Lyse Crofte - Revision history

Lyse Falen: redirect put up

2016-08-04T23:52:55Z

redirect put up

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Lyse Crofte: had to switch out a youtube link for something else

2016-05-31T04:25:33Z

had to switch out a youtube link for something else

Lyse Crofte: new song under relationships

2016-04-30T22:38:38Z

new song under relationships

Lyse Crofte: replaced a broken song link with a new one

2016-04-28T23:48:18Z

replaced a broken song link with a new one

Lyse Crofte: noticed a weird thing and clarified

2016-04-28T23:33:50Z

noticed a weird thing and clarified

Lyse Crofte: correcting redundancy

2016-04-26T22:02:18Z

correcting redundancy

Lyse Crofte: added a couple of songs to relationships

2016-04-05T23:30:25Z

added a couple of songs to relationships

Lyse Crofte: marked the marks better

2016-04-05T21:28:29Z

marked the marks better

Lyse Crofte: added distinguishing marks

2016-04-05T21:27:35Z

added distinguishing marks

Lyse Crofte: affiliation addition

2016-04-05T21:01:17Z

affiliation addition

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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><i>"I love the way that your heart breaks, with every injustice and deadly fate."</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">Even when Lyse and Khyros are apart they look out for one another, and have become more like family than she had ever anticipated.  He is as much the hero she wishes she could be but knows she can't succumb to and for that she'll always protect his best interest.  Often being forced to check up on him and make sure he is eating and/or sleeping, their relationship is affectionate if not overtly so; one would die for the other. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KbdCeWoEH1U "1"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FwVIKUQ__B0 "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KCajl_zZbTw "3"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOJ91H4mraU "4"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j11OFCXPKK0 "5"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqeaIachxcM "6"]
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">Even when Lyse and Khyros are apart they look out for one another, and have become more like family than she had ever anticipated.  He is as much the hero she wishes she could be but knows she can't succumb to and for that she'll always protect his best interest.  Often being forced to check up on him and make sure he is eating and/or sleeping, their relationship is affectionate if not overtly so; one would die for the other. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KbdCeWoEH1U "1"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FwVIKUQ__B0 "2"][http://www.jpopsuki.tv/video/SPYAIR---JUST-ONE-LIFE/01d0a1e3f03c2a6cb4e6a6378bb8ca2f "3"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOJ91H4mraU "4"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j11OFCXPKK0 "5"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqeaIachxcM "6"]
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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><i>"I try to picture me without you but I can't."</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">Tayn started as her friend, then they become lovers, and now in some ways they've moved even beyond that.  Partners in every right, Lyse and Tayn work together almost as well as Lily and Tayn do, and there're times when they don't need to say anything to communicate complicated thoughts to one another.  Intense eye-contact is more than just a passing thing, and often they do not realise how they are acting around others until it's pointed out.  Extensions of one another's best points, they're comrades and partners on every level. <i>They're on pretty good terms, considering.</i> <ref>I will continue to give him shit about this until he updates his thing. ;p</ref> [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xKVcVSYmesU "1"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LSvOTw8UH6s "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jEmTH7-nQUM "3"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2zNSgSzhBfM "4"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vhicdxl0Q3M "5"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZVDz_UyISY "6"]
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">Tayn started as her friend, then they become lovers, and now in some ways they've moved even beyond that.  Partners in every right, Lyse and Tayn work together almost as well as Lily and Tayn do, and there're times when they don't need to say anything to communicate complicated thoughts to one another.  Intense eye-contact is more than just a passing thing, and often they do not realise how they are acting around others until it's pointed out.  Extensions of one another's best points, they're comrades and partners on every level. <i>They're on pretty good terms, considering.</i> <ref>I will continue to give him shit about this until he updates his thing. ;p</ref> [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xKVcVSYmesU "1"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LSvOTw8UH6s "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jEmTH7-nQUM "3"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2zNSgSzhBfM "4"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vhicdxl0Q3M "5"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZVDz_UyISY "6"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=svyLMR7yjhU "7"]
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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><i>"The world is a stage of complete chaos"</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">If ever there was a person to be the song to Lyse's back-beat, it would be Aurelia. Spunky and tenacious, they share qualities though Aurelia maintains a sort of effervescence that Lyse can never hope to accomplish; often hiding a deep sadness, Aurelia's perky, take no prisoner attitude makes Lyse extremely happy and protective of the girl who has more or less become like her little sister. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTm8xlK_toE "1"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rqs_HcsLVPM "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsCzGswJFDI "3"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyezE-lFjdc "4"]</div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">If ever there was a person to be the song to Lyse's back-beat, it would be Aurelia. Spunky and tenacious, they share qualities though Aurelia maintains a sort of effervescence that Lyse can never hope to accomplish; often hiding a deep sadness, Aurelia's perky, take no prisoner attitude makes Lyse extremely happy and protective of the girl who has more or less become like her little sister. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTm8xlK_toE "1"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CIBxYUclz0I "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsCzGswJFDI "3"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyezE-lFjdc "4"]</div>
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 <div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #743e39; color:#ffffff;font-family:Georgia;font-size:12px;text-shadow: 1px 1px 1px black"><b>◢ Uncommon Rumors -</b> ''A little more difficult to hear. Use sparingly or ask first!''</div>
-* <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:12px">"She was out in Dragonhead once... saw her slip out of the gate and down into the valley near there and then she just seemed to lose it and cut a bloody path through that thing... I ran back home after that, some things a man avoids..."  <b>-- Coerthan Woman.</b></div>
+* <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:12px">"She was out in Dragonhead once... saw her slip out of the gate and down into the valley near there and then she just seemed to lose it and cut a bloody path through that thing... I ran back home after that, some things a woman avoids..."  <b>-- Coerthan Woman.</b></div>
 * <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:12px">"Seems no stranger to battle... once saw her walking through the shroud with her face spattered in blood and a distant look on her face.  Did I approach her? I'm standin' here, ain't I?! No!"  <b>-- Man from Gridania.</b></div>
 * <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:12px">"More I think about it, more I think I remember hearing about her from stories my brother tol' about that battle... not gonna repeat it here!"  <b>-- Exaggerating Teen.</b></div>

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 <h3><span class="mw-headline" id="General"><div style="font-family:Georgia;padding:10px 15px; background: #0a0a0f;font-size:16px;color:#ffffff; text-shadow: 1px 1px 3px silver;letter-spacing:0.2em;"><center>APPEARANCE</center></div></span></h3>
-<p>Tall and sturdy, Lyse stands fairly tall, but on the short end of average for a Highlander female, and though her body is lithe and muscled, there is a definite curve near her hips and bust that overlay that muscle. Red hair and pale skin make it seem unlikely she grew up in the desert, and her eyes are a pale shade of gray that borders on white. Scars cover most of her body when visible, a plethora of wounds marked forever on her flesh; from Lichtenberg figures from hands-on lightning magic usage, to slash and puncture scars from various edged weapons, and even a few bite marks, from beast and man alike.
+<p>Tall and sturdy, Lyse stands fairly average for a Highlander female, and though her body is lithe and muscled, there is a definite curve near her hips and bust that overlay that muscle. Red hair and pale skin make it seem unlikely she grew up in the desert, and her eyes are a pale shade of gray that borders on white. Scars cover most of her body when visible, a plethora of wounds marked forever on her flesh; from Lichtenberg figures from hands-on lightning magic usage, to slash and puncture scars from various edged weapons, and even a few bite marks, from beast and man alike.
 In that, she is somehow the epitome of a juxtaposition between feminine and strength that is often off-set by the fact that her eyes -- framed as they may be by dark lashes -- often seem hard and unapologetic, and her face is generally blank when left to her own devices.</p>
 <p>Lyse has a few distinguishing marks that should be noticeable in various states of undress:</p>

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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><i>"The world is a stage of complete chaos"</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">If ever there was a person to be the song to Lyse's back-beat, it would be Aurelia. Spunky and tenacious, they share qualities though Aurelia maintains a sort of effervescence that Lyse can never hope to accomplish; often hiding a deep sadness, Aurelia's perky, take no prisoner attitude makes Lyse extremely happy and protective of the girl who has more or less become like her little sister. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTm8xlK_toE "1"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rqs_HcsLVPM "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsCzGswJFDI "3"]</div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">If ever there was a person to be the song to Lyse's back-beat, it would be Aurelia. Spunky and tenacious, they share qualities though Aurelia maintains a sort of effervescence that Lyse can never hope to accomplish; often hiding a deep sadness, Aurelia's perky, take no prisoner attitude makes Lyse extremely happy and protective of the girl who has more or less become like her little sister. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTm8xlK_toE "1"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rqs_HcsLVPM "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xsCzGswJFDI "3"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyezE-lFjdc "4"]</div>
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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><i>"I will fall and rise again."</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">Time changed Lecede in a way that Lyse hadn't anticipated, and through the year since they met he's evolved into something stoic and guarded, and yet still she seeks to help him. A consummate protector, Lecede has risen from a young man with little direction to following in the footsteps of 'the best' in taking a charge and keeping them safe. As much as Aurelia is her little sister, Lecede is her brother and she'll stop at nothing to see them both safe. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWNkqfn5oh4 "1"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFQuIr4Mjig "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x3-xJk82nJM "3"] </div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">Time changed Lecede in a way that Lyse hadn't anticipated, and through the year since they met he's evolved into something stoic and guarded, and yet still she seeks to help him. A consummate protector, Lecede has risen from a young man with little direction to following in the footsteps of 'the best' in taking a charge and keeping them safe. As much as Aurelia is her little sister, Lecede is her brother and she'll stop at nothing to see them both safe. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWNkqfn5oh4 "1"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cFQuIr4Mjig "2"][https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x3-xJk82nJM "3"] [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4J7K3yacig4 "4"] </div>
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 <p><font style="color:#4d1a00;" size="2" family="Georgia"><b>Lyse Crofte</b></font> '''(Pronunciation''': Lease Crawft''')''', a woman given to fits of pique and random mood swings, but generally fully capable of sticking to her own moral compass, and a survivor of the battle of Carteneau, was born <b>Lyse Hilde Marke</b>, daughter of a fairly well-known member of the still fighting Ala Mhigan Resistance.  Upon coming of age, she chose a name at random and tacked it onto the end of her own to form herself into a new person, instead of being either burdened or gifted by the name her mother had made for their family. She even went so far as to put most of the money her mother had given her to get a start into a fund that she rarely draws from.</p>
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 In that, she is somehow the epitome of a juxtaposition between feminine and strength that is often off-set by the fact that her eyes -- framed as they may be by dark lashes -- often seem hard and unapologetic, and her face is generally blank when left to her own devices.</p>
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 | stat_4_value = Chaotic Good
 | stat_5 = Affiliation
-| stat_5_value = Jutat De
+| stat_5_value = Jutat De/Immortal Flames
 | stat_6 =  Jobs
 | stat_6_value = DRK/DRG/MNK