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 :'''Lyauna Jihn:''' The miqote from the other world. Itsu finds her interesting, especially since they share a common want to return home. She has a curiousity for the miqote's other world, and an even greater curiousity for her bottomless stomach.
 : '''Mizu:''' The result of a human/succubus experiment, but lovable nonetheless. Itsu used to see her whenever her handlers gathered at the estate, and now sees her whenever walking around the Arche Koeln estate. She's impressed by her quick learning, especially at rolling croissant dough. Itsu had once attempted to heal a burn, however was unable to do so due to her unique vital structure.
 ===Employers===

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 :'''Lyauna Jihn:''' The miqote from the other world. Itsu finds her interesting, especially since they share a common want to return home. She has a curiousity for the miqote's other world, and an even greater curiousity for her bottomless stomach.
 : '''Mizu:''' The result of a human/succubus experiment, but lovable nonetheless. Itsu used to see her whenever her handlers gathered at the estate, and now sees her whenever walking around the Arche Koeln estate. She's impressed by her quick learning, especially at rolling croissant dough. Itsu had once attempted to heal a burn, however was unable to do so due to her unique vital structure.
 ===Acquaintances===

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 {{ItsuHeader1
 |sectiontitle = "Perhaps we may meet again..."}}
-::* Itsu is often seen wearing the traditional hunter's wear of  Darjin (Coliseum Shawl Set)
+::* Itsu is often seen wearing the undergarments of the traditional hunter's wear of  Darjin (Coliseum Shawl Set)
 ::* She is currently the chocobo caretaker at the Arche Koeln estate
 ::* She is currently employed at Chocobo Daycare (Lavender Beds Subdivision Ward 11, Plot 47)
 ==OOC Information==

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 :'''Xa’in Neir:''' Missing mother. Xa'in is the daughter of one of Consult of Darjin. She is also a Conjurer, studied during her In'uljah in Gridania. Her mother taught Itsu how to paint when she was younger. She was also Itsu's ''Depakka'' instructor. She gave Itsu the name Dandelion.<br />
 :'''Kibotosek Neir:''' Missing father. He was born in Gridania and studied both Archery and Lancing, primarily teaching the latter to the older brother, Jikun. He had followed Xa'in of his own free will and assimilated into the Darjinian colony. He has a fondness for chocobos that he shares with Itsu. He was Jikun's ''Depakka'' instructor.<br />
-:'''Jikun Neir:''' Brother (currently on In'uljah). He is 3 years her senior. The siblings were extremely close when they were younger, often inseparable. Jikun taught her to make spears, a skill that saved her during her Depakka. He left for his In'uljah at the age of 12 and has not been seen since.<br />
+:'''[[Jikun Neir]]:''' Brother (currently on In'uljah). He is 3 years her senior. The siblings were extremely close when they were younger, often inseparable. Jikun taught her to make spears, a skill that saved her during her Depakka. He left for his In'uljah at the age of 12 and has not been seen since.<br />
 :'''Chocobo:''' Qin'jirah (Piidii)
 :'''Darlin Tchyarun:''' Deceased maternal grandmother. Previously a Consult of Darjin.
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 : '''Delkan Lenoxx:''' Met at the Arche Koeln estate. Itsu knows nothing of him other than he is a new member of the Free Company.
 : '''Kairi Kawanami:''' A mercenary briefly met.
 ===Enemies===

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 |sectiontitle = "Our fates are intertwined..."}}
 ===Lover===
-:'''[[Yumi Hikaru]]:''' Her significant other. Though unsure why, Itsu feels a strange familiarity with her.
+:'''[[Yumi Hikaru]]:''' Her significant other. Itsu will constantly nag Yumi to be careful, though often disregarded. Around others, Itsu and Yumi are not very affectionate, saved for private chamber. Though not always spoken, Itsu has noticed Yumi's tendencies and will act accordingly. The girl has dedicated her current healing career to keeping her wife alive.
 ===Family===
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 ===Friends===
-:'''[[Iris Blanchimont]]:''' Free Company colleague. Iris had confided her trust in Itsu and Yumi. To reciprocate this trust, Itsu has sworn to protect her in return.
+:'''[[Iris Blanchimont]]:''' Free Company colleague. Iris had confided her trust in Itsu and Yumi. To reciprocate this trust, Itsu has sworn to protect her in return. The girl sees Iris to be a vast source of knowledge, and is always fascinated with her thorough explanations.
-:'''Zinot Risus:''' Met at Void Ark, formally acquainted at Free Company. First impressions were terrible as he provoked Yumi's anger, however following the events at the Invisible City, she has seen him in better light, namely because he helped keep Yumi safe. Though she dislikes his stubborn attitude, she trusts her baby chocobos around him under her supervision. She, as with all good friends, nags him to be careful.
+:'''Zinot Risus:''' Met at Void Ark, formally acquainted at Free Company. First impressions were terrible as he provoked Yumi's anger, however following the events at the Invisible City, she has seen him in better light, namely because he helped keep Yumi safe. Though she dislikes his stubborn attitude, she trusts her baby chocobos around him under her supervision. She, as with all good friends, nags him to be careful. Itsu oversees Zinot raising his chocobo, Gris.
-:'''Lyauna Jihn:''' The miqote from the other world. Itsu finds her interesting, especially since they share a common want to return home. Curious, as she seems to have a bottomless stomach.
+:'''Lyauna Jihn:''' The miqote from the other world. Itsu finds her interesting, especially since they share a common want to return home. She has a curiousity for the miqote's other world, and an even greater curiousity for her bottomless stomach.
-: '''Mizu:''' A little voidsent succubus, seen at various gatherings. Itsu has interacted with them a couple times with a motherly approach, and has even tried to heal an old burn. The two only recently.
+: '''Mizu:''' The result of a human/succubus experiment, but lovable nonetheless. Itsu used to see her whenever her handlers gathered at the estate, and now sees her whenever walking around the Arche Koeln estate. She's impressed by her quick learning, especially at rolling croissant dough. Itsu had once attempted to heal a burn, however was unable to do so due to her unique vital structure.
 ===Acquaintances===
 :'''[[Taji Tribal]]:''' Formally met at Free Company post-Void Ark. She currently knows her as the Mi'qote who danced so hard she fell through the Mist docks. She seems trustworthy.
 :'''[[J'yhun Arun]]:''' J'yhun once read her and her partners' cards at a Valentione event at the estate. She seems to like him a little: he offered potions that would supposedly help her and her wife conceive children. Nothing shady here at all.
-: '''Shou Han:''' Met at Arche Koeln before departing, doesn't know her quite well yet.
+: '''Shou Han:''' Met at Arche Koeln before departing, doesn't know her quite well.
 : '''Jiro Kichi:''' Met at Arche Koeln one night. She finds him very eccentric, however does not know much else.
 : '''Delkan Lenoxx:''' Met at the Arche Koeln estate. Itsu knows nothing of him other than he is a new member of the Free Company.

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 ::♦ Small spaces
 ::♦ Lots of attention from groups
 ::♦ Disrespect for the dead
 ::♦ Anything or anyone that could even remotely injure Yumi

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	:The girl is also rather shy, quiet at first. Around people she does not know, she prefers to speak very little. Much like a wallflower, she would much rather observe than speak. However, take a chance to approach her and she will be very interested in those she converses with. Itsu will speak primarily when spoken to, however as she begins to ease herself into circumstances, she will talk more than one would think. In Gridania (or anywhere in the Black Shroud, really), Itsu is known to be more sociable, as she is familiar with some of the locals. She is especially chatty with chocobokeep, whom she has known since her first steps into the city. In time-sensitive situations, Itsu is known for making clear that she is a Hearer. Normally Itsu would enjoy speaking about her home, Darjin, however given her missing home colony, she has spoken very little about it as of late. <br />		:The girl is also rather shy, quiet at first. Around people she does not know, she prefers to speak very little. Much like a wallflower, she would much rather observe than speak. However, take a chance to approach her and she will be very interested in those she converses with. Itsu will speak primarily when spoken to, however as she begins to ease herself into circumstances, she will talk more than one would think. In Gridania (or anywhere in the Black Shroud, really), Itsu is known to be more sociable, as she is familiar with some of the locals. She is especially chatty with chocobokeep, whom she has known since her first steps into the city. In time-sensitive situations, Itsu is known for making clear that she is a Hearer. Normally Itsu would enjoy speaking about her home, Darjin, however given her missing home colony, she has spoken very little about it as of late. <br />
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		+	:Darjinian stubbornness runs strong in her blood. When fixated on a task or mission, Itsu is known to run off on her own, end goal in mind. Having grown up hunting with her family, Itsu will prioritize healing others with her should she not be fixated on protecting a single person. Issues regarding Darjin and the Black Shroud that seem dire will see Itsu separating from the group, and as a result may invoke the doubts and frustrations of her party. These issues may or may not be exaggerated by Itsu's worrisome nature, and so she will come to hasty decisions.

	:Solace is found in caring for others. Itsu will always be vocal about the well-being of others, to the point where she is more or less like her mother. Her wife, Yumi Hikaru, is a victim to the girl's constant nagging. Itsu is very, ''very,'' '''''very''''' vocal about Yumi's safety, to the point where she will be angered if her warnings are left unheard. If you ask her about the time she fell down a mine shaft literally seconds after telling Yumi to be careful you will probably evoke an extremely rare, dark piercing glare from the gentle girl. Her wife is no exception to this.<br />		:Solace is found in caring for others. Itsu will always be vocal about the well-being of others, to the point where she is more or less like her mother. Her wife, Yumi Hikaru, is a victim to the girl's constant nagging. Itsu is very, ''very,'' '''''very''''' vocal about Yumi's safety, to the point where she will be angered if her warnings are left unheard. If you ask her about the time she fell down a mine shaft literally seconds after telling Yumi to be careful you will probably evoke an extremely rare, dark piercing glare from the gentle girl. Her wife is no exception to this.<br />

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 ==== In'uljah ====
 :The ''In'uljah'' is a coming of age ceremony set in place by the late Pipilu Pilu and her consultants shortly after the establishment of Darjin. At the young age of 12, children are exiled from the colony, required to survive in the wilderness on their own. They are required to bring treasures from the world back to the colony, artifacts to provide education for those preparing for the ''Depakka'' hunt. One of these required treasures is a chocobo foot, which will then be hung above the family's home to indicate to the rest of the colony that a son/daughter who is ready to be wed has returned safely from their In'uljah trial. Common practice is one who returns without a foot becomes a hunting instructor for Depakka candidates and is not allowed to marry. A person's In'uljah requires a minimum of 3 years in exile, and the longest trial is documented at 20 years.
-It is prohibited to mention Darjin to outsiders. Those who have done so were either permanently removed from the society or killed on sight.
+It is prohibited to mention Darjin to outsiders. Those who have done so were either permanently removed from the society or killed on sight It is possible for outsiders to assimilate into Darjinian colony: they are to reside with the colony for 5 years, and must be wed to a native. They accept that they would be slain upon trying to abandon the society.
 ==== Language ====