Javert Delacroix - Revision history

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Javert Delacroix
-| image = Javfinished.png
+| image = Draft05.jpg
 | imagewidth = 350x350
 | caption =	"The grey one"

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 ===Personality===
-Quiet, reserved and unwilling to let others get too close, Javert is a loner through and through. If he does happen to speak, it will often be of the things he doesn't take a liking to. Few have managed to put up with the Elezen's negative disposition, and that's exactly what Javert prefers. He does not like being attached to people, places or things. He prefers to be his own man, not held down by the rules or expectations of others.
+Quiet, reserved and unwilling to let others get too close, Javert is a loner through and through. If he does happen to speak, it will often be of the things he doesn't take a liking to. Few have managed to put up with the Elezen's negative disposition, and that's exactly what Javert prefers. He does not like being attached to people, places or things. He prefers to be his own person, not held down by the rules or expectations of others.
 ==History/Timeline==
-Javert Delacroix is a Duskwight Elezen born deep in the forests of the Black Shroud. Raised in a family of bandits that found shelter in a cave, Javert was brought up learning how to fight, kill and hunt for himself as well as the family. While the budding Elezen was out on a lone hunt, his family's hideaway was raided by Gridanian forces and his family was all killed.
+Javert Delacroix is a Duskwight Elezen born deep in the forests of the Black Shroud. Raised in a family of bandits that found shelter in a cave, Javert was brought up learning how to fight, kill, and hunt for himself as well as the family. His grandfather, a veteran of the Autumn War, saw fit to make sure the young Duskwight learned the ways of the bards of old. In addition to his expert mastery of a bow, Javert learned to perform songs that could change the tide of a skirmish, at the cost of his aether.
-For the next few years, Javert wandered alone. The solitude wore on his mind. In desperation, the lone Duskwight traveled to the city-state's capitol to find work and any sort of social interaction. It was then that he begrudgingly joined the Order of the Twin Adder.
+While the budding Elezen was out on a lone hunt, his family's hideaway was raided by Gridanian forces and his family killed.
-Though he still kept to himself, the occasional chat or job helped Javert through the years.
+For the next several years, Javert wandered alone. The solitude wore on his mind. In desperation, the lone Duskwight traveled to the city-state's capitol to find work and any sort of social interaction. It was then that he begrudgingly joined the Order of the Twin Adder, under threat of execution.
-Recently, Javert has sought the life of a mercenary. He has established a small number of connections for what may lead to future jobs.
+Though he still kept to himself, the occasional chat or job helped Javert stay strong through the years, until he found a free company willing to put up with his odd nature. Under the guidance of his company mates, the once-wild Duskwight learned to behave himself somewhat better in public. Furter, he was taught numerous necessary life-skills, including reading. His domestication, coupled with seemingly good behavior, lifted the black mark hanging over Javert's head with the Adders.
 ==Combat==
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 Should any attackers get close, they'd find the Elezen is proficient enough using his fists and a blade to put up a fight.
 ==Tendencies==
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 ::* Singing
 ::* Triple Triad

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 ==Combat==
-===General===
 Javert was raised a bandit. As such, if he were in the heat of battle he'd prefer to not be seen. Rather, the elezen is at home a good half a malm away from those who would do him harm, opting to pick them off with his bow or a firearm.
-Should any attackers get close, they'd find the Elezen is proficient enough using his fists and daggers to put up a fight.
+Should any attackers get close, they'd find the Elezen is proficient enough using his fists and a blade to put up a fight.
 ==Tendencies==

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 | stat_2_value = Oschon, the Wanderer
 | stat_3 = Occupation
-| stat_3_value = Archer for hire
+| stat_3_value = Mercenary
 | stat_6 = Nameday
 | stat_6_value = 16th Sun of the 5th Astral Moon
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 ===Appearance===
-Tall and toned, Javert may have been an imposing figure if not for his people's naturally lithe frames. Years of wandering, fighting to survive and drawing a bow have hardened the Elezen's muscles. Additionally, Javert's body is littered with a number of scars and bruises, the most visible of which can be seen on his face. His eyes are a cold, near-dead white, with the left eye being seemingly damaged or blind.
+Tall and toned, Javert may have been an imposing figure if not for his people's naturally lithe frames. Years of wandering, fighting to survive and drawing a bow have hardened the Elezen's muscles. Additionally, Javert's body is littered with a number of scars and bruises, the most visible of which can be seen on his face. His eyes are a cold, sea-green.
 The Duskwight's skin is notably grey, perhaps a rarity in some parts. Perhaps even rarer are the freckles adorning Javert's face and shoulders; the dark dots are hard to spot due to the tone of his skin.
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 ==Combat==
 ===General===
-Javert was raised a bandit. As such, if he were in the heat of battle he'd prefer to not be seen. Rather, the elezen is at home a good half a malm away from those who would do him harm, opting to pick them off with his bow.
+Javert was raised a bandit. As such, if he were in the heat of battle he'd prefer to not be seen. Rather, the elezen is at home a good half a malm away from those who would do him harm, opting to pick them off with his bow or a firearm.
 Should any attackers get close, they'd find the Elezen is proficient enough using his fists and daggers to put up a fight.
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 ::* Loud noises
 ::* Dragons
-::* Firearms
+::* Garleans
 ===Hobbies/Talents===

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	::* Has started taking up jobs for gil, this may or may not be related to his new-found wanderlust outside of the Shroud.		::* Has started taking up jobs for gil, this may or may not be related to his new-found wanderlust outside of the Shroud.
	::* Rarely spends the gil he makes. Finds no use for it other than food and alcohol.		::* Rarely spends the gil he makes. Finds no use for it other than food and alcohol.
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−	~~==Relationships==~~
−	~~===Family===~~
−	~~All killed in a raid on his bandit clan's haven by Gridanian forces.~~
−
−	~~===Friends===~~
−	~~Nicholas Graveshire: A half-midlander, half-highlander hyuran doctor who has offered to possibly find more work for Javert.~~
−
−	~~===Enemies===~~
−	~~Too many minor ones to count.~~

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 ===Personality===
 Quiet, reserved and unwilling to let others get too close, Javert is a loner through and through. If he does happen to speak, it will often be of the things he doesn't take a liking to. Few have managed to put up with the elezen's negative disposition, and that's exactly what Javert prefers. He does not like being attached to people, places or things. He prefers to be his own man, not held down by the rules or expectations of others.
 ==Combat==
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 ===Enemies===
 Too many minor ones to count.

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Javert Delacroix
-| image = Javertprofile.png
+| image = Javfinished.png
 | imagewidth = 350x350
 | caption =	"The grey one"
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 | stat_3 = Occupation
 | stat_3_value = Archer for hire
 | stat_5 = Martial status
 | stat_5_value = Single
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 ===Appearance===
-Tall and toned, Javert may have been an imposing figure if not for his people's naturally lithe frames. Years of wandering, fighting to survive and drawing a bow have hardened the elezen's muscles and body. True to his lonely nature, Javert's body is littered with a number of scars and bruises, the most visible of which can be seen on his face.
+Tall and toned, Javert may have been an imposing figure if not for his people's naturally lithe frames. Years of wandering, fighting to survive and drawing a bow have hardened the elezen's muscles and body. True to his lonely nature, Javert's body is littered with a number of scars and bruises, the most visible of which can be seen on his face. It would appear that the elezen's left eye is damaged beyond repair.
 The duskwight's skin is notably grey, perhaps a rarity in some parts. Perhaps even rarer are the freckles adorning Javert's face and shoulders; the dark dots are hard to spot due to the tone of his skin.
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 ===Dislikes===
 ::* Wildwood Elezen
-::* Ishgardians in general
+::* Dragons for taking his eye
 ::* Firearms
 ===Hobbies/Talents===
 ::* Hunting
-::* Playing a harp
+::* Singing
 ::* Triple Triad
 ===Other===
-::* Javert has recently begun to expand his haunts; he will more often be found around Thanalan and Limsa Lominsa.
+::* Javert has recently begun to expand his haunts; he will more often be found around other parts of Eorzea.
-::* Has started taking up jobs for gil, this may or may not be related to his newfound wanderlust outside of the Shroud.
+::* Has started taking up jobs for gil, this may or may not be related to his new-found wanderlust outside of the Shroud.
-::* Tends to avoid Coerthas.
+::* Rarely spends the gil he makes. Finds no use for it other than food and alcohol.
 ==Relationships==
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 ===Friends===
 Nicholas Graveshire: A half-midlander, half-highlander hyuran doctor who has offered to possibly find more work for Javert.
 ===Enemies===