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 spacing:0.2em;"><center>✖ HISTORY ✖</center></div></span></h3>
-<div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;"> Eldest son of the Wyrth clan, an order of Raen conjurers who took the religion of the Steppes to Doma. Unlike their underwater counterparts, Luze and his family never integrated the idea of the kami into their rituals and practiced traditional medicine as they believed the Dawn Father would have approved. The eldest of seven sons to one father (Whom had many a concubine)- was destined to follow in his father's footsteps.
+<div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;"> Eldest son of the Wyrth family, an order of Raen conjurers who took the religion of the Steppes to Doma. Unlike their underwater counterparts, Luze and his family never integrated the idea of the kami into their rituals and practiced traditional medicine as they believed the Dawn Father would have approved. The eldest of seven sons to one father (Whom had many a concubine)- was destined to follow in his father's footsteps.
-The same footsteps that would eventually mutate conjury into an art of torture when the Garlean armies arrived, viscounts and matriarchs come to destroy the monarchy of Doma itself. With the emperor dead, Luze's father had cowered to the will of the Garlean blade and lost sight of Azim himself. Eventually, Luze would defect from his father's orders in an attempt to defend the vision of his gods. In turn, he would lose his own when his father would send Garlean soldiers to hunt him down. In the assult, he loses his an eyesight to an ensign, a thaumaturge. Such an assault begins decades worth of rage and vengeance in the name of his god, his honor, and his people.
+The same footsteps that would eventually mutate conjury into an art of torture when the Garlean armies arrived, viscounts and matriarchs come to destroy the monarchy of Doma itself. With the emperor dead, Luze's father had cowered to the will of the Garlean blade and lost sight of Azim himself. Eventually, Luze would defect from his father's orders in an attempt to defend the vision of his gods. In turn, he would lose his own when his father would send Garlean soldiers to hunt him down. In the assault, he loses his an eyesight to an ensign, a thaumaturge. Such an assault begins decades worth of rage and vengeance in the name of his god, his honor, and his people.
 Years later, he comes to Eorzea as a refugee, without home, family, and abandoned by the voice of his god. He finds comfort in the Ala Mhigans, and their description of Rhalgr. A god of war and lightning. A god of vengeance. Something which he could align himself with in an alien land. He joins the thaumaturge guild promptly after, eventually succumbing to the studies of Mhachi spellweavers and the ancient magics of Nald'thal. A vaguely godless man, who's emotional masks multiply with the stars, he takes heavy interest in the void and the beings which reside in the empty beyond. If he returns to Doma, he seeks to return with the powers of all things damned- a direct retaliation to the desecration of his conjury and a poetic revolt to the slaughter and entrapment of his countrymen.
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-<div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#26212B;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is an Au Ra of Raen heritage, and stands at a fairly moderate height of 6'9". He is not particularly strong; while sturdy in size. His hair is fairly close-cut, and his outfits tend to be rather outrageous, from gambling coats to the incredibly sharp hat of a seasoned black mage. When not entirely covered, it becomes apparent that his hands and wrists show signs of heavy scarring and a few callouses. A victim to terrible habit, his voice often carries a sound of smoke damage mixed with the accent he picked up during his extended stay in Limsa Lominsa upon arriving in Eorzea.
+<div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#26212B;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is an Au Ra of Raen heritage, and stands at a fairly moderate height of 6'9". He is not particularly strong; while sturdy in size. His hair varies from incredibly short, to a slight overgrowth. His outfits tend to be rather outrageous, from gambling coats to the incredibly sharp hat of a seasoned black mage. When not entirely covered, it becomes apparent that his hands and wrists show signs of heavy scarring and a few callouses. A victim to terrible habit, his voice often carries a sound of smoke damage mixed with the accent he picked up during his extended stay in Limsa Lominsa upon arriving in Eorzea.
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 : <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''GARLEANS'''. After a specific incident with his family that left him on the run from Garlean forces,he has acquired a specific sort of hate. </font></div>
-: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''FAMILY'''. Specifically, his own. After his own family reportedly "Sold him out to save their own hides", he was forced to deal with the rising chaos of the Garlean invasion hands on.</font></div>
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''FAMILY'''. Specifically, his own. After his own family reportedly "Sold him out to save their own hides", he was forced to deal with the rising chaos of the Garlean invasion hands on. While the eldest of seven children, he has no idea what has become of his brothers and sisters. He does not speak of them.</font></div>
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 : <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''THAUMATURGY'''. He is incredibly adept at setting things (Read: people) on fire. His other talents include dodo roasting and ale-cooling. His cudgel doubles as a tool for smacking skulls.</font></div>
 : <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''HEALING'''. He spent the majority of his young life training to become a white mage, and eventually stopped when his situation in Doma left him without a family and trainer. Did some under the table dealings in alchemy and restorative magic until he could get on a ship to Limsa Lominsa. Not your first medical option, kind of scary, but will do in a pinch.</font></div>
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px; background: #FFC204;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;font-family:Georgia;text-shadow: 1px 1px 1px black"><center>'''M O T I V A T I O N S '''</center></div></span></h3>
-: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''SURVIVAL''' - Coming from a refugee who has lost everything but his own sanity (Which, is debatable), he is mostly motivated by his own will to survive. Not for any specific altruistic reason, though. His motivation to survive is a sole rude gesture to the number of times where the twelve have tried to drag him to the lichyard.</font></div>
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''SURVIVAL''' - Coming from a refugee who has lost everything but his own sanity (Which, is debatable), he is mostly motivated by his own will to survive. Not for any specific altruistic reason, though. His motivation to survive is a sole rude gesture to the number of times where the gods have tried to drag him to the lichyard.</font></div>
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''REVENGE''' - There is something powerful about the desperation of a man who has lost what he has held dear. In turn, he is fully prepared to wreak the same havoc, for he does not comprehend the idea that there is anything left he could lose. Mostly.</font></div>
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 | '''Name Day''' - 24th Sun of the Sixth Astral Moon (November 24th)
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-| '''Deity''' - Rhalgr, the Destroyer; However, He still worships Azim above all other gods.
+| '''Deity''' - Rhalgr, the Destroyer; However, he still worships Azim above all other gods.
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 <div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is the epitome of "Wayward"- a Raen conjurer of Doma, turned refugee black mage- he is constantly moving. Emotionally jaded and fairly rude; Luze may be one of the skeeviest black mages around; at least, without some world-ending fantasy. He works on his own agenda, and will usually only move if it benefits himself in some way. Too agitated by consistent displacement, he prefers tangible and permanent rewards. That being said, those he cares about can always expect some kind of readiness. The snark, however, will never leave.    </div></div>
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-: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''TEMPER'''. With all his baggage, he is inevitably angrier and filled with nothing but contempt for most people and things. When upset, it can often lead to challenges, sputtering levels of rage, or fire. Astral fire usually will take precedent over anything else; while "Beating you upside the head with a cudgel" is saved for more mundane disagreements.  </font></div
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''SUSCEPTIBILITY'''. Luze is the definition of a man who has lost all sense of oneness with himself. An archaic priest of Azim from a now defunct conjury to a "follower" of Rhalgr, and eventually a dabbler in forbidden arcana of Nald'thal. What was once a man who strove to help his countrymen is now warped into someone who revels in the forbidden arts; especially as a means to get what he wants.   </font></div>

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 <div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is the epitome of "Wayward"- a Raen conjurer of Doma, turned refugee black mage- he is constantly moving. Emotionally jaded and fairly rude; Luze may be one of the skeeviest black mages around; at least, without some world-ending fantasy. He works on his own agenda, and will usually only move if it benefits himself in some way. Too agitated by consistent displacement, he prefers tangible and permanent rewards. That being said, those he cares about can always expect some kind of readiness. The snark, however, will never leave.    </div></div>
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 : <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''TEMPER'''. With all his baggage, he is inevitably angrier and filled with nothing but contempt for most people and things. When upset, it can often lead to challenges, sputtering levels of rage, or fire. Astral fire usually will take precedent over anything else; while "Beating you upside the head with a cudgel" is saved for more mundane disagreements.  </font></div
-: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''SUSCEPTIBILITY'''. Luze is the definition of a man who has lost all sense of oneness with himself. An archaic priest of Azim from a now defunct conjury to a "follower" of Rhalgr, and eventually a dabbler in forbidden arcana of Nald'thal. What was once a man who strove to help his countrymen is now warped into someone who revels in the forbidden arts; especially as a means to get what he wants.   </font></div>
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	<div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is the epitome of "Wayward"- a Raen conjurer of Doma, turned refugee black mage- he is constantly moving. Emotionally jaded and fairly rude; Luze may be one of the skeeviest black mages around; at least, without some world-ending fantasy. He works on his own agenda, and will usually only move if it benefits himself in some way. Too agitated by consistent displacement, he prefers tangible and permanent rewards. That being said, those he cares about can always expect some kind of readiness. The snark, however, will never leave. </div></div>		<div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is the epitome of "Wayward"- a Raen conjurer of Doma, turned refugee black mage- he is constantly moving. Emotionally jaded and fairly rude; Luze may be one of the skeeviest black mages around; at least, without some world-ending fantasy. He works on his own agenda, and will usually only move if it benefits himself in some way. Too agitated by consistent displacement, he prefers tangible and permanent rewards. That being said, those he cares about can always expect some kind of readiness. The snark, however, will never leave. </div></div>

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−	<div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;"> Eldest son of the Wyrth clan, an order of Raen conjurers who took the religion of the Steppes to Doma. Unlike their underwater counterparts, Luze and his family never integrated the idea of the kami into their rituals and practiced traditional medicine as they believed the Dawn Father would have approved. The eldest of seven sons to one father (Whom had many a concubine)- was destined to follow in his father's footsteps.

−	The same footsteps that would eventually mutate conjury into an art of torture when the Garlean armies arrived, viscounts and matriarchs come to destroy the monarchy of Doma itself. With the emperor dead, Luze's father had cowered to the will of the Garlean blade and lost sight of Azim himself. Eventually, Luze would defect from his father's orders in an attempt to defend the vision of his gods. In turn, he would lose his own when his father would send Garlean soldiers to hunt him down. In the assult, he loses his an eyesight to an ensign, a thaumaturge. Such an assault begins decades worth of rage and vengeance in the name of his god, his honor, and his people.
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−	Years later, he comes to Eorzea as a refugee, without home, family, and abandoned by the voice of his god. He finds comfort in the Ala Mhigans, and their description of Rhalgr. A god of war and lightning. A god of vengeance. Something which he could align himself with in an alien land. He joins the thaumaturge guild promptly after, eventually succumbing to the studies of Mhachi spellweavers and the ancient magics of Nald'thal. A vaguely godless man, who's emotional masks multiply with the stars, he takes heavy interest in the void and the beings which reside in the empty beyond. If he returns to Doma, he seeks to return with the powers of all things damned- a direct retaliation to the desecration of his conjury and a poetic revolt to the slaughter and entrapment of his countrymen.
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−	A talented liar, drinker, and gambler- Luze conceals his purposes and drives under coarse swears and ornery hostilities. How far the holy can fall, he'll say, before breaking into the rasping laughter of a man who thinks of the sentiment as chocobo shite. Very few have been known to pry the sincerity from his crooked hands, but those who succeed have found a companion for life. </div></div>

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 <div align=justify><div style="padding: 7px 4px;font-size:13px; color:#444146;font-family:Georgia;">Luze is the epitome of "Wayward"- a Raen conjurer of Doma, turned refugee black mage- he is constantly moving. Emotionally jaded and fairly rude; Luze may be one of the skeeviest black mages around; at least, without some world-ending fantasy. He works on his own agenda, and will usually only move if it benefits himself in some way. Too agitated by consistent displacement, he prefers tangible and permanent rewards. That being said, those he cares about can always expect some kind of readiness. The snark, however, will never leave.    </div></div>
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-: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''TEMPER'''. With all his baggage, he is inevitably angrier and filled with nothing but contempt for most people and things. When upset, it can often lead to challenges, sputtering levels of rage, or fire. Astral fire usually will take precedent over anything else; while "Beating you upside the head with a cudgel" is saved for more mundane disagreements.  </font></div>
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''TEMPER'''. With all his baggage, he is inevitably angrier and filled with nothing but contempt for most people and things. When upset, it can often lead to challenges, sputtering levels of rage, or fire. Astral fire usually will take precedent over anything else; while "Beating you upside the head with a cudgel" is saved for more mundane disagreements.  </font></div
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''SUSCEPTIBILITY'''. Luze is the definition of a man who has lost all sense of oneness with himself. An archaic priest of Azim from a now defunct conjury to a "follower" of Rhalgr, and eventually a dabbler in forbidden arcana of Nald'thal. What was once a man who strove to help his countrymen is now warped into someone who revels in the forbidden arts; especially as a means to get what he wants.   </font></div>
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 ! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Khonrahd_Ackhunleq#tab=Details Kohnrad Ackhunleq]</b> <i>Traveling Partner</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#F02311;" size="2">♥</font><b>)</b> - <b>Eorzea's Pissiest Bard</b></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;"><b>Character's Thoughts:</b> <i>" Don't ever think I've met an angrier bard in m' entire life. Broody as th' seven hells, straight faced, takes no shit, an absolutely perfect victim fer friendship."</i></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;"><b>Character's Thoughts:</b> <i>" I want people to really guess which one a' us is th' nice one. Because usually, they're wrong."</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;">To say Luze has not spent most of his time as a refugee being aware of Khonrad would be a blatant lie. Originally on the same ship from Doma to Limsa Lominsa, they never truly spoke until Garlean tensions began rising further in Eorzea. That being said, Luze was the one to initiate conversation; as well as start the incredibly tense team between the two of them. While brash as hell, his personal history leads to him being a bit of a brooding mother hen to Khonrahd, in a romantic sense. Despite their positive connection, they're often doomed to miscommunication from experience and culture.</div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;">To say Luze has not spent most of his time as a refugee being aware of Khonrad would be a blatant lie. Originally on the same ship from Doma to Limsa Lominsa, they never truly spoke until Garlean tensions began rising further in Eorzea. That being said, Luze was the one to initiate conversation; as well as start the incredibly tense team between the two of them. While brash as hell, his personal history leads to him being a bit of a brooding mother hen to Khonrahd, in a weirdly romantic sense. Despite their positive connection, they're often doomed to miscommunication from experience and culture. Even so, Luze may often be caught muttering something about Nhaama and Azim, though it is unclear what he means by any of this.</div>
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-<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">''Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Etiam pretium at magna nec volutpat. Ut et fermentum erat, a eleifend justo. Nunc facilisis tellus sem, at suscipit nunc semper sit amet. Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Cras vehicula vehicula risus vitae molestie. Mauris dui dui, rhoncus vitae lacus vitae, varius blandit metus. Maecenas ipsum justo, varius at tortor sit amet, scelerisque elementum arcu. Maecenas consectetur libero in mi molestie facilisis. Nam nec lectus pellentesque, ullamcorper tellus semper, sollicitudin nulla. Nam eget nulla sed nulla tincidunt ultrices quis a sapien. Ut faucibus bibendum nulla, ut ultrices dolor convallis in. Nam efficitur dui nec dolor pretium tempor. Nam tempor vestibulum eros, sed eleifend odio congue quis. Duis laoreet sodales augue, at mollis risus malesuada et.''</div></div>
+<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">''These are some things that you can use to strike up discussions with the lad himself, but almost anything will do just fine. ''</div></div>
 :<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''Luze's family worked in specifically treasonous ways during the Garlean invasion of Doma. Working with a false sense of piety and righteousness in return for protection by the empire, many Domans (Raen and Xaela alike) were left to die in the conflict. Luze was specifically sentenced to death after refusing assistance to a Garlean marshal; specifically over the health of another dying Xaela. He carries an incredible amount of spite for the empire, and incredible amounts of guilt for those he couldn't save. Rarely does he speak of his family, or the victims, or the patients he lost. But, if prompted, a tale or two might just slip out.  ''</div></div>
 :<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''As a Black Mage; Luze is incredibly unstable. His mental health always seems to be in a very particular sort of balance. That being said, he suffers from incredibly odd nightmares, and often speaks under his breath regarding the void and infernal auditory hallucinations. There are specific jobs that have left him with his mind slightly scrambled, and getting him to clarify on what happened may be the task of the century. ''</div></div>
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 <div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">''I’m usually pretty tight in my lore coherency in terms of FFXIV. Currently, however, I am in the middle of the “Realm Reborn” arc. If my lore suddenly gets a bit weird, pop me a message for correction..''</div></div>
-:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''No changes required.''</div></div>
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 | '''Race''' - Au Ra of the Raen Clan
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-| '''Age'''  - Thirty-Six Years
+| '''Age'''  - Forty-One Years
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 | '''Name Day''' - 24th Sun of the Sixth Astral Moon (November 24th)
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-| '''Deity''' - Rhalgr, the Destroyer
+| '''Deity''' - Rhalgr, the Destroyer; However, He still worships Azim above all other gods.
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 : <font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <b>Occupation:</b> A black mage with an unsettling knack for alchemy and healing.
-: <font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <b>Hair color:</b> Pale blond hair, short and swept back in a lazy kind of way.
+: <font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <b>Hair color:</b> Pale blond hair, grown out into an odd sort of thin ponytail.
 : <font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <b>Eye color:</b> Heterochromatic; Left eye is gold, Right is white.
 : <font style="color:#FFC204;" size="3">■</font> <b>Complexion:</b> Taupe-grey toned skin with sand-toned scales; carrying a fair number of scars in varying ages.

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-! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Khonrahd_Ackhunleq#tab=Details Kohnrad Ackhunleq]</b> <i>Traveling Partner</i>.  <b>(</b> ✔ <b>)</b> - <b>Eorzea's Pissiest Bard</b></div>
+! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Khonrahd_Ackhunleq#tab=Details Kohnrad Ackhunleq]</b> <i>Traveling Partner</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#F02311;" size="2">♥</font><b>)</b> - <b>Eorzea's Pissiest Bard</b></div>
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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;"><b>Character's Thoughts:</b> <i>" Don't ever think I've met an angrier bard in m' entire life. Broody as th' seven hells, straight faced, takes no shit, an absolutely perfect victim fer friendship."</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;">To say Luze has not spent most of his time as a refugee being aware of Khonrad would be a blatant lie. Originally on the same ship from Doma to Limsa Lominsa, they never truly spoke until Garlean tensions began rising further in Eorzea. That being said, Luze was the one to initiate conversation; as well as start the incredibly tense team between the two of them.</div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px;">To say Luze has not spent most of his time as a refugee being aware of Khonrad would be a blatant lie. Originally on the same ship from Doma to Limsa Lominsa, they never truly spoke until Garlean tensions began rising further in Eorzea. That being said, Luze was the one to initiate conversation; as well as start the incredibly tense team between the two of them. While brash as hell, his personal history leads to him being a bit of a brooding mother hen to Khonrahd, in a romantic sense. Despite their positive connection, they're often doomed to miscommunication from experience and culture.</div>
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-[[File:Luze Room2.png|thumb|Caption]]
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+File:Luze Room3.png
-[[File:Luze_Nohat1.png|thumb|Caption]]
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