Raandal Bennett - Revision history

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‎History

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 As the years passed, he left the coliseum and began to train as a Sultansworn, but left the file for personal reasons. He formed a mercenary/adventuring company, Path of Oschon, attempting to bring like-minded folk together in an attempt to make Eorzea a better place. Many good deeds were done, but eventually it, too, came to an end.
-Now, Raandal works as a smithing and weapons trainer for the Phoenix Rose.
+Due to circumstances, Raandal is now deceased.
 ==Personality==
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 ==Affiliations==
 Married to [[Daphine Rysen]].
 ==Other Notes==

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 ==Affiliations==
 Married to [[Daphine Rysen]].
-Leader of company [http://pathoschon.enjin.com Path of Oschon].
+Smithing and weapons trainer for the Phoenix Rose.
 ==Other Notes==

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 Orphaned as an infant on the streets of Ul'dah, Raandal learned to fend for himself quickly or die. When he came of age, he put his street urchin life behind him and participated as a gladiator in the coliseum.
-As the years passed, he left the coliseum and began to train as a Sultansworn, but left the file for personal reasons. He now works as a leader of a mercenary/adventuring company, [http://pathoschon.enjin.com Path of Oschon], attempting to bring like-minded folk together in an attempt to make Eorzea a better place.
+As the years passed, he left the coliseum and began to train as a Sultansworn, but left the file for personal reasons. He formed a mercenary/adventuring company, Path of Oschon, attempting to bring like-minded folk together in an attempt to make Eorzea a better place. Many good deeds were done, but eventually it, too, came to an end.
 ==Personality==

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 ==Basic Info==
-Raandal is a well built highlander that hails from the streets of Ul'dah. He is the leader of the adventuring/mercenary company, Path of Oschon.
+Raandal is a well built highlander that hails from the streets of Ul'dah. He currrently works as a smithing and weapons trainer for the Phoenix Rose.
 ==History==
 Orphaned as an infant on the streets of Ul'dah, Raandal learned to fend for himself quickly or die. When he came of age, he put his street urchin life behind him and participated as a gladiator in the coliseum.

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Raandal Bennett
-| image =
+| image = raandal.png
 | imagewidth =
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 | gender = Male
 | citizenship = Ul'dah
-| race = Hyur Highlander
+| race = Hyur
 | stat_1 = Age
 | stat_1_value = 31

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 | stat_2_value = Mercenary/Adventurer
 | stat_3 = Marital Status
-| stat_3_value = Married to Daphine Rysen
+| stat_3_value = Married to [[Daphine Rysen]]
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 Generally blunt and serious unless around close friends/relatives.
 ==Affiliations==
-Married to Daphine Rysen.
+Married to [[Daphine Rysen]].
 Leader of company Path of Oschon.
 ==Other Notes==