Ghost Forge - Revision history

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2014-03-24T03:10:26Z

‎Other

2014-03-08T23:40:57Z

‎Other

2014-03-08T20:54:58Z

2014-03-08T20:32:11Z

2013-12-11T22:27:57Z

2013-12-04T03:40:07Z

2013-12-02T05:18:54Z

‎Rare Rumors

2013-12-02T05:16:38Z

‎Combat

2013-12-02T05:15:28Z

‎Description

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 ::*'''[[Lubdbryda Haldlahzwyn]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db9Pu7JmKW0 The girl who doesn't want to].
 ::*'''[[Zenzi Vela]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YREOhjsSvOs The woman in charge].
 == Rumors ==

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 ::*'''[[Gilawafe Archimtrios]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hFjcBY0XlHU The man who learned from the sea].
 ::*'''[[Dhatura Inoxia]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6rdQ3v4bL_A The man in need of a change].
-::*'''[[Lubdbryda Haldlahzwyn]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db9Pu7JmKW0 The slacker].
+::*'''[[Lubdbryda Haldlahzwyn]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db9Pu7JmKW0 The girl who doesn't want to].
 ::*'''[[Zenzi Vela]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YREOhjsSvOs The woman in charge].

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 ::*'''[[Eleanor Tataeno]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Hvh3aH3D5k The dark-haired woman].
 ::*'''[[C'dhen Tia]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-u3RUAeYWM The flippant sand cat].
-::*'''[[Siobhain Surtsthalwyn]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6ZV5Sdw9jQ The mistress of the Grindstone].
+::*'''[[Siobhain Surtsthalwyn]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jtNx75XeH_I The woman always in peril].
 ::*'''[[Lottie Forsaidh]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Hk9N5ieX0w The girl generous with her time].
 ::*'''[[Tefh Jinjahl]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xLtD1KsYYxk The stalker].

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 ::*'''[[Zindelo Tarantella]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8Z_XNrXrIw The peculiar man of many brothers].
 ::*'''[[Sion Gyr]]''': [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uOgwnodgwqM The guy with a plan].
 == Rumors ==

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 ::*'''[[C'dhen Tia]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-u3RUAeYWM The flippant sand cat].
 ::*'''[[Siobhain Surtsthalwyn]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6ZV5Sdw9jQ The mistress of the Grindstone].
 == Rumors ==

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 == Relationships ==
 === Familial ===
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 === Business ===
-::*'''[[Horace Rook]]:''' The enigmatic and wealthy old man whom Ghost Forge bodyguards.
+::*'''[[Horace Rook]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YD8BDwErzR0 The wealthy old man].
 === Other ===
-::*'''[[Nhari Viqqoh]]:''' An ill tempered young Miqo'te woman.
+::*'''[[Nhari Viqqoh]]:''' [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yevdyin2abs The ill tempered girl].
 == Rumors ==

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 === Rare Rumors ===
-::*"Heard the big one in the armor boards pirate ships and kills everyone on board for sport."
+::*"Heard the big one in the armor boards pirate ships and kills everyone on board for fun."
 ::*"Killed 'is own family for gil, I heard. What sorta monster does somethin' like that?"
 ::*"There's a reason that person doesn't have any friends. A terrifying reason. Don't forget that."
   [[category:Player Character]]

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 == Combat ==
-Those who've actually seen Ghost Forge in active combat probably haven't lived to talk about it. Despite often attending the Grindstone and the Blood Sands, the figure does not seem to fight for sport and uses quick effective methods of subjugation where applicable to avoid putting themselves on display.
+Those who have actually seen Ghost Forge in active combat probably haven't lived to talk about it. Despite often attending the Grindstone and the Blood Sands, the figure does not seem to fight for sport and uses quick effective methods of subjugation where applicable to avoid putting themselves on display.
 == Relationships ==

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 === Description ===
-Never seen without a full suit of armor and with a voice that echos more metal than man, the person beneath (if there is one) remains shrouded in mystery. The details all seem unimportant: gender, age, race? All left to the imagination. The suit of armor itself is of exquisite yet practical design and cared for meticulously, smelling vaguely of evergreen.
+Never seen without a full suit of armor, and with a voice that echos more metal than man, the person beneath (if there is one) remains shrouded in mystery. The details all seem unimportant: gender, age, race? All left to the imagination. The suit of armor itself is of exquisite yet practical design and cared for meticulously, smelling vaguely of evergreen.
 === Behavior ===

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 == Character ==
-The facts concerning Ghost Forge seem few and far between. Three years ago there was a particularly ruthless gladiator by the same name, but if this person and that person share an identity is anyone's guess. What is known for certainty is that the imposing figure serves as Horace Rook's bodyguard and is often seen as the business man's intrusive and intimidating shadow.
+The facts concerning Ghost Forge seem few and far between. Three years ago there was a particularly ruthless gladiator by the same name, but if this person and that person share an identity is anyone's guess. What is known for certainty is that the imposing figure serves as Rook's bodyguard and is often seen as the business man's intrusive and intimidating shadow.
 === Description ===