Ebenezer Locklear - Revision history

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Faulkonn at 16:16, 12 November 2020

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Faulkonn at 17:34, 11 January 2020

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Faulkonn: /* Armours */

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‎Armours

Faulkonn: /* Armours */

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‎Armours

Faulkonn: /* Visible Items */

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‎Visible Items

Faulkonn: /* Casual Attire */

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‎Casual Attire

Faulkonn: /* Armours */

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‎Armours

Faulkonn: /* Voice Claim */

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‎Voice Claim

Faulkonn: /* Appearance */

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‎Appearance

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 {{Infobox-TMI
 |image = Locklear_Ref.jpeg
 |birthname = Earnest Gillead Luravoix.
 |nicknames = Doc, Doctor, Lock.

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 {{Infobox-TMI
 |image = Locklear_Ref.jpeg
-|birthname = Ebenezer Gillead Luravoix-Locklear.
+|knownname = Ebenezer Locklear.
-|nicknames = Doc, Doctor, Locky.
+|birthname = Earnest Gillead Luravoix.
 |age = Unknown.
-|nameday = 31st Sun of the 2nd Astral Moon.
+|nameday = 30th Sun of the 2nd Astral Moon.
 |birthplace = Unknown.
 |race = Elezen (Mostly).
-|alignment = Chaotic Good.
+|alignment = Lawful Neutral/Lawful Evil.
 |citizenship = Ul'dahn (Honorary/Requited).
 |guardian = Thaliak, the Scholar.
-|height =
+|height = Seven Fulm, Two Ilm (7'2").
-|weight =
+|weight = Mildly Underweight (exact weight unknown).
-|physique = Toned, though not overly muscular.
+|physique = Lithe, Lightly Muscled (Dancer's Build).
-|hair = Copper-red.
+|hair = Grey-White. Occasionally dyed copper.
 |eyes = Golden, serpentine pupils.
 |skin = Fair tone, heavily scarred.
 |facialfeatures = Almost serpentine eyes, unnatural of an Elezen. A scar rests over his right eye.
 |tattoos = Garlean Empire's emblem on the back of his neck, hidden beneath his hair.
-|piercings =
+|piercings = None Currently.
 |scars = Littered with them. Lashes across his back/shoulders.
 |clothing = Usually in darker clothes, suits or Doctor's work clothes.
-|keywords = Neighbourhood madman. Kind and caring Doctor.
+|keywords = Selfless; Caring; Knowledgeable.
 |hobbies = Studying, mostly.
 |likes = Aiding those in need, fine wines, company and conversation.
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 |profession = Doctor, specialises in mental health.
 |soulstone = Does not possess one ICly currently.
-|combat = A Thaumaturge in practice, Locklear deals magical damage to assailants.
+|combat = A Voidmancer (thaumaturge) and Machinist, deals both magical and ranged physical damage to assailants.
 |advantages = Limber, quick on his feet, surprisingly flexible.
 |limitations = Not built for hand to hand combat.
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 |weapon1 = Two handed staff used to channel his spells or handgonne, depending on magical capability at the time.
 |weapon2 = Mind-games. He often torments others with their darkest fears once he picks up on what they may be.
-|armor = Usually in a simple set of dark coloured, lightweight leather armour. The pouches adorning his back, being re-purposed weapons sheathes, often carry medicinal supplies.
+|armor = Changes from day to day. Often in either blacks or whites. Almost always with pouches for medicinal items.
 |timezone = UCT+8 (Perth, Australia)
 |server = Mateus (Sometimes visiting Balmung)
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 == Combat Skills ==
-Locklear's combative skills consist primarily of the magics of a [https://ffxiv.consolegameswiki.com/wiki/Thaumaturge Thaumaturge], specialising as a [https://ffxiv.consolegameswiki.com/wiki/Black_Mage Black Mage], dealing consistent damage revolving around the elements of fire and frost, as well as the occasional lightning spell to meddle with his opponent's nerves and motor skills.
+Locklear's combative skills consist primarily of the magics of a [https://ffxiv.consolegameswiki.com/wiki/Thaumaturge Thaumaturge], specialising as a [https://ffxiv.consolegameswiki.com/wiki/Black_Mage Black Mage], or Voidmancer specifically, dealing consistent damage revolving around the more easily controlled elements of fire and frost.
 Whenever he struggles with his magics, as can happen from time to time with occurrences in his past, he will switch from casting magics to instead using a handgonne, being specialised in the past as a [https://ffxiv.consolegameswiki.com/wiki/Machinist Machinist], the ammunition of such being prewarded with magics to enhance the damage output.
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 Items usually held within the re-purposed weapons sheathes that the Doctor uses as bags.
 *Bandages, assorted.
-A selection of bandages, from thin, short ones for wrapping hands or other small areas, to pieces of cloth large enough to be used as a sling or wrapped around a splint. All neatly folded, tied up with string, so they don't unravel and become tangled. Often held in the first (uppermost) bag upon his back.
+A selection of bandages, from thin, short ones for wrapping hands or other small areas, to pieces of cloth large enough to be used as a sling or wrapped around a splint. All neatly folded, tied up with string, so they don't unravel and become tangled.
 *Potions, assorted.
-From antidotes for common poisons, eye-drops to ease irritation of the eyes, to general salves and healing potions. Many of these are made by the Doctor himself, and stored in the second bag that rests against his back.
+From antidotes for common poisons, eye-drops to ease irritation of the eyes, to general salves and healing potions. Many of these are made by the Doctor himself.
 *Surgical Tools, assorted.
-The typical instruments used to emergency surgery, including scalpels, forceps, needles and suturing threads. All of these are kept in the third bag resting against his back.
+The typical instruments used to emergency surgery, including scalpels, forceps, needles and suturing threads.
 *Surgical Attire.
-Usually carrying no more than two of each at a time, excluding gloves, are masks, smocks and hair nets, all neatly folded and bound in string alike the bandages, always immaculately clean and kept in the third bag, alongside the surgical tools.
+Usually carrying no more than two of each at a time, excluding gloves, are masks, smocks and hair nets, all neatly folded and bound in string alike the bandages, always immaculately clean, kept alongside the surgical tools.
 *Rations, assorted.
-The final items, not really worthy of note, are simple rations that keep the Doctor fed while out in the field. A water canteen, dried fruits and jerky meats, the rations consist mostly of long-life foods, as well as some beans and lentils that he is able to cook whensoever the opportunity presents itself. These are often kept in the fourth, and final, bag that the Doctor carries about.
+The final items, not really worthy of note, are simple rations that keep the Doctor fed while out in the field. A water canteen, dried fruits and jerky meats, the rations consist mostly of long-life foods, as well as some beans and lentils that he is able to cook whensoever the opportunity presents itself.
 === External Items ===

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 Note: This profile is fairly large.
-'Smaller' version: [https://locklear.carrd.co/ Locklear's Carrd]
+'Smaller' version: [https://doctor.carrd.co/ Locklear's Carrd]
 Even smaller version: [https://refsheet.net/Faulkonn/Locklear Locklear's Ref Sheet]

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 Strapped upon his back are four identical re-purposed weapons sheathes that he uses as bags to store an array of items (to be listed in "Miscellaneous Items").
-[[File:MagiArmor-Front.png|thumb|Magitek Conversion Armor (front view)]]
+[[File:MagiArmor-Front.png|thumb|Magitek Conversion Armour (front view)]]
-[[File:MagiArmor-Back.png|thumb|Magitek Conversion Armor (rear view)]]
+[[File:MagiArmor-Back.png|thumb|Magitek Conversion Armour (rear view)]]
 ===Magitek Conversion Armor===
 A set Locklear has chosen to use more often out in the field as of late, consist of black and white tones, laced with Magitek machinery to aide in his work. Lacework across the back and shoulders draw dark Aether directly from his body through contact with the scarring he bares, then converted into light Aether and channelled through either his mechanical arm or his Magitek stave to heal others akin to how a Conjurer might. This, however, tends to have a detrimental effect on the Doctor, causing him need for rest to recuperate his Aetheric supplies.

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 Locklear's armours can consist of any number of sets. Thus far, two have been detailed below, with references provided.
-[[File:Doctor-Locklear.png|thumb|Doctor Locklear in his usual armours.]]
+[[File:Doctor-Locklear.png|thumb|Doctor Locklear in his 'Strife' armours.]]
 ==='Strife' Recovery Gear===
 Locklear's usual armours consist of dark-toned, often black, lightweight leather.

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 Perhaps the most obvious of the things he carries, as they perch upon the bridge of his nose more often than not, most would assume that he requires these to see. However, his sight is perfectly fine even without the thin-framed spectacles, so perhaps he only wears them for style?
 *Wolf's Head badge.
-Only when wearing his darker leather armours: Upon his left spaulder, as stated in his armours, it seems to be built of simple metals, with a ring being held within the maw of the beast's visage. Often, Locklear would use this ring to clip small items onto whenever he is working, whether it be to hang a small towelette, hold his keys to a certain piece of machinery he calls 'Millenium', or other such items, to free his hands for work.
+Only when wearing his 'Strife' Recovery armours: Upon his left spaulder, as stated in his armours, it seems to be built of simple metals, with a ring being held within the maw of the beast's visage. Often, Locklear would use this ring to clip small items onto whenever he is working, whether it be to hang a small towelette, hold his keys to a certain piece of machinery he calls 'Millenium', or other such items, to free his hands for work.
 *Canteen, often full.
 A simple, metal canteen rests at Locklear's right hip, clipped to the belt. The contents contains an unusual scent, but is far from alcoholic. He never offers this particular drink to another, but does not often give the reasons as to why.

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 == Casual Attire ==
-Although it is uncommon to see Locklear out of his usual armours, especially while he is out on the field, it is not entirely improbable.
+Although it was once uncommon to see Locklear out of his usual armours, especially while he is out on the field, it has become more likely to see the man in more casual attire, especially when around the major cities.
 Whenever he chooses to wear something more casual than his typical leather armours, he tends to dress in a myriad of outfits, from suits fit for ceremonies and meetings, more casual attires such as long-sleeved shirts and slacks, or even heavy-woollen robes. The latter is more common for him to wear should he have need to visit the colder regions of Eorzea.

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 These are mostly personal references and things I find suit the character, such as a voice claim, and music that suits combat, idle, or casual settings.
 === Voice Claim ===
-[https://youtu.be/a4ugVkQUboM Crispin Freeman as Alucard].
+[https://youtu.be/X5EusP_tEK8 Stan Rogers.].
 === Motion Claim ===

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 [[File:Locklear-Prosthetic.jpg|thumb|Locklear's magi-mechanical (Magitek) arm, oft hidden beneath a thick leather glove.]]
 [[File:Lashing-Scars.png|thumb|These scars, from whips and the likes, cover the ''entirety'' of Locklear's back and shoulders.]]
-Standing at about average height for an Elezen man, Locklear is nothing to gawk at at first glance.
+Standing slightly above average height for an Elezen man; at seven fulm, two ilm; Locklear is nothing really to gawk at at first glance.
 With fair facial features rather typical of an Elezen, his gaze usually calm if not a little calculating due to his studious nature, the golden-hued orbs bare pupils that are unnatural for most Elezen, with an almost serpentine appearance to them, often gazing from behind a pair of thin-framed spectacles.