Teveriel Anduin - Revision history

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 *Reading
-*All forms of magick
+*Magickal theory in all of its forms
 *Fishing
 *Fencing
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 *Being reminded of his limitations
 *Failure
-*The Empire
+*Garlemald
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 ===Affiliations===
-Aelurian Anduin (PC) - Brother<br>
+Aelurian Anduin (PC) - Teveriel's eldest brother, an adventurer, who loved the sea and moved to Limsa Lominsa after he came of age. Participated in the Battle of Carteneau under the banner of the Maelstrom. Believed to be deceased following the onset of Calamity.<br>
-Lottie Forsaidh (PC) - Close Friend<br>
+Lottie Forsaidh (PC) - A young woman with whom Teveriel shared a strong connection from a very young age. Despite often feeling confused and conflicted about his feelings for her, the two were inseparable well into their teens, until six years ago when Teveriel suddenly departed Gridania. Upon his return, they reconnected and even traveled together to Ul'dah after Lottie had pledged her healing ability to Siobhain Surtsthalwyn. Even as he found his feelings for her growing stronger, their relationship remained somewhat strained due to his unwillingness to discuss the details of his sudden disappearance.<br>
-Minabo Wabo (PC) - Friend<br>
+Minabo Wabo (PC) - A Dunesfolk Lalafell whom Teveriel befriended during their imprisonment in Mor Dhona, where Teveriel saved his life following the wake of Bahamut's wrath. His family is somewhat prominent in Ul'dah, and shortly after the elezen and Lottie arrived in Thanalan he provided a house for the two to live in. Has connections with the thaumaturges of the Ossuary.<br>
 ===Other Notes===

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 | clan = Wildwood
 | stat_1 = Guardian
-| stat_1_value = Thaliak, the Scholar
+| stat_1_value = Nophica, the Matron / Halone, the Fury
 | stat_2 = Occupation
 | stat_2_value = Alchemist; scholar; arcanist
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 ===Affiliations===
-None at the present time.
+Aelurian Anduin (PC) - Brother<br>
+Lottie Forsaidh (PC) - Close Friend<br>
 ===Other Notes===

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	Teveriel was born in Gridania to Celondor, an Ishgardian expatriate turned Wood Wailer, and Celinne, a native forestborn Wildwood of Gridania. As a child, he was frail and sickly, often requiring the assistance of the conjurers' healing arts. It was whispered that Teveriel's mother had done something to anger the elementals, and that his sickness was some manner of retribution. Celondor was quick to silence such rumors, and they soon faded along with the boy's illness. This childhood malady, although seemingly cured, would leave its mark upon the adult Teveriel, leaving him with a relatively poor constitution and a lingering pallor, as well as a nearly claustrophobic aversion to confinement. He still lapses into uncontrollable and often debilitating coughing fits; he must regularly take an herbal concoction to combat it.		Teveriel was born in Gridania to Celondor, an Ishgardian expatriate turned Wood Wailer, and Celinne, a native forestborn Wildwood of Gridania. As a child, he was frail and sickly, often requiring the assistance of the conjurers' healing arts. It was whispered that Teveriel's mother had done something to anger the elementals, and that his sickness was some manner of retribution. Celondor was quick to silence such rumors, and they soon faded along with the boy's illness. This childhood malady, although seemingly cured, would leave its mark upon the adult Teveriel, leaving him with a relatively poor constitution and a lingering pallor, as well as a nearly claustrophobic aversion to confinement. He still lapses into uncontrollable and often debilitating coughing fits; he must regularly take an herbal concoction to combat it.
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		+	[[File:Celondor.jpeg\|thumb\|Celondor Anduin]]

	His need to stay indoors also contributed to his becoming quite the bookworm in his early years. Teveriel soon gained an insatiable appetite for books - any books, all books! For the young Elezen, his time spent reading in quiet study was an escape from a dismal reality. This was in stark contrast to his two older brothers, Aelurian and Navarre, who followed in the footsteps of their martially proficient father, but wanderlust and the allure of adventure soon took them both far from Gridania. Aelurian loved the sea and traveled to La Noscea; Navarre left soon after, but told no one of his destination.		His need to stay indoors also contributed to his becoming quite the bookworm in his early years. Teveriel soon gained an insatiable appetite for books - any books, all books! For the young Elezen, his time spent reading in quiet study was an escape from a dismal reality. This was in stark contrast to his two older brothers, Aelurian and Navarre, who followed in the footsteps of their martially proficient father, but wanderlust and the allure of adventure soon took them both far from Gridania. Aelurian loved the sea and traveled to La Noscea; Navarre left soon after, but told no one of his destination.

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 '''Height:''' 6'2"<br>
 '''Weight:''' 170 ponz<br>
-'''Hair:''' Silver-blonde, almost white<br>
+'''Hair:''' Silver-blonde<br>
 '''Eyes:''' Light grey <br>
-'''Physical Description:''' Slender and quite pale of skin, especially for a Wildwood Elezen. Despite his pallor, he appears to be healthy enough (which may come as some surprise to those who knew him before the end of the previous era) although he remains susceptible to a semi-frequent cough that is often debilitating. Wears spectacles most of the time.<br>
+'''Physical Description:''' Slender and somewhat pale of skin, especially for a Wildwood Elezen. Despite his pallor, he is quite fit, which may come as some surprise to those who knew him before the end of the previous era. Wears spectacles most of the time.<br>
 '''Voice:''' Steady and deliberately enunciated, deep and calm. Has been called soothing by some.<br>
 ===Character===

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 *All forms of magick
 *Fishing
-*Sashimi
+*Fencing
 *Mushrooms (if allowed to cook virtually anything, it's 99% guaranteed to contain them in some quantity)
 *Herbal Tea
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 '''Personality'''
-Teveriel is quite somber and serious to a fault, his stoic mannerisms sometimes coming across as rather cold to others. Intelligent and analytical, he feels most at home weaving his magick, studying his grimoire, or performing alchemical experiments.
+Teveriel is quite somber and serious to a fault, his stoic mannerisms sometimes coming across as rather cold to others. Intelligent and analytical, he feels most at home weaving his magick, studying arcanima, or performing alchemy.
 ===Affiliations===

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 ''Aelurian... I know he would go with me, if I asked. But if the worst should happen, I cannot allow mother and father to suffer the loss of all of their sons. I hope they all understand.''
-Teveriel was not among those who reawakened in a reborn world. (Stopping here for now because of work. Will update 9/21/13.)
+Teveriel was not among those who awakened into a reborn Eorzea. In the moons between his departure and the Battle of Carteneau he searched for Navarre, his travels leading him to Mor Dhona. By pure chance, during a brief stop in Camp Revenant's Toll he met a former retainer to House Durendaire who claimed to have served with Navarre in Ishgard. Teveriel set out at once for their father's ancestral home.
 ===Appearance===

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 ===Biography===
-Teveriel was born in Gridania to Celondor, a Wailer, and Celinne of the Oak Atrium. As a child, he was frail and sickly, often requiring the assistance of the conjurers' healing arts. It was whispered that Teveriel's mother had done something to anger the elementals, and that his sickness was some manner of retribution. Celondor was quick to silence such rumors, and they soon faded along with the boy's illness. This childhood malady, although seemingly cured, would leave its mark upon the adult Teveriel, leaving him with a relatively poor constitution and a lingering pallor, as well as a nearly claustrophobic aversion to confinement. He still lapses into uncontrollable and often debilitating coughing fits; he must regularly take an herbal concoction to combat it.
+Teveriel was born in Gridania to Celondor, an Ishgardian expatriate turned Wood Wailer, and Celinne, a native forestborn Wildwood of Gridania. As a child, he was frail and sickly, often requiring the assistance of the conjurers' healing arts. It was whispered that Teveriel's mother had done something to anger the elementals, and that his sickness was some manner of retribution. Celondor was quick to silence such rumors, and they soon faded along with the boy's illness. This childhood malady, although seemingly cured, would leave its mark upon the adult Teveriel, leaving him with a relatively poor constitution and a lingering pallor, as well as a nearly claustrophobic aversion to confinement. He still lapses into uncontrollable and often debilitating coughing fits; he must regularly take an herbal concoction to combat it.
-His need to stay indoors also contributed to his becoming quite the bookworm in his early years. Teveriel soon gained an insatiable appetite for books - any books, all books! For the young Elezen, his time spent reading in quiet study was an escape from a dismal reality. This was in stark contrast to his two older brothers, Aelurian and Navarre, who followed in the footsteps of their martially proficient father, but wanderlust and the allure of adventure soon took them both far from Gridania.
+His need to stay indoors also contributed to his becoming quite the bookworm in his early years. Teveriel soon gained an insatiable appetite for books - any books, all books! For the young Elezen, his time spent reading in quiet study was an escape from a dismal reality. This was in stark contrast to his two older brothers, Aelurian and Navarre, who followed in the footsteps of their martially proficient father, but wanderlust and the allure of adventure soon took them both far from Gridania. Aelurian loved the sea and traveled to La Noscea; Navarre left soon after, but told no one of his destination.
 Teveriel, for his part, readily took to scholarly pursuits and soon began an apprenticeship at the Fane, gaining a higher understanding of the elements and the healing arts. Eventually he joined A.E.T.H.E.R., an academy devoted to adventuring, as an academician where he conducted research on flora, fauna, and alchemical applications thereof in addition to continuing his studies at the Fane.
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 ''Aelurian... I know he would go with me, if I asked. But if the worst should happen, I cannot allow mother and father to suffer the loss of all of their sons. I hope they all understand.''
 ===Appearance===