Edyva Mercer - Revision history

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 <li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Powerlessness - Edyva fears more than anything that she will be unable to make a dent in the likely short life she will live in this world.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Death - Edyva has a strange relationship with death. She fears it, like everyone does, but she sees it as an inevitability. An inevitablity that she just rise above and avoid at all costs.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Death - Edyva has a strange relationship with death. She fears it, like everyone does, but she sees it as an inevitability. An inevitablity that she must rise above and avoid at all costs.</li>
 <li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">A New Calamity - Edyva not only witnessed the fall of Dalamud from Limsa Lominsa, but she has seen visions of the Calamity in her dreams, and witnessed firsthand the destruction in its wake. Deep down, she is terrified that another Calamity is inevitable, and that the rest of her days will see naught but destruction...</li>
 <li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Friendship - Edyva...does not want to make friends. She does not want to get close to people, and this fear is driven by her other fears. Powerlessness...Death...a new Calamity...what should happen to her heart if she lets people in and these terrible things happen? She can't allow that.</li>

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 | style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Apathetic - Though it does bring her some perspective, the downside of Edyva's apathy is that she rarely connects to others, and far too often she finds it impossible to understand another's perspective.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Passive - She rarely takes the initiative, going along with what her very passionate friends decide to do.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Passive - She rarely takes the initiative, going along with what her very passionate party-mates decide to do.</li>
 <li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Rebellious - Unless, of course, she is told she cannot do something, in which case, she oh most certainly will!</li>
 <li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Arrogant - She thinks herself  above the menial tasks that she must do as an adventurer. She does them anyway, of course, because they are a stepping stone to her own greatness.</li>

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-<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Chocolate</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Coffee</li>
 <li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Learning new spells</li>
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 <li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Social situations</li>
 <li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Expectations</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Being forced into undesired matters</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Nightmares</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Boredom</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Most People</li>
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 | style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Thaumaturgy - While she has only recently picked up this skill, she is a natural at manipulating Fire, Ice, and Lightning to her will.</li>
 <li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Objective - Her apathy brings her some perspective, and rarely does emotion rule her decisions.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Unafraid - This cannot exactly be called 'courage', but her morbid view of things rules her actions to the point where she does not run away if she must stand.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Courage - Unlike the courage of her party, it is her morbid view of things that rules her actions to the point where she does not run away if she must stand.</li>
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-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Exploring - He loves to see new places and folks.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Coffee - It keeps her awake and the bitterness matches her personality. She has also noticed that her flames tend to burn hotter when she's had a cup.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Chocolate - Milk, Semi-sweet, Dark, almost all kinds of cocoa are his favorite dessert, or even a snack, and it comes in so many forms... His favorite flavor, is Red Velvet.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Power - It keeps her alive and gives her the strength to temper the world around her.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Helping - Just aiding someone else in need is satisfaction enough for the farmboy.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">The Opera - Perhaps the one thing that can stir her emotions is watching an opera performance!</li>
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 | style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Thaumaturgy - While she has only recently picked up this skill, she is a natural at manipulating Fire, Ice, and Lightning to her will.</li>
 <li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Objective - Her apathy brings her some perspective, and rarely does emotion rule her decisions.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Unafraid - This cannot exactly be called 'courage', but her morbid view of things rules her actions to the point where she does not fear most things - death is inevitable anyway.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Unafraid - This cannot exactly be called 'courage', but her morbid view of things rules her actions to the point where she does not run away if she must stand.</li>
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-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Catagelophobia - Coco' is afraid sometimes, that those he cares about might ridicule him, especially without warning or reason. </li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Powerlessness - Edyva fears more than anything that she will be unable to make a dent in the likely short life she will live in this world.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Autophobia - Sure, there's nothing there in the dark that wasn't there in the light, but it still doesn't do Coco' any favors when just being alone, be it out in the open or in a room, terrifies him, to the point of carrying a stuffed animal.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Death - Edyva has a strange relationship with death. She fears it, like everyone does, but she sees it as an inevitability. An inevitablity that she just rise above and avoid at all costs.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Selenophobia - Horror stories have taught him (erroneously, or maybe not...?) that only wicked things come out under the light of the moon, creating a fear of the celestial object itself, and the idea that the Moon itself is an icon of evil.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">A New Calamity - Edyva not only witnessed the fall of Dalamud from Limsa Lominsa, but she has seen visions of the Calamity in her dreams, and witnessed firsthand the destruction in its wake. Deep down, she is terrified that another Calamity is inevitable, and that the rest of her days will see naught but destruction...</li>
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+| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Fire</li>
 <li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Chocolate</li>
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-| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Being belittled</li>
+| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Authority Figures</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Being kicked</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Social situations</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Stagnation</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Expectations</li>
 <li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Being forced into undesired matters</li>
 <li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Boredom</li>
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-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Chocobo Tending</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Painting</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Stable Maintenance</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Weaving</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Crop Harvesting</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Listening</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Cooking</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Clairvoyance</li>
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-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Gladiator's Guild Initiate</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Thaumaturge's Guild Initiate</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Menial Labor Training</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Weaver's Guild Initiate</li>
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-| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Swordsmanship - Strong arms make for a good swordsman, like the heroes in the fables he's heard.</li>
+| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Thaumaturgy - While she has only recently picked up this skill, she is a natural at manipulating Fire, Ice, and Lightning to her will.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Acceptance - Having lived a life of being told his tasks, he's come to take what he can get, and give back in kind for his efforts.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Objective - Her apathy brings her some perspective, and rarely does emotion rule her decisions.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Courageous - Call it foolishness or courage, but Coco' is willing to approach situations that others might backpedal from.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e1eae4; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #52775f; margin: 5px;">Unafraid - This cannot exactly be called 'courage', but her morbid view of things rules her actions to the point where she does not fear most things - death is inevitable anyway.</li>
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-| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Stubborn - Despite the difficulties presented, Coco' may just try to press on past them, with either borderline Herculean tenacity, or Sissyphean oblivion.</li>
+| style="vertical-align: top; background-color: #fff; border-radius: 0 0 5px 5px; padding: 1em; margin-top: 0;" | <ul style="width: 100%; list-style: none; margin-left: 0;"><li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Apathetic - Though it does bring her some perspective, the downside of Edyva's apathy is that she rarely connects to others, and far too often she finds it impossible to understand another's perspective.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Too Accepting - Often times, he just doesn't try to bargian for less work, more pay, etc etc. He just takes what's given, and does what he can.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Passive - She rarely takes the initiative, going along with what her very passionate friends decide to do.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Oblivious - Some things just go right over his head, usually because his mind is focused elsewhere entirely, and usually requiring a blunt statement.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Rebellious - Unless, of course, she is told she cannot do something, in which case, she oh most certainly will!</li>
-<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Self-Esteem - Often times, he might seek validation that he's doing just as good work as others, often worried that he's underperforming...</li>
+<li style="background-color: #efdede; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #964b4b; margin: 5px;">Arrogant - She thinks herself  above the menial tasks that she must do as an adventurer. She does them anyway, of course, because they are a stepping stone to her own greatness.</li>
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 <p style="font-size: 1.4em; font-weight: bold; font-variant: small-caps; border-bottom: 2px solid #cccccc; margin-top: 1em;">Philosophy & Ideals</p>
 Edyva's philosophy is quite simple - if she can gain more power, she will not have to rely on the idiots in charge to keep her safe. In her mind, Eorzea's leadership, on both the large and small scale, has failed its people. Oh, she'll work for them - for gil or glory - but she sees them only as stepping stones on the path to her own ascension.
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 <li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Before her drastic personality shift in her teenage years, Edyva was quite the painter! She dropped the hobby for the most part, but on the rare occasion that she paints, her work is a rather gruesome sight.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Coco' will spend minute upon minutes, the time between the seconds, just to make sure everything's maintained, and everyone's prepped.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">If it does not interest her, Edyva will just go wandering off in the middle of a conversation, almost as if she forgot she was a part of it.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">He treats Chocobos like they were people - down to asking for their name, and their story.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Edyva keeps a mental note of the weaknesses she observes in the people around her. She sees nothing wrong with exploiting these weaknesses to get ahead. </li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">The boy's never had a proper brew in his life yet, but his tolerance for pain belies his tolerance for the spirits...</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Edyva does not like to drink. She will if she needs to dull physical or emotional pain, but in a social context she does not want to dull her senses or let down her walls.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Due to his upbringing, Coco' could do menial work - the most boring, mundane crap imaginable, and somehow find a way to make it a pleasant detour.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">If Edyva can get someone else to do it, she will.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Coco' will never admit any affections he has openly, merely hinting at them. He's bashful about the people he like-likes, maybe even loves, very much so.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Edyva has only had romantic feelings for one person, a young girl - a schoolmate - back when she was 15. Nothing came of it, and she has not allowed herself any such feelings since then.</li>
-<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Coco' cares for those that care about him back tenfold - maybe a bit too much to some, but his truest friends are worth more than any sum of Gil.</li>
+<li style="background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; border-left: 10px solid #595959; margin: 5px;">Edyva sees nothing wrong with taking a life, especially to save one's own. Kill or be killed.</li>
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-Edyva hails from relatively humble beginnings. Her father works as a humble merchant and her mother is a weaver, and together they run a small textile business in Limsa Lominsa. Edyva had a much older brother - Eadwin - but he enlisted in the Maelstrom and was lost in the Battle of Carteneau. Losing him and coming to terms with the destruction that can befall the people she loves, the bubbly young Edyva's personality shifted immensely at the age of 16. Where before she had a lust for life, she has grown rather blase and morbid about everything. Everything, that is, except for gaining power. One night - after yet another attempt by her mother to get her to help with the business failed immensely - Edyva booked passage to Vesper Bay and began the journey to Ul'dah. To the Thaumaturge's Guild.
+Edyva hails from relatively humble beginnings. Her father works as a humble merchant and her mother is a weaver, and together they run a small textile business in Limsa Lominsa. Edyva had a much older brother - Eadwin - but he enlisted in the Maelstrom and was lost in the Battle of Carteneau. Losing him and coming to terms with the destruction that can befall the people she loves, the bubbly young Edyva's personality shifted immensely at the age of 16. Where before she had a lust for life, she has grown rather blase and morbid about everything. This was spurred on due to dreams - perhaps an early manifestation of the Echo? - of the death and destruction caused by the fall of Dalamud. It became clear to her that she needed to seek power of her own, so one night - after yet another attempt by her mother to get her to help with the business failed immensely - Edyva booked passage to Vesper Bay and began the journey to Ul'dah. To the Thaumaturge's Guild.
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-Cocovachi always had an aspiration from a young age to see the world - the sights, the sounds, the people!  Not being much of a homebody, but knowing when to take breaks, he'll spend a good deal of time in an otherwise unusual place - somewhere he's never been or seen, to soak in the culture, and try to better grasp their ways.  Of course, he might make a small mistake here or there, and try to correct himself while retreating into his original ways...
+As you might expect, Edyva is rather passive in her mannerisms. If there is a plan to be made, she will let someone else do it...and only really get involved if it's to point out that their plan is bad. In social conversations, she will just stand there, likely zoning out and thinking about something she actually gives a flip about. The only time she seems to take any initiative is when she is told that she CAN'T do something...and that is to do  the exact thing that she is told she "can't" do.
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 '''[Profile is a WIP]'''
-Edyva hails from relatively humble beginnings. Her father works as a humble merchant and her mother is a weaver, and together they run a small textile business in Limsa Lominsa. Edyva had a much older brother - Eadwin - but he enlisted in the Maelstrom and was lost in the Battle of Carteneau. Losing him and coming to terms with the destruction that can befall the people she loves, the bubbly young Edyva's personality shifted immensely at the age of 16. Where before she had a lust for life, she has grown rather blase about everything. Everything, that is, except for gaining power. One night - after yet another attempt by her mother to get her to help with the business failed immensely - Edyva booked passage to Vesper Bay and began the journey to Ul'dah. To the Thaumaturge's Guild.
+Edyva hails from relatively humble beginnings. Her father works as a humble merchant and her mother is a weaver, and together they run a small textile business in Limsa Lominsa. Edyva had a much older brother - Eadwin - but he enlisted in the Maelstrom and was lost in the Battle of Carteneau. Losing him and coming to terms with the destruction that can befall the people she loves, the bubbly young Edyva's personality shifted immensely at the age of 16. Where before she had a lust for life, she has grown rather blase and morbid about everything. Everything, that is, except for gaining power. One night - after yet another attempt by her mother to get her to help with the business failed immensely - Edyva booked passage to Vesper Bay and began the journey to Ul'dah. To the Thaumaturge's Guild.
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-Cocovachi is a short, stout young man with a dark skin tone and smooth complexion, a jagged mop of snow-white hair that spikes out in various directions, and a pair of Amethyst eyes that shine a vibrant purple when the light catches them. Despite his lack of height at a meager 2' 10", his bodily strength in such a small form makes up in spades.
+Edyva is a Midlander of average height, with relatively pale skin and piercing blue-green eyes. Her dark violet hair is shaved off on one side, while the other is long, with blue highlights. She has a barely-noticable lip piercing and a small tattoo on her face. She typically wears rather dark lipstick and violet eyeshadow to accentuate her look.
-Born and raised on a farm, his motions are practiced, and methodical, if a tad meticulous at times, what with his teachings of doing something right by pacing himself, or keeping matters simple, stupid. This results in motions that utilize the weight of his body moreso than energetic efforts - a single beckoning swing towards himself to call others close, rather than rapid side-to-side hand motions, or spending time shadowing his movements before executing them...
+She carries herself as one would expect. There is almost always a cynical or sarcastic air to her body language.
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-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Eager</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Blase</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Friendly</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Morbid</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Talkative</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Rebellious</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Thoughtful</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Cynical</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Curious</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Annoyed</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Oblivious</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Power-hungry</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Stubborn</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Blunt</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Instinctual</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Passive</li>
-<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Brave</li>
+<li style="display: inline; background-color: #e5e5e5; padding: .5em; border-radius: 5px; margin: 5px; line-height: 3em;">Apathetic</li>
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 |race = Hyur <!-- Your character's race (ex: Hyur, Miqo'te, etc.). This will create a category. -->
 |subrace = Midlander <!-- Your character's subrace (ex: Xaela, Raen, Keeper of the Moon...). This will create a category. -->
-|gender = Male <!-- Your character's gender identity (ex: Male, Female, Transgender, Genderfluid, etc.). -->
+|gender = Female <!-- Your character's gender identity (ex: Male, Female, Transgender, Genderfluid, etc.). -->
 |sexualorientation = <!-- Your character's sexual preference -->
 |relationship = Single<!-- Your character's relationship status (ex: single, married, engaged, etc.) -->
-|nameday = 7th Sun of the Fourth Astral Moon<!-- Your character's nameday. -->
+|nameday = 24th Sun of the Fourth Umbral Moon<!-- Your character's nameday. -->
 |age = 21 <!-- Your character's age. -->
 |guardian = Rhalgr, the Destroyer<!-- Your character's guardian. -->
-|birthplace = Bentbranch Meadow Farms<!-- Where your character was born. -->
+|birthplace = Limsa Lominsa<!-- Where your character was born. -->
 |tribe = <!-- Tribal affiliation for Xaela (ex: Dotharl, Qalli, Kha). This will create a category. -->
 |house = <!-- House affiliation if applicable (ex: House Fortemps). -->
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 '''[Profile is a WIP]'''
-Cocovachi is a young lad from humble beginnings, growing up on a Chocobo farm with his mixed family and knowing not much else of the world outside of what his family allowed him to experience. Few were the travellers that he was allowed to interact with or learn from, and despite his parent's best efforts at rearing an innocent child that would become a homebody like them, he had different aspirations. Dreams of seeing the world beyond the farm, of doing great things, meeting interesting people, and forging new bonds! When he came of age, he bade farewell to his slow-and-easy life on the farm with a weathered blade in hand, and bought a cart-trip to a city that would show him the way of an Adventurer's life. Unaware was the man, however, in what destiny held in store for him...
+Edyva hails from relatively humble beginnings. Her father works as a humble merchant and her mother is a weaver, and together they run a small textile business in Limsa Lominsa. Edyva had a much older brother - Eadwin - but he enlisted in the Maelstrom and was lost in the Battle of Carteneau. Losing him and coming to terms with the destruction that can befall the people she loves, the bubbly young Edyva's personality shifted immensely at the age of 16. Where before she had a lust for life, she has grown rather blase about everything. Everything, that is, except for gaining power. One night - after yet another attempt by her mother to get her to help with the business failed immensely - Edyva booked passage to Vesper Bay and began the journey to Ul'dah. To the Thaumaturge's Guild.
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