Nehlu Faircloud - Revision history

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 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #591695;color:#ffffff;">◢ Rare Rumors (Very difficult or rarely overheard)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font> "Nehlu? Don't mention her to me. Some drunkard in his cups started making lewd comments about Lady Faircloud and Nehlu.. well.. she went crazy! She tried to claw his face off.."
+: <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font> "Nehlu? Don't mention her to me. Some drunkard in his cups started making lewd comments about Lady Faircloud. Nehlu overheard it and, well.. she went crazy! She tried to claw his face off.."
 : <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font> "Nehlu's been away for awhile, rumor is she just came back from a long trip to Ishguard, her Mother's home country."

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	:: Nehlu survived like this, as a feral hunter, for four years. By the time she actually saw the next person, she had long forgotten proper language, only a smattering of words left to her. The stranger was a miqo'te, like her, though several years older. She was beautiful and dressed in a fine, shining armor. She clearly ate well and didn't seem like she'd missed a single nights sleep due to rainstorms or predators. She was perfect, and Nehlu wanted to be her.		:: Nehlu survived like this, as a feral hunter, for four years. By the time she actually saw the next person, she had long forgotten proper language, only a smattering of words left to her. The stranger was a miqo'te, like her, though several years older. She was beautiful and dressed in a fine, shining armor. She clearly ate well and didn't seem like she'd missed a single nights sleep due to rainstorms or predators. She was perfect, and Nehlu wanted to be her.

−	:: Nehlu watched the adventurer in her camp for several days, wondering how she, too, could live this life. Her chance came upon her by surprise. The young woman stripped off her armor and dove into a lake. This shocked Nehlu to the core. She had ~~pleanty~~ of food, Nehlu had seen it all. She clearly didn't need fish, so why would she go in the water?! Her eyes traveled to the shining armor on the shore...	+	:: Nehlu watched the adventurer in her camp for several days, wondering how she, too, could live this life. Her chance came upon her by surprise. The young woman stripped off her armor and dove into a lake. This shocked Nehlu to the core. She had plenty of food, Nehlu had seen it all. She clearly didn't need fish, so why would she go in the water?! Her eyes traveled to the shining armor on the shore...

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-: '''Alignment''' : Neutral Good (LG)
+: '''Alignment''' : Neutral Good (NG)
 : '''Motivations''' : As a former runaway, Nehlu is highly motivated by family, and getting her own way, which often war.

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 <div style="padding:10px 35px;background: #4C006F;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;">Likes</div></span>
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Hot Baths

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 ==<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #3A006F;font-size:20px;color:#FFFFFF;">'''Character Relations'''</div>==
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 <div style="border:0px solid; padding:8px;"><b>
 <div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #A666E2;color:#000000;">◢ Common Rumors (Easily overheard)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#A666E2;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#A666E2;" size="3">■</font> "The silver Miqo'te? Thats Lady Faircloud's ward."
-: <font style="color:#A666E2;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#A666E2;" size="3">■</font> "Yeah, I've seen her. She always calls me 'Fooder.' I've told her my name a damned hundred times, just because I sell foodstuffs doesn't make it who I am!"
 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #7D38BC;color:#000000;">◢ Moderate Rumors (Moderately difficult to overhear)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#7D38BC;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#7D38BC;" size="3">■</font> "Well, She used to be rather wild, when she ran packages for Momodi. I think her Mother is teaching her proper though, she's been real polite the last few times she came in!"
-: <font style="color:#7D38BC;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#7D38BC;" size="3">■</font> "Just watch out when she's on that chocobo of her's. Black as night it is, and neither one of them seems to pay much attention to where they are going."
 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #591695;color:#ffffff;">◢ Rare Rumors (Very difficult or rarely overheard)</div></b>
-: <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font> "Nehlu? Don't mention her to me. Some drunkard in his cups started making lewd comments about Lady Faircloud and Nehlu.. well.. she went crazy! She tried to claw his face off.."
-: <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#591695;" size="3">■</font> "Nehlu's been away for awhile, rumor is she just came back from a long trip to Ishguard, her Mother's home country."
 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #260049;color:#ffffff;">◢ PC Rumors (Rumors from the character's of other players)</div></b>

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 :: Many people had died in the Fall, and left behind many children. Gridania's orphanages were filled to the maximum and then some almost over night. Suddenly every detail of Nehlu's life was jam packed with other kids, sharing food, sharing clothes, sharing beds. Most of the new kids were used to having parents, and naturally, with their loss, were inconsolable. This meant poor Nehlu couldn't get a single bit of peace, as everywhere she went was filled with crying kids.
-:: She had lost her parents long ago, it was something she was used to by now.
+:: She had lost her parents long ago, it was something she was used to by now, but the crying and wailing would remind her of her own loss, and leave her heartbroken all over again. She simply couldn't take it anymore. One night, while they all slept, Nehlu filled a blanket with food and vanished into the night, running deep into the woods.
 ::<br>
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 :<div style="padding:0px 30px; font-size:14px;"><center>'''Recent History'''</center></div>
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-::
+:: It had been a year since Nehlu had stolen the lancers armor and weapon. It took her weeks to learn how to put it on, and even then, it pinched at her tail, pulled at her hair and fur. Talking and conversing were hard at first, so she played dumb, acting like she couldn't speak when she would visit the village near by.
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 : '''Fears''': being alone, losing her family
-: '''Misc. Quirks''' : Nehlu spent a lot of time alone in the wild, and when afraid or angry, tends to show a feral side.
+: '''Misc. Quirks''' : Nehlu spent a lot of time alone in the wild, and when afraid or angry, tends to show a feral side. She has trouble with names, and often assigns people a nickname based on a trait she can remember about them.
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px;background: #4C006F;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;">Likes</div></span>
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Hot Baths
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 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Training
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Making deliveries for her Mother
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Learning to Dance
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Learning to be a Lady
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Learning to play the Piano
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 :<div style="padding:0px 30px; font-size:14px;"><center>'''Origins'''</center></div>
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-::
+:: Little is known about Nehlu's beginnings. She knows that her parents died in a large battle in the Twelves-wood when she was very young. She can remember being called Nehlu by them, yet, somehow, their faces are fuzzy and unclear in her memories. The orphanage she went to called her Nehlu Thaiasona, and so that has been her name for most of her life.
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 :<div style="padding:0px 30px; font-size:14px;"><center>'''Before Dalamud's Fall'''</center></div>
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-::
+::  Before the fall of Dalamud, Nehlu lived a rather boring life in an orphanage. She was at best an average student, not from a lack of ability, but more a lack of focus. The young girl was always daydreaming about being an adventurer, going on quests and slaying Primals.
-::
-::
+::  She didn't hate the orphanage, and was grateful that they had given her a place to live, but she knew this wasn't the life for her. Still, what could she do about it but endure?
 ::
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 :<div style="padding:0px 30px; font-size:14px;"><center>'''After Dalamud's Fall'''</center></div>
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-::
+:: Nehlu was twelve during the Fall. It was a night she'd never forget, hiding under her bed, her cries of terror joining those of the other children as the world around them seemed on the verge of ending. The next day, Nehlu's comfortable little world became a lot less so.
 ::
-::
+:: Many people had died in the Fall, and left behind many children. Gridania's orphanages were filled to the maximum and then some almost over night. Suddenly every detail of Nehlu's life was jam packed with other kids, sharing food, sharing clothes, sharing beds. Most of the new kids were used to having parents, and naturally, with their loss, were inconsolable. This meant poor Nehlu couldn't get a single bit of peace, as everywhere she went was filled with crying kids.
 ::<br>

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 : '''Eyes Color''' : Light blue
-: '''Height''' :
+: '''Height''' : 4 Fulms, 11 ilms
-: '''Weight''' :
+: '''Weight''' : 125 ponz
 : '''Voice''' : Soft and friendly most times.
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px; background:#4C006F;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;">Hobbies</div></span>
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Training
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Making deliveries for her Mother
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>

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 ==<div style="padding:10px 35px; background: #3A006F;font-size:20px;color:#FFFFFF;">'''Annotations'''</div>==
-: '''Character Comparisons''': ;
+: '''Character Comparisons''': ; Ridya ((FFIV)) Selphie ((FFVIII))
-: '''Other Similar Characters''':
+: '''Other Similar Characters''': Slowly moving towards Integra Hellsing
-: '''Theme Song''':
+: '''Theme Song''': "Halestorm: Mz Hyde" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ej8or-DfrIY
-: '''TV Tropes''':
+: '''TV Tropes''': Orphan's Ordeal http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OrphansOrdeal
 : ''Template credit goes to [[Arianne Beaudonet]], visit her wiki for further credits''
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px;background: #4C006F;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;">Likes</div></span>
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Hot Baths
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Having her hair brushed/pet
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Being the center of attention
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Long naps in soft beds
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Heights
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 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Rude/Obnoxious people
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Those who take advantage of the innocent
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Cold water
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Schooling
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Threats to her family
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px; background:#4C006F;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;">Skills/Talent</div></span>
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Skilled acrobat and climber
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Athletic and fit
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Skilled in lance combat
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Skilled in wilderness survival
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font>
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> Capable hand to hand fighter
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 <div style="padding:10px 35px; background:#4C006F;font-size:14px;color:#FFFFFF;">Favorites</div></span>
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Food/Drink:'''
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Food/Drink:''' Almost anything
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Scent:'''
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Scent:''' Her Mother's perfume
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Color:'''
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Color:''' Silver
-: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Place:'''
+: <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Place:''' The Dawn House of course!
 : <font style="color:#4C006F;" size="2">■</font> '''Favorite Fesitval:'''