Orphaniel Bunansa - Revision history

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 <div align=justify><div style="padding:0px 10px; font-size:16px;color:#000000;font-family:Georgia;text-shadow: 1px 1px 1px silver;">'''Personal RP Limits'''</div></div>
 <div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">''I play light, medium, and heavy RP. Walk-ups are fine. Orphaniel has an on-going story; so if I want to RP with someone, but it doesn't make sense for the character to be with them at the time, I will call it "asynchronous RP" and try to fit it somewhere else in Orph's timeline of on-going events.'' </div></div>
-:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ '''''I will play''' heavy or dark content as long as there is no sexual themes, gore, torture, dark possession, or the occult. I will also RP combat, though Orph's contribution will depend on what he has learned so far. I will RP with anyone who is willing to RP with me, but I definitely prefer people with good grammar, spelling, and punctuation skills. ^^;'' </div></div>
+:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ '''''I will play''' heavy or dark content as long as there is no sexual themes, gore, torture, dark possession, or the occult. I will also RP combat, though Orph's contribution will depend on what he has learned so far. I will RP with anyone who is willing to RP with me, unless the sentence-writing is just really bad. No offense. ^^;'' </div></div>
 :<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ '''''I won't play'''  Sexual themes, ERP, gore, torture, dark possession, or the occult.''</div></div>
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 <div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">''Orph is always expanding his skills and he has a somewhat mysterious past with many terrible people in it.''
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-:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''Orphaniel wishes to learn conjury and the Way of the Fist so he can defend himself, especially from Bronze Blades traffickers.''
+:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''Orphaniel wishes to learn conjury and the Way of the Fist so he can defend himself, especially from Brass Blades traffickers.''
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 :<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''Orphaniel can heal using his hands as a focus, so there is conjury talent to be explored.''
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-:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''The Bronze Blades traffickers are still around, and Master Atoya still wants Orph back.''
+:<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''The Brass Blades traffickers are still around, and Master Atoya still wants Orph back.''
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 :<div align=justify><div style="padding:5px 15px;font-family:Georgia;color:#444146;">■ ''The other orphans that the alchemist experimented on are still probably slaves.''
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 [[Category: Mateus]]
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 <h3><span class="mw-headline"><div style="padding:10px 35px; background: #000000;font-size:14px;color:#ffffff;font-family:Georgia;text-shadow: 1px 1px 1px black"><center>'''STRENGTHS'''</center></div></span></h3>
-: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''Helpful'''. Orphaniel continues learning regardless of his age otherwise, and is good at problem-solving. He has a wide variety of skills that he can eagerly use to help or to serve people.
+: <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''Helpful'''. Orphaniel continues learning regardless of his age otherwise, and is mildly good at problem-solving. He has a wide variety of skills that he can eagerly use to help or to serve people.
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 : <div style="font-family:Georgia"><font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <font style="color:#444146;">'''Compassion & friendliness'''. Orphaniel always believes the best in people, and he is compassionate and gentle with people at times that others would be angry with them. Orphaniel can make a lot of friends in a short amount of time and can be very easy to like.

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 : <font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <b>Citizenship:</b> Probably Limsa Lominsan
 : <font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <b>Background:</b> Street/house slave
-: <font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <b>Skills:</b> Conjury, Way of the Fist (eventually), panhandling, pickpocketing, housebreaking, playing flute, playing harp, camping, cooking, housekeeping, greeting, serving, high-society behavior
+: <font style="color:#000000;" size="3">■</font> <b>Skills:</b> Conjury, Way of the Fist (eventually), panhandling, pickpocketing, housebreaking, playing flute, playing harp, camping, gathering, trapping, cooking, housekeeping, greeting, serving, high-society behavior
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 =Details=
-<h3><span class="mw-headline" id="General"><div style="font-family:Georgia;padding:10px 15px; background: #000000;font-size:16px;color:#ffffff; text-shadow: 1px 1px 3px black;letter-spacing:0.2em;"><center>DISCLAIMER</center></div></span></h3>
+<h3><span class="mw-headline" id="General"><div style="font-family:Georgia;padding:10px 15px; background: #000000;font-size:16px;color:#ffffff; text-shadow: 1px 1px 3px black;letter-spacing:0.2em;"><center>DISCLAIMERS</center></div></span></h3>
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-"Orphaniel Bunansa" is a ''young child'', even if unusually smart in some ways. He is also not "an adult in a child's body", in spite of the number of years he has been alive. While heavy themes may be RPed around or concerning him, ''ERP and sexual themes are not acceptable around him''. This character is strictly a family member and a friend. Thank you.
+Orphaniel is a ''young child'', if a bit precocious. He is not "an adult in a child's body", in spite of the number of years he has been alive. Heavy/dark themes may be RPed around or concerning him. ''ERP is not acceptable around him.'' Thank you.
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-"Orphaniel Bunansa" is a child Lalafell and an anomaly. Due to once having been used for testing in an alchemist's search for an elixir of unaging, he doesn't grow up, and he has been around for over twenty-five years. He is still mentally a young child of ambiguous physical age, possibly between two and five years old. However, he has gotten smarter in some ways and-- like an adult-- can rationalize, solve problems, and work hard. He is capable of many kinds of work, and-- with the use of aether and stoneskin-- has the potential to participate in battle with strong conjury and moderate effectiveness in the Way of the Fist. (He has none of these fighting skills at first, and will have to learn them across his character arc.)
+"Orphaniel Bunansa" is a child Lalafell who stays a child and doesn't age due to having been an alchemist's guinea pig for an elixir of unaging. He has been around for over twenty-five years, but he is physically and mentally somewhere between two and five years old. According to my RPed narration, "even Lalafell can't tell how old they are at that age-- unless they were keeping track-- since Lalafell grow so much more slowly than other races."
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 <h3><span class="mw-headline" id="General"><div style="font-family:Georgia;padding:10px 15px; background: #000000;font-size:16px;color:#ffffff; text-shadow: 1px 1px 3px black;letter-spacing:0.2em;"><center>HISTORY</center></div></span></h3>
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-Orphaniel has a rich personality which has largely been defined by his eventful history. About twenty-five years before the in-character introduction, an alchemist in Limsa Lominsa was seeking to create an elixir of eternal unaging so he could live in his prime forever. He kidnapped several young orphans in order to better observe the results of his experiment, and eventually was successful. Orphaniel was one of the orphans, and so he doesn't age. The alchemist sold the children off to various homes and owners, as that was the most useful course of action for him, and ran off. [There is no sexual abuse implied. I keep my RP clean.] It is known among the traffickers and some scholars and others what happened; but so far, no one knows where the alchemist went.
+Orphaniel is a rich character with an eventful history. About twenty-five years before the in-character introduction, an alchemist in Limsa Lominsa was seeking to create an elixir of eternal unaging so he could live in his prime forever. He kidnapped several young orphans to use as guinea pigs so he could quickly observe results, and eventually the elixir was successful. Orphaniel was one of the orphans, and so he and the others don't age. The alchemist sold the children off to various homes and owners-- as that was the most useful course of action for him-- and he ran off. [There is no sexual abuse implied. I keep my RP clean.] The whole incident is known among traffickers and scholars; but so far, no one knows where the alchemist went. Orphaniel's last two owners kept him as a possible link to tracking the alchemist, as a possible tool to reverse-engineer the elixir, or as a way to observe any negative side effects of the elixir.
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-No one knows Orphaniel's real name, age, or family. His name was given to him by his first owner-- a thief with the last name of "Bunansa"-- who named the child "Orphaniel" as a cruel joke. Orphaniel would later be called by the thief's last name. Orphaniel has worked for several masters-- first in Limsa Lominsa and later in The Goblet-- before eventually escaping. In Limsa he lived on the street or in the wilderness, where he learned to panhandle, pickpocket, housebreak, play flute and harp, camp, and cook. When he was sold into The Goblet, he lived with wealthy lords in large estates, where he refined his cooking and musical skills and learned to keep house, serve, greet, and behave in high society.
+No one knows Orphaniel's real name, age, or family. His name was given to him by his first owner-- a thief with the last name of "Bunansa"-- who named the child "Orphaniel" as a cruel joke. Orphaniel would later be called by the thief's last name. Orphaniel has worked for several masters-- first in Limsa Lominsa and later in The Goblet-- before eventually escaping. In Limsa he lived on the street or in the wilderness, where he learned to panhandle, pickpocket, housebreak, play flute and harp, camp, trap, gather, and cook. When he was sold into The Goblet, he lived with wealthy lords in large estates, where he refined his cooking and musical skills and learned to keep house, serve, greet, and behave as in high society.
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-Orphaniel frequently feels unloved and abandoned, and has dealt with abuse many times. Some of Orphaniel's owners were very cruel and they would punish him harshly. His latest owner, "Master Atoya" as Orphaniel called him, was particularly harsh. For example, Atoya had been attempting to force Orphaniel to learn to write; but Orphaniel could not write acceptably due to his underdeveloped coordination. Atoya would beat him for his failure until Atoya eventually gave up. Orphaniel's introductory RP had his escape through The Goblet from Atoya. Orphaniel had been suffering from depression and existential issues, and he lost the energy and motivation to work. Because of this, he began hiding instead of working, and Atoya soon found out. Atoya proceeded to beat Orphaniel nearly to death. After spending a few days in Atoya's infirmary, Orphaniel was told he would be put back under his service. But Orphaniel felt he wouldn't recover from his emotional state soon enough to prevent another beating, and-- fearing for his life-- he ran. Orphaniel is valuable to Atoya for his connection to the alchemist, and so he has hired Brass Blades to be stationed in The Goblet so they could find and return Orphaniel.
+Orphaniel has lived through abuse and "abandonment" many times. Some of Orphaniel's owners were very cruel and they would punish him harshly. His latest owner, "Master Atoya" as Orphaniel called him, was particularly harsh. For example, Atoya had been attempting to force Orphaniel to learn to write; but Orphaniel could not write acceptably due to his underdeveloped coordination. Atoya would beat him for his failure until Atoya eventually gave up.
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-Orphaniel has underdeveloped coordination and strength. Because of this, he may struggle to do tasks he enjoys such as cooking and crafting. However, he often makes up for his trouble with clever problem-solving. He climbs and descends stairs one step at a time and often asks for help with many things.
+Orphaniel has underdeveloped coordination and strength. Because of this, he may struggle to do tasks he enjoys such as cooking and crafting. However, he often makes up for his trouble with clever problem-solving, such as making wooden lids for teacups when he carries them. He climbs and descends stairs one step at a time and often asks for help with many things.
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-Orphaniel is sweet and helpful, and childlike in most of his personality. He is neutral good-- following the rules unless he deems them harmful-- and has a strong sense of justice. He loves to share new experiences with others, and he can serve and entertain others with various skills while doing so. He loves to be outside and he loves nature, animals, and camping. He likes to play, whether through exploring, hands-on observation, games, or pretend play with others or with toys.
+Orphaniel is sweet and helpful, and childlike in most of his personality. He is neutral good-- following the rules unless he deems them harmful. He loves to share new experiences with others, and he can serve and entertain others with various skills while doing so. He loves to be outside and he loves nature, animals, and camping. He likes to play, whether through exploring, hands-on observation, games, singing, or pretend play with others or with toys.
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-Orphaniel is overly trusting of people who do not appear intimidating to him, and doesn't hold grudges.
+Orphaniel is overly trusting of people who do not appear intimidating to him, and he doesn't hold grudges.
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