Isandor Shadowhaven - Revision history

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Isondre at 02:56, 30 November 2013

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 <div style="font-size:20px;  color: #000;  font-family: Garamond;  background-color: #665a6a;  line-height:1.5em;  letter-spacing:0.4ex"><div style="text-align: center">'''Deeper truths'''</div></div><div style="font-size:14px;  font-family: helvetica;  color:#bbb;  letter-spacing:0.2ex">
 <div style="text-align: center">Is there more to this story? Some wonder if the strange visitors are all they claim to be.</div><br/>
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 There is no Duskwight settlement called "Shadowhaven." That, too, is a literary reference to a mythical Elezen stronghold held deep within the earth, taken from the obscure ancient poem ''Aielle Dathre Poirét'', or ''To Return To My Love''.</div></div>
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 ::*Your character knows everything there is to know about Duskwight Elezen, and then some:
 </div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">
-There is no Duskwight settlement called "Shadowhaven." That, too, is a literary reference to a mythical Elezen stronghold deep within the earth, taken from the obscure ancient poem ''Aielle Dathre Poirét'', or ''To Return To My Love''.</div></div>
+There is no Duskwight settlement called "Shadowhaven." That, too, is a literary reference to a mythical Elezen stronghold held deep within the earth, taken from the obscure ancient poem ''Aielle Dathre Poirét'', or ''To Return To My Love''.</div></div>
 [[File:Peregrine-gray.png|center|Peregrine-gray.png]]<!--Commented out until ready to make public [[Category:Character]][[Category:Player Character]][[Category:Duskwight Elezen]][[Category:Balmung]]

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 ::*Your character has extensive knowledge of ancient Elezen heraldry:
-<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">The falcon crest was once associated with one of the royal houses in ancient Elezen society, namely House Peregrine.</div></div>
+<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">The falcon crest was once associated with one of the royal houses in ancient Elezen society, namely the great and noble House Peregrine.</div></div>

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 ::*If your character has some knowledge of Elezen culture:
-<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">Most Elezen seem not to care that their ancestors once ruled Eorzea without challenge, and that they have since lost their influence. Surely some of the Elezen houses of old do not share this nonchalance. Surely some wish to take back what once was theirs.</div></div>
+<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">Most Elezen seem not to care that their ancestors once ruled Eorzea without challenge, or that their people have since lost the influence they once had. Surely some of the Elezen houses of old do not share this nonchalance. Surely some, even now, seek to take back what once was theirs.</div></div>

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 <div style="font-size:20px;  color: #000;  font-family: Garamond;  background-color: #665a6a;  line-height:1.5em;  letter-spacing:0.4ex"><div style="text-align: center">'''Public knowledge'''</div></div><div style="font-size:14px;  font-family: helvetica;  color:#bbb;  letter-spacing:0.2ex"><div style="text-align: left"><!--PUBLIC KNOWLEDGE-->
-Mystery surrounds the two travelers who claim to hail from a distant Duskwight enclave known as 'Shadowhaven.' Isandor and his sister Isondre have arrived in Eorzea to make an impact, for good or ill. Despite their tendency to be outspoken in their disdain for city life -- and many of the cities' occupants -- they have garnered something of a reputation as mercenaries.
+Mystery surrounds the two travelers who claim to hail from a distant Duskwight enclave known as "Shadowhaven." Isandor and his sister Isondre have arrived in Eorzea to make an impact, for good or ill. Despite their tendency to be outspoken in their disdain for city life -- and many of the cities' occupants -- they have garnered something of a reputation as mercenaries.
-Isandor is not precisely secretive of his disdain for people he sees as his inferior. Conversely, he seems to take an interest in anyone of nobility, or even claiming to be nobly-born. He does not like to be touched. He may have cleanliness issues. He seems inseparable from his sister Isondre; they shadow one another constantly, though perceptive people will note she seems to guard him more often then he guards her.
+Isandor is not precisely secretive of his disdain for people he sees as his inferior. Conversely, he seems to take an interest in anyone of nobility (or anyone even claiming to be nobly-born). He does not like to be touched, and may have cleanliness issues. He seems inseparable from his sister Isondre; they shadow one another constantly, though perceptive people will note she seems to guard him more often then he guards her.
 <div style="font-size:20px;  color: #000;  font-family: Garamond;  background-color: #665a6a;  line-height:1.5em;  letter-spacing:0.4ex"><div style="text-align: center">'''Appearance and Demeanor'''</div></div><br/><div style="font-size:14px;  font-family: helvetica;  color:#bbb;  letter-spacing:0.2ex"><div style="text-align: left"><!--APPEARANCE AND DEMEANOR-->
-Isandor is extremely tall, even for an Elezen, and to those accustomed to the look of the sun-loving Wildwoods, his appearance is unearthly and even unsettling. His skin is a light charcoal gray, his hair white as snow. He is long-limbed and lithe, and carries himself with the grace and dignity of a well-born and nobly raised Elezen. His sharply arched eyebrows give the impression of perpetual disdain, which isn't too far off the mark; to call him "haughty" is underselling it. His eyes are a light lavender hue; only Isandor could take a color like that and make it seem cold. He takes an open and haughty pride in his Elezen heritage, and regards the term "Duskwight" as an insulting epithet. He seems to prefer the word "Gray Elezen" as a descriptor, though "True Elezen" is much closer to the mark.
+Isandor is extremely tall, even for an Elezen, and to those accustomed to the look of the sun-loving Wildwoods, his appearance is unearthly and even unsettling. His skin is a light charcoal gray, his hair white as snow. He is long-limbed and lithe, and carries himself with the grace and dignity of a well-born and nobly raised Elezen. His sharply arched eyebrows give the impression of perpetual disdain, which isn't too far from the truth; to call him "haughty" is underselling it. His eyes are a light lavender hue; only Isandor could take a color like that and make it seem cold. He takes an openly arrogant pride in his Elezen heritage, and regards the term "Duskwight" as an insulting epithet. He seems to prefer the word "Gray Elezen" as a descriptor, though "True Elezen" is much closer to the mark.
-Isandor is skilled with the lance, halberd, spear, and bardiche -- any hand-to-hand weapon that allows him to use his physical strength and quickness while still maintaining a healthy distance, essentially. His only seeming interest -- aside from gaining power and prestige in Eorzea -- is food and drink; he enjoys trying new foods and wines, and rumor persists that his chilly facade may well be breached by offering him something he's never tasted before.
+Isandor is skilled with the lance, halberd, spear, and bardiche -- any hand-to-hand weapon that allows him to use his physical strength and quickness while still maintaining a healthy distance, essentially. Isandor wears paper-thin black mail sleeves under his clothes to help gird his arms and shoulders, which, in contrast to his outside garments, appears to be extremely valuable; on the cuff of one sleeve is a gilded stylized falcon hewn of silver. His only seeming interest -- aside from gaining power and prestige in Eorzea -- is food and drink; he enjoys trying new foods and wines, and rumor persists that his chilly facade may well be breached by offering him something he's never tasted before.
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 ::*If your character has some knowledge of Elezen culture:
-<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">The peregrine was once associated with royalty in ancient Elezen culture.</div></div>
+<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">Most Elezen seem not to care that their ancestors once ruled Eorzea without challenge, and that they have since lost their influence. Surely some of the Elezen houses of old do not share this nonchalance. Surely some wish to take back what once was theirs.</div></div>
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 <div style="text-align: left">
 ::*Your character has extensive knowledge of ancient Elezen heraldry:
-<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">The peregrine crest belongs to one of the old Elezen royal bloodlines, House Peregrine.</div></div>
+<br/></div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">The falcon crest was once associated with one of the royal houses in ancient Elezen society, namely House Peregrine.</div></div>
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 ::*Your character knows everything there is to know about Duskwight Elezen, and then some:
 </div><center>Secret:</center><div style="font-size:14px;  color: #342b36;  font-family: Helvetica;  background-color: #342b36;  line-height:1.5em"><div style="text-align: center">
-There is no Duskwight settlement called Shadowhaven. That, too, is a literary reference to a mythical Elezen stronghold deep within the earth, taken from the obscure ancient poem ''Aielle Dathre Poirét'', or ''To Return To My Love''.</div></div>
+There is no Duskwight settlement called "Shadowhaven." That, too, is a literary reference to a mythical Elezen stronghold deep within the earth, taken from the obscure ancient poem ''Aielle Dathre Poirét'', or ''To Return To My Love''.</div></div>
 [[File:Peregrine-gray.png|center|Peregrine-gray.png]]<!--Commented out until ready to make public [[Category:Character]][[Category:Player Character]][[Category:Duskwight Elezen]][[Category:Balmung]]

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 <div style="font-size:20px;  color: #000;  font-family: Garamond;  background-color: #665a6a;  line-height:1.5em;  letter-spacing:0.4ex"><div style="text-align: center">'''Public knowledge'''</div></div><div style="font-size:14px;  font-family: helvetica;  color:#bbb;  letter-spacing:0.2ex"><div style="text-align: left"><!--PUBLIC KNOWLEDGE-->