Raving Raven - Revision history

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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>"I will defer the flowery and poetic words to the master bards and minstrels, and leave it at a simple 'It's complicated.'"</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>The first person to get to know Raven and the first true friend he ever made. After she attacked him once to steal the crystals he had been gathering, Raven tracked her down both to understand her motive and possibly reclaim his lost goods. Since then, she has assisted in forging him a new firearm, dared him to try and become a better man than the Garlean Empire made him, and even invited him to join the 81st Maelstrom Foreign Levy. The two enjoy bantering with each other, but they are always willing to offer an honest opinion on how to help each other...whether they want to hear it or not. Raven has currently rarely left her side (mostly due to lack of quarters for himself) and is trying to do his best to support her in any way he can, as a way of thanks for the new life she has given him.</p></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">The first person to get to know Raven and the first true friend he ever made. After she attacked him once to steal the crystals he had been gathering, Raven tracked her down both to understand her motive and possibly reclaim his lost goods. Since then, she has assisted in forging him a new firearm, dared him to try and become a better man than the Garlean Empire made him, and even invited him to join the 81st Maelstrom Foreign Levy. The two enjoy bantering with each other, but they are always willing to offer an honest opinion on how to help each other...whether they want to hear it or not. Raven has currently rarely left her side and is trying to do his best to support her in any way he can, as a way of thanks for the new life she has given him.</div>
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-! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;">[[Rhesh'ir Zhwan]], <i>The Bosses' Boss</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font>  <b>)</b></div>
+! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;">[[Rhesh'ir Zhwan]], <i>The Bosses' Boss</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#C24640;" size="2">✖</font> <b>-</b><font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font>  <b>)</b></div>
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-! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[[R'miah Tosh]]</b>, <i>the other Mi'qote girl</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#6B8E23;" size="2">✔</font> <b>-</b> <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font>  <b>)</b></div>
+! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[[R'miah Tosh]]</b>, <i>of the clan Rah</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#6B8E23;" size="2">✔</font> <b>-</b> <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font>  <b>)</b></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>”I would wager her sunny outlook could melt the entire Coerthas frost, if I haven't seen her shivering under it already. Need to go hunting with her like I said I would...if she still wants anything to do with me.”</i></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>”She was an enigma of sunshine at first. Now that we have truly spoken, however, I feel like she may understand me better than anyone else. Bitch to argue with though.”</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>The other woman that Raven met along with Catara when he tracked Onuma down to the 81st headquarters. While he has had many conversations with her, he does not feel as if he knows her extremely well other than her eternally optimistic outlook on life. Raven is both curious and fearful of her reaction when she confronts him about his Garlean past, but still hopes to maintain some form of relationship. Everyone needs some sunshine every now and then, even a Xaela.</p></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>The other woman that Raven met along with Catara when he tracked Onuma down to the 81st headquarters. While he has had many conversations with her, he did not feel as if he knew her extremely well until word of his past reached her. For a while she shared little more than heated glares with him, until they were finally able to speak one on one. Raven came to understand her past and the reason she felt betrayed, and while he still feels he was right to hide his past, he has come to respect her own decisions and some of her beliefs.</p></div>
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 ! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;">[[Rhesh'ir Zhwan]], <i>The Bosses' Boss</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font>  <b>)</b></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>"Well, he hasn't come charging at me with a sword yet. Wish people would stop talking him up though, I feel like he's gonna have me polishing the dagger he's gonna use to kill me just for daring to say good morning to him."</i></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>"Well...he hasn't come charging at me with a sword yet."</i></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>Raven has yet to meet the Captain of the 81st, but he has heard all about the man's hatred of the Garlean Empire. He can only hope the Mi'qote does not kill him on the spot and sees the hope for change that Raven and the others he has met all hold. Ultimately, his new life rests in this man's hands...</p></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>Raven had heard of the man's hatred for the Garlean Empire, but it still was not quite enough to prepare him for meeting the man in person. Since then, the two have constantly been at odds, Raven hearing no shortage of slurs and only holding back his own because Onuma wishes peach between them. Given how things have gone so far, however, such hope seems impossible</p></div>
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-<p><b>He would call it the best horrible thing to ever happen to him.</b> Bored with the simple bow, Raven began to accost the Imperial castrums on the outskirts of Eorzea, hoping to take the scrap cermet and aether crystals from fallen armor in fashioning a better weapon that he was more familiar with, even after years of simple hunting. It was there that he was assaulted by a mysterious assailant, whom he technically failed to fend off, before not before recognizing her as a Mi'qote Keeper he had befriended. Sorrowful for attacking a friend, she left him in the Quicksand with a bag of gil and a letter of apology, but took a crystal he had managed to collect to use for his design for an aether-powered firearm. Furious, and a little curious, Raven askwed around for the woman, and eventually came across the 81st Maelstrom Foreign Levy. there, he "introduced" himself to the free company, and came upon an agreement that he would recieve assistance in building his weapon design as reparation for the assault he received. during his time there, he befriended some of the people in their "family", and even ended up revealing his past to one of them, despite her being a known hater of Garleans. Fortunately, she understood that he was a good man, and with her help, he was able to find courage and admit his former life to the rest of the group, hoping to join them and find a new life for himself. Time will tell whether he is accepted, or executed...</p>
+<p><b>He would call it the best horrible thing to ever happen to him.</b> Bored with the simple bow, Raven began to accost the Imperial castrums on the outskirts of Eorzea, hoping to take the scrap cermet and aether crystals from fallen armor in fashioning a better weapon that he was more familiar with, even after years of simple hunting. It was there that he was assaulted by a mysterious assailant, whom he technically failed to fend off, but not before recognizing her as a Mi'qote Keeper he had befriended. Sorrowful for attacking a friend, she left him in the Quicksand with a bag of gil and a letter of apology, but took a crystal he had managed to collect to use for his design for an aether-powered firearm. Furious, and a little curious, Raven asked around for the woman, and eventually came across the 81st Maelstrom Foreign Levy. there, he "introduced" himself to the free company, and came upon an agreement that he would recieve assistance in building his weapon design as reparation for the assault he received. during his time there, he befriended some of the people in their "family", and even ended up revealing his past to them. While some were willing to accept (if not trust) him, their captain Rhesh'ir was adamantly against his joining, and thus he was removed from the 81st estate.</p>
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 ! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[[R'miah Tosh]]</b>, <i>the other Mi'qote girl</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#6B8E23;" size="2">✔</font> <b>-</b> <font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font>  <b>)</b></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>”I would wager her sunny outlook could melt the entire Coerthas frost, if I haven't seen her shivering out there already. Need to go hunting with her like I said I would...if she still wants anything to do with me.”</i></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>”I would wager her sunny outlook could melt the entire Coerthas frost, if I haven't seen her shivering under it already. Need to go hunting with her like I said I would...if she still wants anything to do with me.”</i></div>
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 ! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[[Onuma Ahntifi]],</b> <i>the one who started it all</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#CD950C;" size="2">$</font><b>-</b><font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font><b>-</b><font style="color:#6B8E23;" size="2">✔</font><b>-</b><font style="color:#c5a541;" size="2">🔒</font> <b>)</b></div>
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-| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>"I will leave the flowery and poetic words to the master bards and minstrels, and leave it at a simple 'It's complicated.'"</i></div>
+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>"I will defer the flowery and poetic words to the master bards and minstrels, and leave it at a simple 'It's complicated.'"</i></div>
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 | <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>The first person to get to know Raven and the first true friend he ever made. After she attacked him once to steal the crystals he had been gathering, Raven tracked her down both to understand her motive and possibly reclaim his lost goods. Since then, she has assisted in forging him a new firearm, dared him to try and become a better man than the Garlean Empire made him, and even invited him to join the 81st Maelstrom Foreign Levy. The two enjoy bantering with each other, but they are always willing to offer an honest opinion on how to help each other...whether they want to hear it or not. Raven has currently rarely left her side (mostly due to lack of quarters for himself) and is trying to do his best to support her in any way he can, as a way of thanks for the new life she has given him.</p></div>
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-! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Father’s Name</b>, <i>father</i>.  <b>(</b> SYMBOLS GO HERE <b>)</b></div>
+! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>[[Catara Masanori]]</b>, <i>Miss Mender</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#6B8E23;" size="2">✔</font>  <b>)</b></div>
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+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven's Thoughts:</b> <i>"No soul should go through the paths she has travelled. That she has not only survived, but kept her resolve for kindness and peace in the face of all this despair...She is far greater than I."</i></div>
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+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;">A Raen Au Ra woman who lost her homeland of Doma to the Empire's war of succession. Raven met her with Onuma and R'miah on the beach when he came across the 81st headquarters. Ever since revealing his origins, he could feel the pain that it caused her, and eventually told her that, when she was ready, he would be there for her to confront him. They have since spoken and come to understand one another better, leaving Raven impressed with the inner strength she holds in her delicate-looking frame. Though he was not involved with Garlemald by that time, Raven still feels guilt over the loss of her homeland, and wishes he had a way to repay her for the atrocities she has witnessed.</div>
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-! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Mother’s Name,</b> <i>mother</i>.  <b>(</b> SYMBOLS GO HERE <b>)</b></div>
+! <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Ohnuma Ahntifi,</b> <i>the one who started it all</i>.  <b>(</b> <font style="color:#CD950C;" size="2">$</font><b>-</b><font style="color:#000000;" size="2">🔃</font><b>-</b><font style="color:#6B8E23;" size="2">✔</font><b>-</b><font style="color:#c5a541;" size="2">🔒</font> <b>)</b></div>
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+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:14px; font-variant:small-caps;"><b>Raven’s Thoughts:</b> <i>"I will leave the flowery and poetic words to the master bards and minstrels, and leave it at a simple 'It's complicated.'"</i></div>
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+| <div style="font-family:Georgia; font-size:13px;"><p>The first person to get to know Raven and the first true friend he ever made. After she attacked him once to steal the crystals he had been gathering, Raven tracked her down both to understand her motive and possibly reclaim his lost goods. Since then, she has assisted in forging him a new firearm, dared him to try and become a better man than the Garlean Empire made him, and even invited him to join the 81st Maelstrom Foreign Levy. The two enjoy bantering with each other, but they are always willing to offer an honest opinion on how to help each other...whether they want to hear it or not. Raven has currently rarely left her side (mostly due to lack of quarters for himself) and is trying to do his best to support her in any way he can, as a way of thanks for the new life she has given him.</p></div>
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