Edelin Sharp - Revision history

T'aeryl at 04:33, 2 May 2016

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RPrambles at 16:20, 5 January 2015

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RPrambles at 21:08, 2 December 2014

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RPrambles at 04:54, 2 December 2014

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RPrambles at 04:42, 2 December 2014

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RPrambles at 03:15, 30 November 2014

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RPrambles at 03:12, 30 November 2014

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RPrambles at 05:53, 29 November 2014

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RPrambles at 05:30, 28 November 2014

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RPrambles at 04:47, 28 November 2014

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 ===<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;">Biography</div>===
-Edelin was born to a scholar and soldier in Ishgard and lived a life much like any other, until her mother's desertion brought shame upon her family. Her father, angry and heartbroken, disavowed any knowledge of his wife and continued raising Edelin alone, determined to impress upon her the importance of loyalty and duty above everything else. Edelin took the lessons to heart, becoming the model citizen. Often she comes under ridicule and suspicion but she doesn't let it deter her, needing to prove that she can and will succeed to herself as much as to others.
+Edelin is a native Ishgardian, born to a respectable family, until her mother deserted. She and her father were shunned and bit by bit stripped of their standing until they lived in a bolthole in the Brume. Her father, angry and heartbroken, disavowed any knowledge of his wife and continued raising Edelin alone, determined to impress upon her the importance of loyalty and duty above everything else. Edelin took the lessons to heart, becoming a model citizen. But even that doesn't earn a deserter's daughter a place in Ishgard's army. It took her months of stubborn insistence and begging for Sir Grimmia Dailemont to train her before the knight yielded. Often she comes under ridicule and suspicion but she doesn't let it deter her, needing to prove that she can and will succeed to herself as much as to others.
-Recently she learned that her mother is alive and well in Eorzea. With her father's reluctant permission she's gone to look for the deserter and hopefully bring her back to face justice for her crime.
+Recently she learned that her mother is alive and well in Eorzea. With her father's reluctant permission she went to look for the deserter and hopefully bring her back to face justice for her crime. She didn't find the answers she expected, and is now living with her mother while she tries to figure out what to do next.
 ===<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;">Appearance & Personality</div>===
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 Edelin keeps her scale armor in pristine condition and her hair kept back in a tight ponytail; a few locks always manage to escape, much to her annoyance. When she's not training she dresses simply.
-She's fairly aggressive and strict with a rather linear mind, sarcasm often escaping her grasp. She has a short temper and will rise to any challenge given to her. Her loyalty to Ishgard and devotion to Halone are the most important things in her life. It's not often she lets herself relax and have fun.
+She's fairly blunt and strict with a rather linear mind, sarcasm often escaping her grasp. She has a short temper and will rise to any challenge given to her. Her loyalty to Ishgard and devotion to Halone are the most important things in her life. It's not often she lets herself relax and have fun.
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 : <font style="color:#ECCA67;" size="3">■</font> Hot chocolate
 : <font style="color:#ECCA67;" size="3">■</font> Exercise
-: <font style="color:#ECCA67;" size="3">■</font> Donuts
+: <font style="color:#ECCA67;" size="3">■</font> Reading
 <td style="vertical-align: top;font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica;"><h3><span class="mw-headline">
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 : <font style="color:#DFD59E;" size="3">■</font> Cowardice
 : <font style="color:#DFD59E;" size="3">■</font> Dragons
-: <font style="color:#DFD59E;" size="3">■</font> Dirt
+: <font style="color:#DFD59E;" size="3">■</font> Heat
 <td style="vertical-align: top;font-size:9pt;font-family:Helvetica;"><h3><span class="mw-headline">
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 :<font style="color:#CACFA5;" size="3">■</font> Cold weather survival
 :<font style="color:#CACFA5;" size="3">■</font> Chess
-:<font style="color:#CACFA5;" size="3">■</font>
+:<font style="color:#CACFA5;" size="3">■</font> Studying history
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 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #aac5b4;">◢ PC Rumors (Rumors from the character's of other players)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#aac5b4;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#aac5b4;" size="3">■</font> "The young Sharp has more drive and passion than a dozen of the knights in my command. Little wonder why." - Grimmia Dailemont
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;"><center>Relations</center></div></span></h3>
 : <center><font style="color:#F02311;" size="3">♥</font> Significant Other&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> Family  &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font style="color:#9EC60B;" size="3">●</font> Friends&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;  <font style="color:#C24640;" size="3">●</font> Avoids</center>
-<font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> [[Eloise Sharp]] - Edelin's absentee mother, who deserted Ishgard and is assumed to have died in the Calamity. The only thing Edelin kept of her mother's is her name, determined to restore honor to it, and her chocobo Mathias.
+<font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> [[Eloise Sharp]] - Edelin's absentee mother, who deserted Ishgard and is assumed to have died in the Calamity. The only thing Edelin kept of her mother's is her name, determined to restore honor to it, and her chocobo Mathias. She's recently found that Eloise Sharp is someone other than the knight she remembers.
 <br><font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> Ferrand Ronsard - Edelin's father. A scholar of some renown, he raised her with a firm hand. It is not a warm relationship, but it is a loving one.
 <br><font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> Mathias - An old grey chocobo and Edelin's only friend. He was well trained by his previous owner and follows Edelin everywhere when not in his stable. When she's feeling low or overwhelmed she can be found hiding in there with him.
+<br><font style="color:#9EC60B;" size="3">●</font> Grimmia Dailemont - a knight of Ishgard and Edelin's mentor. Grimmia has a practical outlook on life. Sentiment does little to impress her, but Edelin's stubborn drive caught her attention.

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	Edelin was born to a scholar and soldier in Ishgard and lived a life much like any other, until her mother's desertion brought shame upon her family. Her father, angry and heartbroken, disavowed any knowledge of his wife and continued raising Edelin alone, determined to impress upon her the importance of loyalty and duty above everything else. Edelin took the lessons to heart, becoming the model citizen. Often she comes under ridicule and suspicion but she doesn't let it deter her, needing to prove that she can and will succeed to herself as much as to others.		Edelin was born to a scholar and soldier in Ishgard and lived a life much like any other, until her mother's desertion brought shame upon her family. Her father, angry and heartbroken, disavowed any knowledge of his wife and continued raising Edelin alone, determined to impress upon her the importance of loyalty and duty above everything else. Edelin took the lessons to heart, becoming the model citizen. Often she comes under ridicule and suspicion but she doesn't let it deter her, needing to prove that she can and will succeed to herself as much as to others.
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		+	Recently she learned that her mother is alive and well in Eorzea. With her father's reluctant permission she's gone to look for the deserter and hopefully bring her back to face justice for her crime.

	===<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;">Appearance & Personality</div>===		===<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;">Appearance & Personality</div>===

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 Edelin keeps her scale armor in pristine condition and her hair kept back in a tight ponytail; a few locks always manage to escape, much to her annoyance. When she's not training she dresses simply.
-She's fairly aggressive and strict with a rather linear mind, sarcasm often escaping her grasp. She has a short temper and will rise to any challenge given to her. It's not often she lets herself relax and have fun.
+She's fairly aggressive and strict with a rather linear mind, sarcasm often escaping her grasp. She has a short temper and will rise to any challenge given to her. Her loyalty to Ishgard and devotion to Halone are the most important things in her life. It's not often she lets herself relax and have fun.
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 :<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font> Stubborn
 :<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font> Single-minded
-:<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font>
+:<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font> Poor self-esteem
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;"><center>Relations</center></div></span></h3>
 : <center><font style="color:#F02311;" size="3">♥</font> Significant Other&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> Family  &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<font style="color:#9EC60B;" size="3">●</font> Friends&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;  <font style="color:#C24640;" size="3">●</font> Avoids</center>
-<font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> [[Eloise Sharp]] - Edelin's absentee mother, who deserted Ishgard and is assumed to have died in the Calamity. The only thing Edelin kept of her mother's is her name, determined to restore honor to it.
+<font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> [[Eloise Sharp]] - Edelin's absentee mother, who deserted Ishgard and is assumed to have died in the Calamity. The only thing Edelin kept of her mother's is her name, determined to restore honor to it, and her chocobo Mathias.
 <br><font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> Ferrand Ronsard - Edelin's father. A scholar of some renown, he raised her with a firm hand. It is not a warm relationship, but it is a loving one.
+<br><font style="color:#FA70BC;" size="3">♥</font> Mathias - An old grey chocobo and Edelin's only friend. He was well trained by his previous owner and follows Edelin everywhere when not in his stable. When she's feeling low or overwhelmed she can be found hiding in there with him.

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 | stat_3_value = Lancer in training
 | stat_4 = Height/Weight
-| stat_4_value = 6'0" / 170 lbs
+| stat_4_value = 5'11" / 158 lbs
 | stat_5 = Orientation
 | stat_5_value = Undecided
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 Edelin keeps her scale armor in pristine condition and her hair kept back in a tight ponytail; a few locks always manage to escape, much to her annoyance. When she's not training she dresses simply.
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 :<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font> Easily offended
 :<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font> Stubborn
-:<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font>
+:<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font> Single-minded
 :<font style="color:#C91E1E;" size="3">■</font>
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 <div style="border:0px solid; padding:8px;"><b>
 <div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #90AB76;">◢ Common Rumors (Easily overheard)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#90AB76;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#90AB76;" size="3">■</font> "Ha, the deserter's daughter. Time will tell if she's of the same ilk."
 : <font style="color:#90AB76;" size="3">■</font>
 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #F37E1D;">◢ Moderate Rumors (Moderately difficult to overhear)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#F37E1D;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#F37E1D;" size="3">■</font> "I don't think I've ever seen her smile. Even when she succeeds at something, she just nods and moves to the next goal."
 : <font style="color:#F37E1D;" size="3">■</font>

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Edelin Sharp
-| image =
+| image = Edelin_Sharp.jpg
 | imagewidth = 250
 | gender = Female
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 ===<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;">Appearance & Personality</div>===
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+Edelin keeps her scale armor in pristine condition and her hair kept back in a tight ponytail; a few locks always manage to escape, much to her annoyance. When she's not training she dresses simply.
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 | stat_6 = Relatives
 | stat_6_value = Eloise Sharp - Mother
-<br>Ferrand Ronsard - father
+Ferrand Ronsard - father
 }}