Tywin Chamberlain - Revision history

Lyn W.: Major update to 'at a glance' information.

2016-10-07T22:29:58Z

Major update to 'at a glance' information.

2016-10-07T22:25:39Z

Changed the display picture of the profile to an updated picture.

2016-10-07T22:06:38Z

‎Biographical

2016-10-07T22:02:26Z

‎Affiliations

2016-10-07T22:02:07Z

‎Affiliations

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‎Tendencies

2016-10-07T21:56:28Z

‎Appearance

2016-10-07T21:56:13Z

‎Appearance

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‎Weaknesses

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‎Biographical

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 | clan = Midlander
 | citizenship = Gridania
-| stat_1 = Guardian
+| stat_3 = Guardian
-| stat_1_value = [[Halone, the Fury]]
+| stat_3_value = [[Halone, the Fury]]
-| stat_2 = Occupation
+| stat_4 = Occupation
-| stat_2_value = Agent of the Traveling Templar
+| stat_4_value = Freelance Mercenary
-| stat_3 =
+| stat_1 = Nameday
-| stat_3_value =
+| stat_1_value = 11th Sun of the 6th Astral Moon
-}}
+| stat_2 = Age
 === Biographical ===

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Tywin Chamberlain
-| image =  TywinChamberlain.png
+| image =  Tywin Chamberlain 2.png
 | imagewidth = 310
 | imageheight = 356

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 '''Nicknames/Aliases:'''<br>
-:''Ty'' - A nickname he was called as a boy that'd he'd much rather go by. Given to him by his mother and later adopted by his friends. <br>
+:''Ty'' - A nickname he was called as a boy that'd he'd much rather go by. Given to him by his mother and later adopted by his friends.
 '''Nameday:''' 11th Sun of the 6th Astral Moon (11/11)
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 '''Marital Status:''' Single
-'''Religion/philosophy:''' Tywin's hardly religious. He feels that if the gods were so great that wouldn't have allowed such bad things to befell him: the death of his parents, older sister, and destruction of his home.
+'''Religion/philosophy:''' Tywin's hardly religious; he feels that if the gods were so great that wouldn't have allowed such terrible happenings to befell him: the death of his parents, older sister, and destruction of his home.
 '''Laterality:''' Ambidextrous!

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 :Traveling Templars
 ''Etcetera:''
-:[[Nahue]] was generous enough to let me use this profile template.
+:[[Nahue Tanner]] was generous enough to let me use this profile template.
 == Rumours ==

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 :Traveling Templars
 ''Etcetera:''
-:Nahue was generous enough to let me use this profile template.
+:[[Nahue]] was generous enough to let me use this profile template.
 == Rumours ==

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 '''Goals/Aspirations:'''
-*To be the bard that his mother was
+*To be the hero he believed his late mother was.
-*Eventually settle down (unknown to himself)
+*Develop a close-knit group of long term friends.
 === Persona ===

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 '''Clothes:''' Can usually be seen in cotton comfy clothes when going about in town but during his adventures or when working on a contract can be caught in light leather and thicker cottons.
-'''Voice:''' Not overly deep but soothing in conversation with a subtle confidence.
+'''Voice:''' Not overly deep but soothing.
 === Tendencies ===

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 '''Body:''' Athletic/Toned
-'''Hair:''' Dark Auburn/Brown
+'''Hair:''' Brunette
 '''Eyes:''' Hazel or Honey Colored
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 '''Skin:''' Off-Tan
-'''Scars/Markings:''' A healed over gash on the bridge of his nose acquired from his father's training when he took a shield bash to the face.
+'''Scars/Markings:''' A healed over marking over his eye inflicted when he was younger.
 '''Clothes:''' Can usually be seen in cotton comfy clothes when going about in town but during his adventures or when working on a contract can be caught in light leather and thicker cottons.

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 ===Weaknesses===
-*Cute men or women that he's close too. He finds himself going out of his way to protect or please them not to get into their bed or to take advantage of them but to make sure ill harm does not come their way.
+*People he's close to often act as his weakness. He's a protector at heart, having lost what was once everything to him. He doesn't want to lose it all again, so he tends to be overly protective of what he manages to accrue.
+*Calling out flaws he's actively attempting to better irks him and can cause him to become overly snippy.
 === Appearance ===

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 '''Place of birth:''' Village in North Shroud
-'''Current residence:''' Ul'dah
+'''Current residence:''' Gridania
 '''Home City:''' Gridania
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 '''Grand Company Allegiance:''' The Serpents
-'''Employment:''' Agent for Traveling Templar, Freelance Mercenary
+'''Employment:''' Freelance Mercenary, Adventurer-for-Hire
 '''Marital Status:''' Single
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 '''Religion/philosophy:''' Tywin's hardly religious. He feels that if the gods were so great that wouldn't have allowed such bad things to befell him: the death of his parents, older sister, and destruction of his home.
 '''Laterality:''' Ambidextrous!
 === Abilities ===