Marrow Ochi - Revision history

MarrowOchi at 05:38, 27 May 2017

2017-05-27T05:38:34Z

MarrowOchi: /* General */

2016-08-27T08:17:02Z

‎General

MarrowOchi at 07:45, 28 July 2015

2015-07-28T07:45:20Z

MarrowOchi at 01:45, 28 July 2015

2015-07-28T01:45:06Z

MarrowOchi at 05:11, 24 December 2014

2014-12-24T05:11:24Z

MarrowOchi at 02:40, 29 September 2014

2014-09-29T02:40:40Z

Zarpd: /* PC Rumors */

2014-04-07T05:53:47Z

‎PC Rumors

ForbieJD: /* PC Rumors */

2014-03-13T20:38:05Z

‎PC Rumors

MarrowOchi at 02:33, 8 March 2014

2014-03-08T02:33:21Z

MarrowOchi at 01:36, 14 February 2014

2014-02-14T01:36:34Z

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = ??
-| race = Au Ra (Previously Miqo'te)
+| race = Au Ra / Synthetic Primal
 | clan = ??
 | stat_1 =
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 === General ===
 ===Appearance===
-Marrow is short; shorter than most Au Ra, easily only around four feet tall. Her face is littered with various marks, created by deep scars in the face tissue. She also has a large X crossing her small chest, from the front all the way meeting at her spine; this is another of the various sealing marks, except much, much larger.
+Marrow is short; shorter than most Au Ra, easily only around four feet tall. Her face is littered with various marks, created by deep scars in the face tissue. She also has a large X crossing her small chest, from the front all the way meeting at her spine, likely how the Allagan Engine was placed into her.
 ===Behavior===
-Marrow is a very shy, yet heroistic individual whom believes everyone, good or bad, has a chance to do great things. She puts herself on the line when she can, but most of the time she's simply picking flowers.
+Over the past few years, Marrow has gone from fairly innocent, to riddled with anxiety and depression that has left her looking for something to hold on to.
 ==Combat==
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 === Common Rumors ===
-::*&nbsp;"Did you see that? She drunk herself retarded, then stepped right back up like it was nothing!"
+::*&nbsp;"Did you see that? She drunk herself dumb, then stepped right back up like it was nothing!"
 ::*&nbsp;???
 ::*&nbsp;???

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 Marrow had been alone for most of her life. She was born in the wild snow of Coerthas, and abandoned as a baby. She was found by a group of Black Mages who happened across where she was abandoned.
-Raised in their arts, she was clearly not exactly adept at utilizing the dark magics. However, what she was good at, was making things solid. Rather than flinging around deadly spells, she instead made small objects out of aether.
+Raised in their arts, she was clearly not exactly adept at utilizing the dark magics. However, what she was good at, was making things solid. Rather than flinging around deadly spells, she instead made small objects out of aether, came about as a side effect from her Echo.
 This, sadly, was most of her life; up until the year she left in order to explore the world, Marrow was constantly under pressure to produce more powerful adept magic. Instead of becoming distressed, she instead kept making objects out of the aether, mostly out of her favorite of the elements: Ice.
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 It was there she came across her then-best friend, Natalie McBeef, through being introduced after Marrow was found skulking around. While Natalie was uncertain of what to make of the girl, they still became good friends. It was then she was introduced to certain adventurers throughout Eorzea, such as Chokho Viqqoh, C'kayah Nunh, and Kage Kiryuu. She made a lot of friends.
-Months later, the knowledge of Natalie's death found it's way to her. Marrow fell into a deep depression, and fled Eorzea to the icy lands of Coerthas and Ishgard. Hiding out in an abandoned shelter in the middle of Coerthas, she eventually started making her way back to Ul'dah as the 'superhero' known as Frostdaw. She believed that through Frostdaw she could live as the hero she wanted Eorzea to have, and the best way to honor her best friend's memory.
+Months later, the knowledge of Natalie's death found it's way to her. Marrow fell into a deep depression, and fled Eorzea to the icy lands of Coerthas and Ishgard. Hiding out in an abandoned shelter in the middle of Coerthas, she eventually started making her way back to her home of Gridania, and decided to live out in an abandoned house in the living districts. Some time later, a group known as the Anemos Circle, now the Silver Lily, had bought and refurbished the house, with Marrow living in a secret room inside the house, occasionally using a stealth generator to sneak into their food pantry.
 ===Appearance===

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = ??
-| race = Au Ra (Previously Miqo'te) (Experimental Life Form)
+| race = Au Ra (Previously Miqo'te)
 | clan = ??
 | stat_1 =
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 === General ===
-Marrow's entire existence is debted to the Ascians. They gave to her a shard the power of the Ice Primal, Shiva, when she was merely a baby, utilizing an aetherite-powered Allagan control unit connected to her body. With it she could generate ice to form weapons, and make the area around her much colder than usual, but it was nothing more than a shard. Regardless, the Allagan unit sped her aging, and over the years of torment she experienced through the Ascian's experimentation on her.
+Marrow had been alone for most of her life. She was born in the wild snow of Coerthas, and abandoned as a baby. She was found by a group of Black Mages who happened across where she was abandoned.
-However, five years after her birth, when her body had finished it's accelerated aging (physically, around 16 cycles), the North Shroud laboratory was destroyed by the Elder Primal, Odin. Marrow had hid from him, being the only one there with the sense of mind not to get into the way of such a creature, and was one of the few remaining survivors of the carnage.
+Raised in their arts, she was clearly not exactly adept at utilizing the dark magics. However, what she was good at, was making things solid. Rather than flinging around deadly spells, she instead made small objects out of aether.
-After leaving the destroyed facility, it was some time before she found recluse in Gridania. In the time that she did, she learned she could "temper" animals with the Allagan engine, not entirely enslaving them but at the very least making them somewhat obedient. She tempered a Coeurl, whom she named "Caramel", and fled to Thanalan.
+This, sadly, was most of her life; up until the year she left in order to explore the world, Marrow was constantly under pressure to produce more powerful adept magic. Instead of becoming distressed, she instead kept making objects out of the aether, mostly out of her favorite of the elements: Ice.
-It was there she came across her then-best friend, Natalie McBeef, through being introduced after Marrow was found skulking around. While Natalie was uncertain of what to make of the girl, they still became good friends. It was then she was introduced to certain adventurers throughout Eorzea, such as Chokho Viqqoh, C'kayah Nunh, and Kage Kiryuu. She made a lot of friends, but it was all going to get very awkward between them.
+She was given no schooling on anything besides magic, and because of this, grew up quite immature and unknowing about the world around her. She was barely allowed outside the house she trained in. One day, she snuck out, finding her way to the city of Ul'dah.
-On a sudden day, Natalie asked for Marrow to attempt tempering her, to give her some of the power 'just in case'. Hesitant at first, she complied, but was unaware of how badly things were going to be. Natalie began literally worshipping her the day after, and it was some time before Marrow and her compatriots were able to find a way to de-Temper her; by forcing Natalie to kill Marrow.
+It was there she came across her then-best friend, Natalie McBeef, through being introduced after Marrow was found skulking around. While Natalie was uncertain of what to make of the girl, they still became good friends. It was then she was introduced to certain adventurers throughout Eorzea, such as Chokho Viqqoh, C'kayah Nunh, and Kage Kiryuu. She made a lot of friends.
 Months later, the knowledge of Natalie's death found it's way to her. Marrow fell into a deep depression, and fled Eorzea to the icy lands of Coerthas and Ishgard. Hiding out in an abandoned shelter in the middle of Coerthas, she eventually started making her way back to Ul'dah as the 'superhero' known as Frostdaw. She believed that through Frostdaw she could live as the hero she wanted Eorzea to have, and the best way to honor her best friend's memory.
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 ===Appearance===
-Marrow is short; shorter than most Au Ra, easily only around four feet tall. Due to her increased aging of 3 and a half years until the Twentieth Moon, she has grown to roughly 17 years old within the span of the five year recovery from Bahamut's destruction. Her face is littered with various sealing marks, created by deep scars in the face tissue. She also has a large X crossing her small chest, from the front all the way meeting at her spine; this is another of the various sealing marks, except much, much larger.
+Marrow is short; shorter than most Au Ra, easily only around four feet tall. Her face is littered with various marks, created by deep scars in the face tissue. She also has a large X crossing her small chest, from the front all the way meeting at her spine; this is another of the various sealing marks, except much, much larger.
 ===Behavior===

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = ??
-| race = Synthetic Primalkin
+| race = Au Ra (Previously Miqo'te) (Experimental Life Form)
 | clan = ??
 | stat_1 =
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 === General ===
-Marrow is the daughter of the Elder Primal known as Bahamut, and another known as Shiva.. Brought forth into the world by the Ascians to have a back-up humanoid Bahamut, she is known as the Bahamutkin. After the events of the End of the Era, she was brought on to end the second Era by her adoptive parents, the Ascians who brought her into the world. She, however, rejected their choice, and instead fled into the world, never looking back. Her Primal abilities have made her scared and fearful of the world around her, for both knowing that she is a monster bred to destroy, and for the people that would seek to use her. She holds her abilities back with crystal.
+Marrow's entire existence is debted to the Ascians. They gave to her a shard the power of the Ice Primal, Shiva, when she was merely a baby, utilizing an aetherite-powered Allagan control unit connected to her body. With it she could generate ice to form weapons, and make the area around her much colder than usual, but it was nothing more than a shard. Regardless, the Allagan unit sped her aging, and over the years of torment she experienced through the Ascian's experimentation on her.
--For most of her life, she was lead to believe her mother was a Miqo'te woman known as Eve. But this, was a lie by the Ascians. The coalition of two Primals creating a child was groundbreaking, but the child was nothing more than a spirit, and so she was forced into the body of an Ascian Miqo'te baby, bred in their laboratories.
+However, five years after her birth, when her body had finished it's accelerated aging (physically, around 16 cycles), the North Shroud laboratory was destroyed by the Elder Primal, Odin. Marrow had hid from him, being the only one there with the sense of mind not to get into the way of such a creature, and was one of the few remaining survivors of the carnage.
---
+After leaving the destroyed facility, it was some time before she found recluse in Gridania. In the time that she did, she learned she could "temper" animals with the Allagan engine, not entirely enslaving them but at the very least making them somewhat obedient. She tempered a Coeurl, whom she named "Caramel", and fled to Thanalan.
-After a long journey to an unknown continent, Marrow found the 'engine' that kept her with her powers inside her body. She took it upon herself to tear them from her, and immediately began the process to make herself a normal Miqo'te. Her eyes have turned a bright yellow shade as a result.
+It was there she came across her then-best friend, Natalie McBeef, through being introduced after Marrow was found skulking around. While Natalie was uncertain of what to make of the girl, they still became good friends. It was then she was introduced to certain adventurers throughout Eorzea, such as Chokho Viqqoh, C'kayah Nunh, and Kage Kiryuu. She made a lot of friends, but it was all going to get very awkward between them.
---
+On a sudden day, Natalie asked for Marrow to attempt tempering her, to give her some of the power 'just in case'. Hesitant at first, she complied, but was unaware of how badly things were going to be. Natalie began literally worshipping her the day after, and it was some time before Marrow and her compatriots were able to find a way to de-Temper her; by forcing Natalie to kill Marrow.
-The death of her best friend had troubled her deeply. As a way to remember her, she decided to take the burden and continue her life as the Primalkin she was 'born' to be.
+After some time, they managed to pull it off, Marrow forcing Natalie to stab her through the chest. But Marrow's Allagan engine would not allow her to die for good. It disappeared, and reappeared at the last place Caramel was; New Gridania's gardens. Her body reconstructed itself from the aether. It took a week for her to be back on her feet, but she still did in time.
 ===Appearance===
-Marrow is short; shorter than most Miqo'te, easily only around four feet tall. Due to her increased aging of 3 and a half years until the Twentieth Moon, she has grown to roughly 17 years old within the span of the five year recovery from Bahamut's destruction. Her face is littered with various sealing marks, created by deep scars in the face tissue. She also has a large X crossing her small chest, from the front all the way meeting at her spine; this is another of the various sealing marks, except much, much larger.
+Marrow is short; shorter than most Au Ra, easily only around four feet tall. Due to her increased aging of 3 and a half years until the Twentieth Moon, she has grown to roughly 17 years old within the span of the five year recovery from Bahamut's destruction. Her face is littered with various sealing marks, created by deep scars in the face tissue. She also has a large X crossing her small chest, from the front all the way meeting at her spine; this is another of the various sealing marks, except much, much larger.
 ===Behavior===
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 ===PC Rumors===
 ::* "I feel like...you were made to do great things." - [[Pyralis Targaryen]]
 ::* "If you want to see squandered potential personified, you've come to the right place.  There are times when I think she could save the world." - [[Chokho Viqqoh]]

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = ??
-| race = Miqo'te (Previously Synthetic Primalkin)
+| race = Synthetic Primalkin
 | clan = ??
 | stat_1 =
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 After a long journey to an unknown continent, Marrow found the 'engine' that kept her with her powers inside her body. She took it upon herself to tear them from her, and immediately began the process to make herself a normal Miqo'te. Her eyes have turned a bright yellow shade as a result.
 ===Appearance===

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = ??
-| race = Primalkin (Shiva/Bahamut Garlean Experiment Hybrid)
+| race = Miqo'te (Previously Synthetic Primalkin)
 | clan = ??
 | stat_1 =
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 -For most of her life, she was lead to believe her mother was a Miqo'te woman known as Eve. But this, was a lie by the Ascians. The coalition of two Primals creating a child was groundbreaking, but the child was nothing more than a spirit, and so she was forced into the body of an Ascian Miqo'te baby, bred in their laboratories.
 ===Appearance===
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 ===Behavior===
-She is usually unwilling to talk to others; either by her trying to change the subject and flee, outright denying people talking to her, or just up and running away at the first sign of contact. However, this is due to her powers; she's absolutely terrified of hurting other people and instead finds a life of solitude the 'only way' to get by. She can be upbeat, and on many occasions almost eccentric, but this is due to her complete lack of social norms, and what comes off as awkward or just plain weird to others is just how Marrow thinks things are.
+Marrow is a very shy, yet heroistic individual whom believes everyone, good or bad, has a chance to do great things. She puts herself on the line when she can, but most of the time she's simply picking flowers.
 ==Combat==
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 ::* Thievery (Doesn't know what gil is, so she takes everything)
 ::* Athletic (Due to her running 'all the time' from people she has become quite dexterous.)
-::* Primalkin (She has insane power held back by her Crystal.)
 ===Other===
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 === Family ===
-Bahamut - Her 'father', the Primal who caused the End of the Era so long ago.
+N/A
 ===Friends===

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 ::* "I overheard her reluctant admittance to being...what would you call it? 'Bahamut-kin'? What a queer, offensive thing to say! Went back to my book and ignored her, I did." - [[Moltove Mon'tova]]
 ::* "I feel like...you were made to do great things." - [[Pyralis Targaryen]]
 ::* ???

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 | gender = Female
 | citizenship = ??
-| race = Primalkin (Shiva/Bahamut Hybrid)
+| race = Primalkin (Shiva/Bahamut Garlean Experiment Hybrid)
 | clan = ??
 | stat_1 =