cookies as fast as him!
+Chi can squeeze into tight spaces. Though he considers that more a consequence of his race's small size, rather than being an actual talent.<br/><br/>He is a fast reader! But so to is required of all students who are institutionalized at the ''Halls of Ivy''. So Chi doesn't consider that to be a talent either.<br/><br/>Upon further contemplation, Chi feels that his voracity with sweets is worthy of note. None could devour a dozen Ginger Cookies as fast as he!

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 === ''Dislikes''<br/> ===
-Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.<br/>===
+Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.<br/>
 === ''Hobbies / Talents''<br/> ===

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 === ''Likes''<br/> ===
-Sweets – Chi has an irrational desire to gobble up tasty treats!<br/>Rivers – Chi feels in harmony with his deity, sitting in or near a river.<br/>Books – Diligent study helps him commune with his god.<br/>Alchemy – All the calculations, hypotheses, study & experimentations excites him!
+Sweets – Chi has an irrational desire to gobble up tasty treats!<br/>Rivers – Chi feels in harmony with his deity, sitting in or near a river.<br/>Books – Diligent study helps him commune with his god.<br/>Alchemy – The calculations, hypotheses, study & experimentations are quite exciting!
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 === ''Dislikes''<br/> ===
-Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the kind that bite!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.<br/>===
+Mushrooms (fungus of any sort) – Especially the ''bitey'' kind of fungi!<br/>Noisy People – They are an inconvenient distraction to his studies.<br/>Alcohol – Chi grimaces at the ramifications that ''that'' chemical has on the minds of its imbibers.<br/>===
 === ''Hobbies / Talents''<br/> ===

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 }} {{Character-stub}}
-''<span style="color:#696969">'''<u>Namesday</u>&nbsp;:'''</span>''
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 th Sun of the 3rd Astral Moon
-''<span style="color:#696969">'''<u>Age</u>&nbsp;:'''</span>''
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 years
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+<span style="color:#000080">'''''<u>Homeland</u>&nbsp;:'''''</span>
 Sharlayan
-''<span style="color:#696969">'''<u>Affiliations</u>&nbsp;:'''</span>''
+<span style="color:#000080">'''''<u>Affiliations</u>&nbsp;:'''''</span>
 Thaliak Theologian Academy of Higher Learning (aka ''"Halls of Ivy"'')
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 Scions of the Seventh Dawn
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+<span style="color:#000080">'''''<u>Deity</u>:'''''</span>
 [[File:Thaliak symbol.jpg]]
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 Thaliak, the Scholar
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+<span style="color:#000080">'''''<u>Primary Disciplines</u>'''&nbsp;:''</span>
 Alchemy, Arcanist, Conjurer
-''<span style="color:#696969">'''<u>Future Aspirations</u>'''&nbsp;:</span>''
+<span style="color:#000080">'''''<u>Future Aspirations</u>'''&nbsp;:''</span>
 Mastery of all Disciplines of Magic, particular focus on Scholar
 == <span style="color:#0000cd">Overview </span><br/> ==

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 ''<span style="color:#696969">'''<u>Deity</u>:'''</span>''
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 Thaliak, the Scholar