Loki Eris - Revision history

AlexeiE: /* Friends */

2017-07-09T07:45:49Z

‎Friends

AlexeiE: /* Military Position */

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‎Military Position

AlexeiE at 07:44, 9 July 2017

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AlexeiE at 06:59, 7 July 2017

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AlexeiE: /* General */

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‎General

AlexeiE: /* Adulthood (24-25) */

2017-07-06T07:36:45Z

‎Adulthood (24-25)

AlexeiE at 06:43, 6 July 2017

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AlexeiE: /* Adulthood */

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‎Adulthood

AlexeiE: /* Adolescence */

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‎Adolescence

AlexeiE: /* Childhood */

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‎Childhood

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 ===Friends===
-::* Haurchefaunt
+::* '''Haurchefaunt'''
 Loki met him during his time with the temple Knights.
-::* Aymeric
+::* '''Aymeric'''
-Loki'seems former commander, and someone he thinks highly of.
+Loki's former commander, and someone he thinks highly of.
 ===Enemies===

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 ===Military Position===
-Loki is a former member of the Temple Knights in Ishgard. He resigned after the Warrior of Light defeated Nidhogg the final time, leaving Ishgard to aid the Ala Mhigan resistance.
+Loki is a former member of the Temple Knights in Ishgard. He resigned after the Warrior of Light defeated Nidhogg the final time, leaving Ishgard to work as a mercenary.
 ==Combat==

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 ===General===
-Loki trained as a Knight and a Machinist, and uses both to the best of his ability. He usually defaults to his sword.
+Loki fights with both sword and spell. He is a powerful Red Mage, capable of weaving himself in and out of battle in order to disorient his foes.
 ==Tendencies==
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 ===Enhanced Regeneration===
-Since he was a child, Loki's wounds have healed very quickly. While this has come in handy, it has a limit. It was able to heal a sword wound through his stomach, but he was overwhelmed and nearly killed by a group of Gobbues. One put him in their mouth and tried to eat him, but he fired his gun down its throat.
+Since he was a child, Loki's wounds have healed very quickly. While this has come in handy, it has a limit. It was able to heal a sword wound through his stomach, but he was overwhelmed and nearly killed by a group of Gobbues. One put him in their mouth and tried to eat him, but he fired a spell down its throat.
 ==Relationships==
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 ::* "I heard he's originally from Ala Mhigo."
-::* "They say there'should a former temple knight that uses a ''gun'', strange, isn't it?"
+::* "Have you heard of the ''Magic Knight''? They say he duelled Ser Aymeric and won."
 ==History/Timeline==
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 ===Adulthood (24-25)===
-After Haurchefaunt's death, Loki resigned from the Knights, and trained with a firearm in order to better protect his allies. Once he felt his training was sufficient, he left for La Noscea and purchased a house. He took jobs as a mercenary and continuously funneled money to the Ala Mhigan resistance, until the Allied victory at Baelsar's Wall. He now goes back and forth between Ala Mhigo and the rest of Eorzea, helping whoever he can.
+After Haurchefaunt's death, Loki resigned from the Knights, and trained with magic until he could cast spells without uttering a word. He then began to work as a mercenary travelling all over Eorzea.
 ==Quotes==
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 "I am the author of my own story, don't make me write this chapter with your blood."

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 ===Appearance===
-Loki is a tall Miqo'te with white eyes and short black hair. He bears a red brand on the left side of his face.
+Loki is a tall Miqo'te with white eyes and ash blonde hair. He bears a red brand on the left side of his face.
 ===Behavior===

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 ===General===
-Loki is a marksman. He has extensive training with firearms, and even trained as a Machinist.
+Loki trained as a Knight and a Machinist, and uses both to the best of his ability. He usually defaults to his sword.
 ==Tendencies==

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 ===Appearance===
-Loki is a tall Miqo'te with white eyes and black hair. Occasionally he will have red or white highlights, and his hairstyle changes from time to time.
+Loki is a tall Miqo'te with white eyes and short black hair. He bears a red brand on the left side of his face.
 ===Behavior===
-On the surface, Loki seems easygoing and carefree, but he is a deeply troubled individual. Due to his past, he believes that he doesn't deserve what happiness he has. However this doesn't mean he takes it for granted, he cherishes each and every person he calls a friend.
+On the surface, Loki seems easygoing and carefree, but he is a deeply troubled individual. He tends to hide his emotions behind a fabricated smile, and doesn't open up to anyone easily.
 ===Military Position===
-Loki is a Second Lieutenant in the Maelstrom, and leads a squadron. He treats the members of his squadron as if they were his own family, and protects them as best as he can.
+Loki is a former member of the Temple Knights in Ishgard. He resigned after the Warrior of Light defeated Nidhogg the final time, leaving Ishgard to aid the Ala Mhigan resistance.
 ==Combat==
 ===General===
-Loki is a red mage, generally favoring spells over swordplay in most situations. When he does use his sword, he hits hard and fast, then quickly escapes to cast more spells.
+Loki is a marksman. He has extensive training with firearms, and even trained as a Machinist.
 ==Tendencies==
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 ==Clothing==
-Though his clothing varies, he generally tends to wear a leather jacket with thigh boots and arm guards.
+Though his clothing varies, he generally tends to wear a shirt and tie with a red jacket, black pants, and black shoes.
 ==Special Abilities==
 ===Aether Sight===
-If his vision is obstructed, Loki can use his ability to see the flow of Aether. He sometimes wears a special hood designed to obstruct his vision for this purpose. However, he is only able to use this ability if he cannot see.
+If his vision is obstructed, Loki can use his ability to see the flow of Aether. He sometimes wears a special hood designed to obstruct his vision for this purpose. However, he is only able to use this ability if he cannot see. He uses this in battle to aim for a person's weak spot.
 ===Enhanced Regeneration===
-Since he was a child, Loki's wounds have healed very quickly. While this has come in handy, it has a limit. It was able to heal a sword wound through his stomach, but he was overwhelmed and nearly killed by a group of Gobbues. One put him in their mouth and tried to eat him, but he shot a fireball down its throat. He has disliked Gobbues ever since.
+Since he was a child, Loki's wounds have healed very quickly. While this has come in handy, it has a limit. It was able to heal a sword wound through his stomach, but he was overwhelmed and nearly killed by a group of Gobbues. One put him in their mouth and tried to eat him, but he fired his gun down its throat.
 ==Relationships==
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 ===Friends===
-::* Squadron Members
+::* Haurchefaunt
 ===Enemies===
-Many families of deceased empire soldiers.
+None to speak of.
 ==Rumors==
 ::* "I heard he's originally from Ala Mhigo."
-::* "Did you hear about the mage at the Arcanist's Guild that carries a sword?"
+::* "They say there'should a former temple knight that uses a ''gun'', strange, isn't it?"
 ==History/Timeline==
 ===Childhood (5-12)===
-Loki was orphaned at a young age, and has no memories of his biological parents. He grew up in a war torn Ala Mhigo, taking whatever he could to survive.
+Loki was orphaned at age 5 when the Garlean Empire seized control of Ala Mhigo. He has no memory of his parents, other then a phrase his mother would say constantly, to this day he still quotes it when he needs reassuring: "You are the author of your own story."
-===Adolescence (13-24)===
+At 19, Loki joined the Temple Knights and remained until the end of the Dragon song War.
-===Adulthood (25)===
+===Adulthood (24-25)===
-When Loki arrived in Eorzea, he purchased a house. He eventually enlisted in the Maelstrom and quickly rose through the ranks, being promoted to Second Lieutenant in a year. He was then chosen to lead a squadron, and lived peacefully. He began travelling soon after that, seeking a way to atone for his past.
+After Haurchefaunt's death, Loki resigned from the Knights, and trained with a firearm. He had all but abandoned his sword, casting it into the abyss outside of Ishgard. Once he felt his training was sufficient, he left for La Noscea and purchased a house. He took jobs as a mercenary and continuously funneled money to the Ala Mhigan resistance, until the Allied victory at Baelsar's Wall. He now goes back and forth between Ala Mhigo and the rest of Eorzea, helping whoever he can.
 ==Quotes==
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 "Why do you ask so many questions?"
-(Trickster Mode) "*maniacal laughter* ''That's not it, is it? I hoped you'd be at least a little more fun than that!''"
+"I am the author of my own story, don't make me write this chapter with your blood."

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 Loki had a talent with magic, eventually wielding both it and a blade in order to become an assassin. He took jobs from anyone and everyone, killing many Garlean officials. He soon came to believe that he was protecting others by doing this, and was swiftly proven wrong. He tried to save a girl from execution by killing the one who had pressed charges against her, only to have a blade run though him as the axe took her. He was thrown into jail and scheduled for execution as well, only to be broken out by one of his clients. He escaped to Eorzea, eventually winding up in Limsa Lominsa.
-===Adulthood===
+===Adulthood (25)===
 When Loki arrived in Eorzea, he purchased a house. He eventually enlisted in the Maelstrom and quickly rose through the ranks, being promoted to Second Lieutenant in a year. He was then chosen to lead a squadron, and lived peacefully. He began travelling soon after that, seeking a way to atone for his past.