Steel Bison - Revision history

Wetoddidirl at 06:19, 19 December 2016

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Wetoddidirl at 21:46, 9 December 2016

2016-12-09T21:46:22Z

Wetoddidirl: Rework

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Wetoddidirl: /* Negative */

2016-08-17T03:27:53Z

‎Negative

Wetoddidirl: /* Neutral */

2016-08-17T03:22:43Z

‎Neutral

Wetoddidirl: /* Positive */

2016-08-17T03:22:20Z

‎Positive

Wetoddidirl at 11:40, 20 July 2016

2016-07-20T11:40:50Z

Wetoddidirl at 10:19, 20 July 2016

2016-07-20T10:19:57Z

Wetoddidirl at 21:08, 1 May 2016

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Wetoddidirl at 06:49, 30 April 2016

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    <div style="padding:5px;font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#9d928a;" size="2">■</font> "Bison? Yea I see him frequent Pearl lane, and after a while when he returns his gil pouch is much lighter or completely empty and always has a smile on his face." - Ul'dahn Adventurer's Guild Levemete</div>
-   <div style="padding:5px;font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#9d928a;" size="2">■</font> "I once seen him stand up to a whole bunch of people in the defense of some stranger. He might have gotten his ass whipped but it took courage to stand up for someone else." - La Noscan Farmer"</div>
+   <div style="padding:5px;font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#9d928a;" size="2">■</font> "I once seen him stand up to a whole bunch of people in the defense of some stranger. He might have gotten his ass whipped but it took courage to stand up for someone else." - La Noscan Farmer</div>
-   <div style="padding:5px;font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#9d928a;" size="2">■</font> "---"</div>
+   <div style="padding:5px;font-family:Georgia;"><font style="color:#9d928a;" size="2">■</font> "I heard he started his own free company and houses them in his house up down the road. It seems it's almost all completly women that join him, I don't like to spread rumors... but I think he considers himself a Nunh and that is his harem." - Mists Resident</div>
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 <font style="color: #000; letter-spacing: 0em;">Fiery red hair with orange highlights and one matching red eye. The left eye was milked over and cloudy. As for his body an early lifetime filled with nothing but mining and working the anvil has left his frame rather thick and muscular.He stands roughtly at 7 fulms and 9 ilms tall and weigns in at almost 450 ponze. He prefers heavy and durable armor which easily adds another 125 pounds to his massive bulk.

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 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Negative</span>'''''</u> ===
-::* Proud Moon (Female Hellsgaurd) - Childhood friend, first love... bad ending
+::* Proud Moon (Female Hellsgaurd) - Childhood friend, first love... ended horridly
 ::* Mace Eagle (Male Miqo'te) - Found Bison and saved his life (Bison deserted FC)
 ::* Amalaa Vaas (Female Miqo'te) - Nursed Bison back to health (Bison deserted FC)

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 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Neutral</span>'''''</u> ===
 ::* [[Empty]]
 ::* [[Empty]]
 ::* [[Empty]]
 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Negative</span>'''''</u> ===

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 ::* Isabeau Drasant (Female Elezen) - Very sweet and kind towards Bison, Lover / Fiance
 ::* Pyha Bhambo (Female Miqo'te) - Saved his life, Sister of Isabeau, Lover
 ::* Y'atima Moih (Female Miqo'te) Young Miqo'te who reminds, him of himself when he was younger.
 ::* [[Empty]]

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 == Appearance ==
-'''Height:''' 7 fulms 5 ilms. (226.06 cm)
+'''Height:''' 7 fulms 7 ilms.
-'''Weight:''' 425 ponzs. (192.8 Kg)
+'''Weight:''' 425 ponzs.
 '''Complexion:&nbsp;''' Pinkish Red
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 === <span style="font-size:medium;">'''''<u>Talents</u>'''''</span> ===
-::* Talented Armor Smith
+::* Talented Smith
 ::* High pain threshold
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 === '''''<u>Crafting</u>''''' ===
 ::* Armor Smith
+::* Black Smithing
 == Family and Relationships ==
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 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Positive</span>'''''</u> ===
-::* Isabeau Drasant (Female Elezen) - Very sweet and kind towards Bison, Love Interest!
+::* Isabeau Drasant (Female Elezen) - Very sweet and kind towards Bison, Lover / Fiance
-::* Mace Eagle (Male Miqo'te) - Saved his life, and is like a Mentor to Bison
+::* Pyha Bhambo (Female Miqo'te) - Saved his life, Sister of Isabeau, Lover
-::* Amalaa Vass (Female Miqo'te) - Healed and cared for Bison as he was on the Brink of death.
+::* ViVi (Female Miqo'te) - Very sweet and kind Miqo'te, Makes him feel needed, Lover
 ::* Y'atima Moih (Female Miqo'te) Young Miqo'te who reminds, him of himself when he was younger.
 ::* [[Empty]]
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 === <br/><u>'''''<span style="font-size:medium;">Negative</span>'''''</u> ===
-::* Proud Moon (Female Hellsgaurd) - Childhood friend, he failed her.
+::* Proud Moon (Female Hellsgaurd) - Childhood friend, first love... bad ending
-::* Richel Vicethorne (Female Highlander Hyur) Leader of Bison's old free company and took him in. He often breaks things around her and frequents her bad side.
+::* Mace Eagle (Male Miqo'te) - Found Bison and saved his life (Bison deserted FC)
-::* [[Empty]]
+::* Amalaa Vaas (Female Miqo'te) - Nursed Bison back to health (Bison deserted FC)
 ::* [[Empty]]
 ::* [[Empty]]

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 One night when they recently left Ul’dah they decided to make camp out beneath the stars in the desert. Bison was awoken by the sound of approaching footsteps, and quickly drew his blade to fend off the intruders. He was ambushed by a quite a few Amalj'aa. With each swing of his rather large sword an Amalj'aa warrior crumpled to the floor. “Flee for Ul’dah” Bison yelled out hoping Ingri would make it to safety. Soon after they Amalj'aa quickly overran him with multiple cuts and stabs. As Bison fell to the ground the last thing he could remember was the Amalj'aa grabbing her and her son and hauling them off.
-The next thing he experiences was a slow bouncing sensation. As he slowly opened his eyes he could see the feathers of a dark purple chocobo. When Bison turned his head he could barely make out the form of a Miqo’te wielding what seemed to be a rather large axe. As he rode on the back of the chocobo his eyes began to feel heavy and quickly feel back into unconsciousness. For the next couple of days he found himself in a bed with his wounds bound up. Bison learned he was brought to his house by the Miqo’te “Mace Eagle”, which and his Niece “Amalaa Vass” is the one who bound his wounds and took care of him. He was also greeted by many people who shared this house. He was currently in the House of the Free Company ‘Vigil’. To repay their kindness he offered to join them as repayment for saving his life.
+The next thing he experiences was a slow bouncing sensation. As he slowly opened his eyes he could see the feathers of a dark purple chocobo. When Bison turned his head he could barely make out the form of a Miqo’te wielding what seemed to be a rather large axe. As he rode on the back of the chocobo his eyes began to feel heavy and quickly feel back into unconsciousness. For the next couple of days he found himself in a bed with his wounds bound up. Bison learned he was brought to his house by the Miqo’te “Mace Eagle”, which and his Niece “Amalaa Vass” is the one who bound his wounds and took care of him. "Amalaa Vass was the head of a mercenary company known as <The Queen's Gambit> and were known for taking any job if the gil was right. Didn't matter what side of the law it landed on. Bison became Amalaa's 'sword' and would travel with her and be her guard. He had to do some questionable deeds that shook Bison to his core. However when he was lost he found Izzy... she mended his wounds external and internal alike.
-Steel Bison is can be very loud and boisterous, however he is easy going and light-hearted with most matters. However when he believes someone in the Company is being mistreated he would be the first in line to help resolve any matter. As he feels his life is indebted to Vigil, he will offer to help with any task, weather it large or small. If he is no helping another member with anything he is often at a Forge working metal. He will gladly take any order from the Company and do it free of charge, he only asks you tell him the order as well as right it down. He is prone to messing up orders that aren’t spoken to him as he never learned how to properly read, and is rather embarrassed about this, specially being part of an academic Company.
+After being a part of a company who shared in rather dark tasks and missions. Bison could only take so much blood on his hands before he started asking the question... "why". He eventually took Izzy, Pyha, and Atima and fled the company. They stayed with Pyha until Bison could find them a house, and it wasn't long until they found and joined The Expatriates, where Bison found a home of people who actively seek out do right wrongs... and help each other.

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 === <span style="font-size:medium;">'''''<u>Relatives</u>'''''</span> ===
-::* Roaming Moose (Birth father, Hellsgaurd, deceased)
+::* Roaming Moose (Birth father, Hellsgaurd, presumed deceased)
 ::* Howling Wind (Birth mother, Hellsgaurd, deceased)
 ::* Ingri Warblade (mother, Highlander Hyur, deceased)

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 ==== Current Residence ====
-::* The Quicksand
+::* Eastern Thanalan
 ==== <span style="font-size:larger;">''<span style="font-size:medium;"><span style="font-size:small;">The past</span></span>''</span> ====