Edith Wicke - Revision history

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 Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, one of the lords of House Dzemael, sought to keep the existence of young Edith a secret, lest scandal befall his house. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as some of the more unfortunate female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.
 Now, she wanders the land of Eorzea in search of aid and employment, as she really hadn't put much thought into what to do ''after'' she was free. At first, she threw her lot in with the trading charter Callaway Holdings, where Ser Callaway instructed her upon her letters, and marksmanship. There, she met a young man named [[Justice Burke]] around Little Ladies' Day. The two quickly became more than friends. She made a misguided effort to raise funds for the company at a date auction, but the whole thing went sideways and ended with her being fired in short order.
-This quickly ended in Edith finding her way back to the streets, this time turning to Somnus after Justice disappeared from her life. Broke and destitute, she was swept off the street once more by a well-meaning Flame Captain and alchemist, who mixed her potions of dragons' blood to hasten her recovery. This had unintended effects, however, as she was of Ishgardian stock...
+This quickly ended in Edith finding her way back to the streets, this time turning to Somnus after Justice disappeared from her life. Broke and destitute, she was swept off the street once more by a well-meaning alchemist, who mixed her potions of dragons' blood to hasten her recovery. This had unintended effects, however, as she was of Ishgardian stock, and she was quickly cast out again as a 'mistake,' the alchemist not wishing to be held responsible.
 ==Personality==
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 * '''[[Justice Burke]]: (Whereabouts Unknown)'''Edith and Justice met at a Little Ladies' day party. He insisted upon calling her "Princess," out of a desire to show her her own worth. According to the traditions of Little Ladies' Day, Justice pledged himself to her as her Seneschal. Edith insisted upon calling him "Ser Burke." The two were a couple for a long while, after which Justice went off to war and was never heard from again. Edith was devastated.
 * '''[[Michael Callaway]]: (Previous)''' Ser Callaway took Edith in off of the streets, perhaps out of pity, and hired her on as a company retainer for his trading charter, Callaway Holdings. He intended to teach her to read and write, and how to fight with a rifle. After the date auction, the two never spoke again.
 ===Antagonists===
 Basically the entirety of House Dzemael. She was the favorite ''plaything'' of one of Lord Tedalgrinche's sons, and House Dzemael is offering a reward of gil to anyone who would locate and deliver their wayward servant back unto them. She is known as a wanted person in the Holy See of Ishgard.

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = Ishgard
-| race = Hyur
+| race = Hyur/Elezen Mongrel
 | clan = Midlander
 | server = Balmung
 | stat_1 = Height
-| stat_1_value = 5 fulms, 3 ilm
+| stat_1_value = 5 fulms, 2 ilm
 | stat_2 = Weight
 | stat_2_value = 98 ponze
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 | stat_6_value = Machinist
 }}
 ==History==
-Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, a nameless Hyuran Temple Knight, perished in the closing years of the Dragonsong War. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as most female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.
+Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, one of the lords of House Dzemael, sought to keep the existence of young Edith a secret, lest scandal befall his house. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as some of the more unfortunate female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.
-Now, she wanders the land of Eorzea in search of aid and employment, as she really hadn't put much thought into what to do ''after'' she was free. At first, she threw her lot in with the trading charter Callaway Holdings, where Ser Callaway instructed her upon her letters, and marksmanship, but that was not meant to last. She made a misguided effort to raise funds for the company at a date auction, but the whole thing went sideways and ended with her being fired in short order. Now, she wanders the streets of Ul'dah once again, her head full of dreams of the stars.
+Now, she wanders the land of Eorzea in search of aid and employment, as she really hadn't put much thought into what to do ''after'' she was free. At first, she threw her lot in with the trading charter Callaway Holdings, where Ser Callaway instructed her upon her letters, and marksmanship. There, she met a young man named [[Justice Burke]] around Little Ladies' Day. The two quickly became more than friends. She made a misguided effort to raise funds for the company at a date auction, but the whole thing went sideways and ended with her being fired in short order.
 ==Personality==
-Edith is an energetic, forgetful, and ditzy woman. She frequently loses her belongings, and is rather naive about the world due to her sequestered upbringing. She is not very intelligent, but makes up for it in heart and effort.
+Edith is an energetic and fiery young woman. She frequently loses her belongings, and is rather naive about the world due to her sequestered upbringing. She is not very intelligent, but makes up for it in heart and effort. She often lets her passion or feelings get the better of her, before thinking things through rationally.
 ===Family===
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 ===Friends===
-* '''[[Justice Burke]]:''' Edith and Justice met at a Little Ladies' day party. He insists upon calling her "Princess," out of a desire to show her her own worth. According to the traditions of Little Ladies' Day, Justice pledged himself to her as her Seneschal. Edith insists upon calling him "Ser Burke."
+* '''[[Justice Burke]]: (Whereabouts Unknown)'''Edith and Justice met at a Little Ladies' day party. He insisted upon calling her "Princess," out of a desire to show her her own worth. According to the traditions of Little Ladies' Day, Justice pledged himself to her as her Seneschal. Edith insisted upon calling him "Ser Burke." The two were a couple for a long while, after which Justice went off to war and was never heard from again. Edith was devastated.
 * '''[[Michael Callaway]]: (Previous)''' Ser Callaway took Edith in off of the streets, perhaps out of pity, and hired her on as a company retainer for his trading charter, Callaway Holdings. He intended to teach her to read and write, and how to fight with a rifle. After the date auction, the two never spoke again.
+* '''Reppu Hijiri:''' The Flame Captain and alchemist responsible for her draconic awakening, and is currently claiming Edith as her ward and retainer.
 ===Antagonists===
-Basically the entirety of House Dzemael. She was the favorite ''plaything'' of one of Lord Tedalgrinche's sons, and House Dzemael is offering a reward of gil to anyone who would locate and deliver their wayward servant back unto them.
+Basically the entirety of House Dzemael. She was the favorite ''plaything'' of one of Lord Tedalgrinche's sons, and House Dzemael is offering a reward of gil to anyone who would locate and deliver their wayward servant back unto them. She is known as a wanted person in the Holy See of Ishgard.
 ==Other Notes==
 I adhere very strictly to lore, but I do not mind other characters that bend lore slightly.
 I am up for nearly all kinds of RP, but I do not enjoy plotless sex. Characters that attempt to bed her randomly can expect a loaded gun in their face for the trouble. Edith is exactly as she appears in game.

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 ==Basic Info==
-Edith is a young and energetic tomboy with a past of servitude. She is new to Eorzea, and many basic concepts are foreign to her, due to her deprived upbringing.
+Edith is a young and energetic tomboy with a past of servitude. She is new to Eorzea, and many basic concepts are foreign to her, due to her deprived upbringing. She dreams of one day becoming an "Asstrolloggeyan."
 ==History==
 Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, a nameless Hyuran Temple Knight, perished in the closing years of the Dragonsong War. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as most female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.

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 Edith is a young and energetic tomboy with a past of servitude. She is new to Eorzea, and many basic concepts are foreign to her, due to her deprived upbringing.
 ==History==
-Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, a nameless Hyur Temple Knight, perished in the closing years of the Dragonsong War. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as most female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.
+Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, a nameless Hyuran Temple Knight, perished in the closing years of the Dragonsong War. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as most female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.
 Now, she wanders the land of Eorzea in search of aid and employment, as she really hadn't put much thought into what to do ''after'' she was free. At first, she threw her lot in with the trading charter Callaway Holdings, where Ser Callaway instructed her upon her letters, and marksmanship, but that was not meant to last. She made a misguided effort to raise funds for the company at a date auction, but the whole thing went sideways and ended with her being fired in short order. Now, she wanders the streets of Ul'dah once again, her head full of dreams of the stars.

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 | stat_3_value = Emerald
 | stat_4 = Age
-| stat_4_value = 19
+| stat_4_value = 23
 | stat_5 = Alignment
 | stat_5_value = True Neutral
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 Edith is a young and energetic tomboy with a past of servitude. She is new to Eorzea, and many basic concepts are foreign to her, due to her deprived upbringing.
 ==History==
-Born into servitude, for 18 long twelvemoons, the halls of Dzemael Manor were all she ever knew. There, she was mistreated as most female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape. Now, she wanders the land of Eorzea in search of aid and employment, as she really hadn't put much thought into what to do ''after'' she was free. At first, she threw her lot in with the trading charter Callaway Holdings, where Ser Callaway instructed her upon her letters, and marksmanship, but that was not meant to last. She made a misguided effort to raise funds for the company at a date auction, but the whole thing went sideways and ended with her being fired in short order. Now, she wanders the streets of Ul'dah once again...
+Edith was born in the squalor of the Brume out of wedlock to Marguerite, a servant of House Dzemael. Her father, a nameless Hyur Temple Knight, perished in the closing years of the Dragonsong War. For seventeen years, her mother raised her in the servant's quarters of the manor, where young Edith cleaned and cooked for the rest of the servants. Upon coming of age, though, she was brought into the main halls of the manor, and a twelvemoons-long nightmare began, as she was not granted leave of the building ever. There, she was mistreated as most female servants tend to be... until one day, she had enough. With little but the clothes on her back, she made her escape.
 ==Personality==
-Edith is an energetic, forgetful, and ditzy woman. She frequently loses her belongings, and is rather naive about the world due to her sequestered upbringing.
+Edith is an energetic, forgetful, and ditzy woman. She frequently loses her belongings, and is rather naive about the world due to her sequestered upbringing. She is not very intelligent, but makes up for it in heart and effort.
 ===Family===
 Edith was born out of wedlock. Her father and siblings are unknown to her.
-* '''Marguerite Wicke:''' Edith's mother. The two were separated at birth, and have not seen each other since. Marguerite is still alive, and serving House Durendaire.
+* '''Marguerite Wicke:''' Edith's mother. The two were separated at her eighteenth nameday, and have not seen each other since. Marguerite died soon after the Seventh Umbral Calamity.
 ===Friends===
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 ===Antagonists===
-Basically the entirety of House Dzemael. She was the favorite ''plaything'' of Lord Tedalgrinche's son, and House Dzemael is offering a reward of gil to anyone who would locate and deliver their wayward servant back unto them.
+Basically the entirety of House Dzemael. She was the favorite ''plaything'' of one of Lord Tedalgrinche's sons, and House Dzemael is offering a reward of gil to anyone who would locate and deliver their wayward servant back unto them.
 ==Other Notes==

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Edith Wicke
-| image = Edithwicke.png
+| image = edithwicke2.png
 | imagewidth = 250px
 | title = The Princess