Eric Verus - Revision history

Hyrist: /* Appearance */

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‎Appearance

Hyrist: /* Rare Rumors */

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‎Rare Rumors

Hyrist: /* Other */

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‎Other

Hyrist: /* Family */

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‎Family

Hyrist: /* Friends */

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‎Friends

Hyrist: /* Relationships */

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‎Relationships

Hyrist: /* Recent/Current Events */

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‎Recent/Current Events

Hyrist: /* Chapter 2: Fractured Tower */

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‎Chapter 2: Fractured Tower

Hyrist: /* Chapter 2: Looming Darkness */

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‎Chapter 2: Looming Darkness

Hyrist: /* Behavior */

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‎Behavior

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 *'''Body:''' Slender and fit.
-*'''Hair:''' Shoulder length brown-blond hair in streaks, goatee
+*'''Hair:''' Shoulder length brown hair with white streaks, goatee
 *'''Eyes:''' Bright Light-Blue
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 *'''Skin:'''  Pale
-*'''Clothing: '''  Eric typically is seen wearing mage robes and other forms of warm clothing, even when in warmer climates.
+*'''Clothing: '''  Eric typically is seen wearing loose fit or modern clothing. He is sometimes seen wearing mage robes.
 ===Behavior===

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 ===Rare Rumors===
 ::* "''I hear his whole family has been cursed for killin lots of people way back in the past.''"
 ===PC Rumors===

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 ::* Has a known interest in Allagan research history and lore.
 ::* Is often seen writing in quiet places, the context of his writing is unknown.
 ===The Tell-Tale Feathers===

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 Not much is known about Eric's father. Eric has only personally imposed that his father was distant during the entirety of his life, likely due to guilt over Eric's curse and the death of his mother. Eric bears his father no ill will, but his attachment to his distant father is minimal.
-[[File:crowfeather.png]]  '''Bradamante sas Verus''' - Mother (deceased)
+[[File:crowfeather.png]]  '''Bradamante van Verus''' - Mother (deceased)
-Once an established warrior maiden in the houses of Garlemald, Eric's mother met an unfortunate end at the hands of a curse. While accusations have been made to a rather famous individual, they were discarded on behalf Luc's poor standing and whispers of illegal magic used in the family. Eric was recovered from his dead mother's womb, and has survived his life living with a fragment of the curse that killed his mother.
+Once an established warrior maiden in the houses of Garlemald, Eric's mother met an unfortunate end at the hands of a curse. While accusations have been made to a rather famous individual, they were discarded on behalf Luc's poor standing and whispers of illegal magic used in the family. Eric was recovered from his dead mother's womb, and has survived his life fighting the curse that killed his mother.
 [[File:dodofeather.png]]  '''Hyrist rem Verus''' - Brother
-Allied together under the banner of Dark Embers, and knowing the truth of Hyrist's actions that caused them both to inevitably abandon their homeland. Knowing the feeling of loss being separated form the squad that they had grown in rapport with, Eric has kept a slight distance from his bother out of a measure of guilt due to removing Hyrist from the life and rank he worked so hard for.
+Allied together under the banner of Dark Embers, and knowing the truth of Hyrist's actions that caused them both to inevitably abandon their homeland. Knowing the feeling of loss being separated form the squad that they had grown in rapport with, Eric has kept a slight distance from his bother out of a measure of guilt due to removing Hyrist from the life and rank he worked so hard for. Together they share an often unspoken attachment to the individuals in Garlemald who shared their opinion: That the War-obsessed Magitek Empire should return to the Militant Republic from which it was found, and its attempts at forced expansions cease. These views leave their like-minded allies in Garlemald in significant danger in their homeland, and a subject of much considerations for the Verus Brothers .
 ===Friends===

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 ===Friends===
-[[File:swanfeather.png]]   '''[[Alothia Starkwood]]'''
+[[File:dodofeather.png]]   '''[[Alothia Starkwood]]'''
-Eric's employer, and closest friend. For a time Eric had strong romantic feelings for Alothia before she became involved with [[K'anko Tia]]. However, in respect for their relationship, Eric has made an effort to suppress those feelings and focus on friendship and business between them. In spite of this, there is no other individual on Eorzea he trust more and views her as closer to him than his own family.
+Eric's former employer, and closest friend. For a time Eric had strong romantic feelings for Alothia before she became involved with [[K'anko Tia]]. However, in respect for their relationship, Eric made an effort to suppress those feelings and focus on friendship and business between them. Since Alothia's disappearance and return, Eric's feeling of guilt over his ties to the sources of her disappearances have made him keep a distance from her, in spite his desires to remain close.
 ===Enemies===

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 ===Family===
-[[File:dodofeather.png]]  '''Luc' Verus''' - Father
+[[File:dodofeather.png]]  '''Luc' sas Verus''' - Father
 Not much is known about Eric's father. Eric has only personally imposed that his father was distant during the entirety of his life, likely due to guilt over Eric's curse and the death of his mother. Eric bears his father no ill will, but his attachment to his distant father is minimal.
-[[File:crowfeather.png]]  '''Bradamante Vas Verus''' - Mother (deceased)
+[[File:crowfeather.png]]  '''Bradamante sas Verus''' - Mother (deceased)
 Once an established warrior maiden in the houses of Garlemald, Eric's mother met an unfortunate end at the hands of a curse. While accusations have been made to a rather famous individual, they were discarded on behalf Luc's poor standing and whispers of illegal magic used in the family. Eric was recovered from his dead mother's womb, and has survived his life living with a fragment of the curse that killed his mother.
-[[File:dodofeather.png]]  '''Hyrist Tol Verus''' - Brother
+[[File:dodofeather.png]]  '''Hyrist rem Verus''' - Brother
-Allied together under the banner of Dark Embers, and knowing the truth of Hyrist's actions that caused them both to inevitably abandon their homeland. Knowing the feeling of loss being separated form the squad that they had grown in rapport with, Eric has kept a slight distance from his bother out of a measure of guilt due to removing Hyrist from the lift he worked so hard for.
+Allied together under the banner of Dark Embers, and knowing the truth of Hyrist's actions that caused them both to inevitably abandon their homeland. Knowing the feeling of loss being separated form the squad that they had grown in rapport with, Eric has kept a slight distance from his bother out of a measure of guilt due to removing Hyrist from the life and rank he worked so hard for.
 ===Friends===

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 ===Recent/Current Events===
-[Pending Revisions]
+'''Dark Embers Plotline: Outbreak'''
 ===Prologue===

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 Finally through research of relics and documents found in Tam Tara, it was resolved that Eric had to remove the core of the infestation from his body surgically in order to escape his fate. This came at the cost of the removal of his stomach, which had been completely corrupted by the Voidsent. With Lily defending an assault by a mysterious robed woman and a Voidsent Soulcounter, K'anko and Alothia were successful in performing the surgery, clearing Eric of the danger of succumbing to the void and saving his life. As a result, Eric's loyalties to Corvus Cinus and it's core members has been secured, and he has avowed to recover and improve his skills to better assist the company, and those who had saved him.
-===Chapter 2: Fractured Tower===
+===Chapter 2: Isolation===
 [Pending Revisions]

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 '''Alignment:''' True Neutral
-Eric has a reserved, but warm nature. Enjoying quiet conversations one on one with individuals, but straying away or to the side of a crowd when one is gathered. He is quite familiar with intrigue of courts and even feels as comfortable in such environments as one can be. He has begun to adapt to the customs of Eorzea and has grown to adapt it as his new home.
+Eric has a reserved, and cool nature. Enjoying quiet conversations one on one with individuals, but straying away or to the side of a crowd when one is gathered. He is quite familiar with intrigue of courts and even feels as comfortable in such environments as one can be. He has begun to adapt to the customs of Eorzea and has grown to adapt it as his new home.
 When it comes to combat or moments of high tension, Eric seems to be cold, analytic, and confrontational. Eric has a tendency to try to anticipate the movements and demeanor of those around him as as self-defense mechanism. While it serves him well in combat, as well as in Military Courts, this causes problems for him in inter-personal relations.