Kal Athens - Revision history

Kalthramis at 02:52, 13 March 2018

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‎History

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‎History

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‎Other Notes

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‎Other Notes

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← Older revision		Revision as of 02:52, 13 March 2018
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	<span title = "An unfamiliar stamp is the only entry. It's unremarkable.">[[File:Kal Athens Dossier 4.png\| 600px \| center\| right \| alt= ]]</span>		<span title = "An unfamiliar stamp is the only entry. It's unremarkable.">[[File:Kal Athens Dossier 4.png\| 600px \| center\| right \| alt= ]]</span>

−	''Hint: Try mousing over passages.''	+	''Hint: Try mousing over passages.''<br />
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		+	<sub>Server: Maetus</sub>

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-{{Infobox-character
+<span title = "Its a note of authority from a scribe of the Immortal Flames. It assures you everything in this dossier is true.">[[File:Kal Athens Dossier 1.png| 600px | center| right | alt= ]]</span>
-| name = Kal Athens
+<span title = "Nothing stands out. Perhaps you're looking for something that isn't here.">[[File:Kal Athens Dossier 2.png| 600px | center| right | alt= ]]</span>
-| image = Kal_Athens.png
+<span title = "You read over the passage a few times, but can't seem to remember much. It isn't interesting.">[[File:Kal Athens Dossier 3.png| 600px | center| right | alt= ]]</span>
-| imagewidth = 400
+<span title = "An unfamiliar stamp is the only entry. It's unremarkable.">[[File:Kal Athens Dossier 4.png| 600px | center| right | alt= ]]</span>
-It's a thin dossier on Kal Athens. You take a peek inside.
+''Hint: Try mousing over passages.''

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 ==History==
-''You've read the passage a few times, but can't remember much. It isn't interesting.''
+''You read the passage over a few times, but can't seem to remember much. It isn't interesting.''
 ==Personality==

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 ==History==
-''You read the passage a few times, but can't remember much of it. It isn't interesting.''
+''You've read the passage a few times, but can't remember much. It isn't interesting.''
 ==Personality==

← Older revision		Revision as of 12:23, 12 March 2018
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	==Other Notes==		==Other Notes==
−	''You ~~close~~ the ~~uninteresting~~ dossier. You feel as though you're time has been wasted.''	+	''You have read the entire dossier. You feel as though you're time has been wasted.''

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 }}
 {{Character-stub}}
 ==Basic Info==

← Older revision		Revision as of 12:19, 12 March 2018
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	==Other Notes==		==Other Notes==
−	''You ~~read~~ the ~~whole~~ dossier~~, but don't find anything interesting~~. You feel as though you're time has been wasted.''	+	''You close the uninteresting dossier. You feel as though you're time has been wasted.''

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 ==Personality==
-''There's just a few poor scribbles of various objects and animals. They're very bad.''
+''There's just a few poor scribbles of various common objects and animals. They're very bad.''
 ==Affiliations==

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 }}
 {{Character-stub}}
 ==Basic Info==
-''There's a few brief paragraphs, but nothing seems to stand out to you. Perhaps you're looking for something that isn't here.''
+''A few brief paragraphs, but nothing stands out. Perhaps you're looking for something that isn't here.''
 ==History==
-''You've read the page a few times, but can't seem to remember much of it. It just isn't that interesting.''
+''You read the passage a few times, but can't remember much of it. It just isn't that interesting.''
 ==Personality==
-''There's nothing written here, just a few poorly drawn scribbles of various objects and animals. They're very bad.''
+''There's just a few poor scribbles of various objects and animals. They're very bad.''
 ==Affiliations==
-''A crafter's guild that sounds somewhat familiar. It doesn't stand out enough to be memorable.''
+''An unfamiliar stamp is the only entry. It's unremarkable.''
 ==Other Notes==
-''You've read the whole dossier, but haven't found anything worthwhile. You feel as though you're time has been wasted.''
+''You read the whole dossier, but don't find anything interesting. You feel as though you're time has been wasted.''