User:TenkoVI - Revision history

Crow VI at 10:16, 15 June 2018

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Crow VI at 10:14, 15 June 2018

2018-06-15T10:14:40Z

Crow VI: /* Friends */

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‎Friends

Crow VI at 10:08, 15 June 2018

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TenkoVI: /* General */

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‎General

TenkoVI at 21:02, 9 June 2018

2018-06-09T21:02:04Z

TenkoVI at 21:01, 9 June 2018

2018-06-09T21:01:16Z

TenkoVI: /* Appearance */

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‎Appearance

TenkoVI at 20:54, 9 June 2018

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TenkoVI at 20:47, 9 June 2018

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-| title =
+| title = Wandering Flame
 | gender = Male
 | citizenship = Gridania
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 | server = Balmung
 | stat_1 = Age
-| stat_1_value = .
+| stat_1_value = 34
 | stat_2 = Namesday
 | stat_2_value = 4/6

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 :<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Aether Manipulation''': Can travel via Aetheryte but advanced magicks were not something he learned.
 :<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Alchemy''': Crow has a basic knowledge of herbs and medicine but his main area of alchemy was poisons.
 ==<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #d6f8ff;font-size:14px;color:#000000;">'''Tendencies'''<div>==

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 :: '''[[Luminous]]''' (Adventurer's Hub, Active)
-::: Joining the crew that handles some of the more day to day things of the Knights seemed like something to do to keep busy for Crow. He has come to enjoy the staff however.
+::: Joining the crew that handles some of the more day to day things of the Knights seemed like something to do to keep busy for Crow. He has come to enjoy being around the staff and genuinely wants to help out.
 :: '''[[Airis Sakuragi]]''' (Friend, Alive) (Au Ra, Raen)
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 :: '''[[Ryslo Suramlo]]''' (Leader, Alive) (Lalafel, Clan)
 ::: The Knight's leader and someone Crow both agrees with but finds maybe a bit to naive. Regardless he thinks he can trust the man but worries about his well being.
 ===Neutral/Wary===

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 :: '''[[Twin Adders]]''' (Freelance Hunter) (Grand Company)
 ::: Crow was forced to work as a Hunter as part of the Wandering Flames attempt to gain better public image. Putting past differences aside he helped on leves in the area, as well as working with local Hunter Scholars.
 ===Neutral/Wary===

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 ==<div style="padding:10px 15px; background:#dec4f0;font-size:14px;color:#000000;">'''Character'''</div>==
 ===General===
-Crow is a combat veteran, and while not fighting in a particularly honorable way he gets the job done. He's slow to let those get close to him and masks his pain with humor, if you prove you are worth letting in he will stick with you through thick and thin. Crow mainly uses throwing daggers or his bow, he generally keeps his weapons poisoned for capturing or killing depending on the job. He travels with hit hawk and chocobo looking for work at the moment.
+Crow is a combat veteran, and while not fighting in a particularly honorable way he gets the job done. He's slow to let those get close to him and masks his pain with humor, if you prove you are worth letting in he will stick with you through thick and thin. Crow mainly uses throwing daggers or his bow, he generally keeps his weapons poisoned for capturing or killing depending on the job. He travels with his hawk and chocobo looking for work at the moment.
 :'''Monker/Nicknames''':
-:<font style="color:#dec4f0;" size="3">₪</font> '''Title: Sixth Flame ''': Information
+:<font style="color:#dec4f0;" size="3">₪</font> '''Title: Sixth Flame ''':
 :'''Resedence''':
 :: Shirogane
 ===Appearance===

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 }}
-Anything here will go above
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 <div align=center><div style="font-size:55px;letter-spacing:0.2em;color:#b789d6;font-family:Georgia;text-shadow: 1px 1px 5px silver">Crow Vi</div></div>
 [[File:Ffxiv 06082018 192701.jpg|900x900px|center]]
-<div align=center><div style="font-size:18px;letter-spacing:0.75em;color:#dec4f0;font-family:Georgia;text-shadow: 1px 1px 5px silver">Denying Oblivion</div></div>
+<div align=center><div style="font-size:18px;letter-spacing:0.75em;color:#dec4f0;font-family:Georgia;text-shadow: 1px 1px 5px silver">Wandering Flame</div></div>
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 ===Weapons===
-:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Daggers''':
+:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Daggers''': Crow normally fights using daggers for close to mid range that he keeps in poison lined sheathes.
-:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Bow''':
+:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Bow''': Crow was raised to hunt with a bow and has used one most of his life, he favors longbows over the traditional shortbow.
-:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Falconry''':
+:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Guns''': During his last few years to recovery Crow took up firearms, although he finds them a bit too loud for his taste.
 ===Magic===
-:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Aether Manipulation''':
+:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Aether Manipulation''': Can travel via Aetheryte but advanced magicks were not something he learned.
-:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Alchemy''':
+:<font style="color:#d6d7ff;" size="3">₪</font> '''Alchemy''': Crow has a basic knowledge of herbs and medicine but his main area of alchemy was poisons.
 ==<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #d6f8ff;font-size:14px;color:#000000;">'''Tendencies'''<div>==
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 : <font style="color:#f7f6d6;" size="3">₪ Tribal Laws</font>
 : <font style="color:#f7f6d6;" size="3">₪ Garleans</font>
-: <font style="color:#f7f6d6;" size="3">₪</font>
+: <font style="color:#f7f6d6;" size="3">₪ Himself</font>
 : <font style="color:#f7f6d6;" size="3">₪</font>

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 |colspan="2" align="center" style="background: #d9c6ee;"|'''Head / Facial Features'''
 |-
-| '''Hair''' ||
+| '''Hair''' ||   White
 |-
 | '''Eyes''' ||   Golden

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 ==<div style="padding:10px 15px; background:#dec4f0;font-size:14px;color:#000000;">'''Character'''</div>==
 ===General===
-General information about Character
+Crow is a combat veteran, and while not fighting in a particularly honorable way he gets the job done. He's slow to let those get close to him and masks his pain with humor, if you prove you are worth letting in he will stick with you through thick and thin. Crow mainly uses throwing daggers or his bow, he generally keeps his weapons poisoned for capturing or killing depending on the job. He travels with hit hawk and chocobo looking for work at the moment.
 :'''Monker/Nicknames''':
-:<font style="color:#dec4f0;" size="3">₪</font> '''Title: Sixth Blade ''': Information
+:<font style="color:#dec4f0;" size="3">₪</font> '''Title: Sixth Flame ''': Information
 :'''Resedence''':
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 | '''Build''' || Athletic
 |-
-| '''Skin Tone''' ||
+| '''Skin Tone''' || Light
 |-
 | '''Tail''' ||
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 | '''Notable Features:''' ||
 |-
-| '''Scars''' ||
+| '''Scars''' || shrapnel scars on thighs, spear scar near left shoulder
 |-
 |colspan="2" align="center" style="background: #d9c6ee;"|'''Head / Facial Features'''

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 And that became his life for the next eight years. What started off as his desire to reform became his journey into being a working cog that benefited the world around him. For the first time he wasn't someone who fetched food, or a tool to harm and gather gil. He was part of a family, and one that he came to love. There were hard times and good times among the Flames but he was happy for what it was in the end.
-Then one day a request came in, a Limsan merchant needed help moving freight from Outer La Noscea to Costa del Sol. Originally the main threat was thought to be the Kobold beast tribes, Mamool Ja, and bandits a long the route. Facing such numerous threats the company decided to take everyone to ensure the safety of all involved. The job started off going as expected with attacks from Kobold, some territorial efts, and other agressive beasts. As the company came into Eastern La Noscea they were greeted by an unexpected sight. The Garleans from the nearby Castrum Occiden were on the road. Approached by a detachment they met with a Decurio who questioned where such a big group, some of which showed obvious signs of combat were headed and what the cargo they had was. It was then that the merchants in the group started to get nervous. As the company watched the merchants talk to the Decurio, something seemed amiss. The Decurio struck one of the merchants and then came to the freight and opened a crate. After closing the crate and moving back to his detachment he made a signal and all hell broke loose. Crow never saw what was in the crates before a merchant lie dead and magiteck fireballs slammed into the company. Fighting the Empire he had heard was a fools errand but defending against them proved even more so. Abandonning the cargo and running for Wineport proved faulty. In a last ditch effort they tried to take high ground against the Garleans. Such overwhelming firepower from the Castrum meant having high ground offered no advantage. Harming hyur was no issue but Magiteck Armor was another matter entirely. Crows final moments of this engagement are seared into his every being. The sight of his commander being engulfed
+Then one day a request came in, a Limsan merchant needed help moving freight from Outer La Noscea to Costa del Sol. Originally the main threat was thought to be the Kobold beast tribes, Mamool Ja, and bandits a long the route. Facing such numerous threats the company decided to take everyone to ensure the safety of all involved. The job started off going as expected with attacks from Kobold, some territorial efts, and other agressive beasts. As the company came into Eastern La Noscea they were greeted by an unexpected sight. The Garleans from the nearby Castrum Occiden were on the road. Approached by a detachment they met with a Decurio who questioned where such a big group, some of which showed obvious signs of combat were headed and what the cargo they had was. It was then that the merchants in the group started to get nervous. As the company watched the merchants talk to the Decurio, something seemed amiss. The Decurio struck one of the merchants and then came to the freight and opened a crate. After closing the crate and moving back to his detachment he made a signal and all hell broke loose. Crow never saw what was in the crates before a merchant lie dead and magiteck fireballs slammed into the company. Fighting the Empire he had heard was a fools errand but defending against them proved even more so. Abandonning the cargo and running for Wineport proved faulty. In a last ditch effort they tried to take high ground against the Garleans. Such overwhelming firepower from the Castrum meant having high ground offered no advantage. Harming hyur was no issue but Magiteck Armor was another matter entirely. Crows final moments of this engagement are seared into his every being. The sight of his commander being engulfed in fire, his fellow captain's shield breaking against a vanguard drill and finally the shell landing near him and blasting him and two others off the nearby ledge. The one close of his eyelids before watching his protege collapse against rocks during her fall and finally pain. Crow landed in the Agelyss River and had another fall waiting for him as he landed among the Hidden Falls.
-Crow eventually found his way to a ragtag company named the Wandering Flames. At first he thought of it as just work but over the course of eight years he came to think of it as his family. The Flames eventually found themselves taking on a contract to guard a merchants shipment that ran through Costa del Sol. They were unaware that they would be guarding it from Garlean inspection and when push came to shove the Flames found themselves facing the Garleans at Castrum Occiden's front gate. Attempting to take high ground the Flames fought until the end, but against the might of the Garleans it was a fools errand. During the last moments of the fight a magiteck armor round sent Crow and two others over the ledge they were fighting on. Falling into the Agelyss River, Crow's last memory of the event was watching as his comrade was not as lucky as him.
+Only bits and pieces of the next two weeks remain in his memory. Crow managed to recover to the point he was able to move. Word had reached him of no one surviving the actual ordeal he was part of. Oficically his company was labeled as smugglers by the guards. Crow laid in bed recovering for a month before making it back to the Wandering Flames base. With only retainers remaining the place felt empty. Yet he needed to recover before being able to do anything else. So over the next year and a half he tried to focus on recovering. While the physical wounds are mostly gone, the mental are not.
 ===Thirties-Present===
-:<font style="color:#f4de81;" size="3">₪</font>::: Three years following the loss of his company, Crow harbors immense hatred for people. Having lost his loved ones, being lied to by the merchants who hired his company and being attacked by a greed filled empire. Crow finds it hard to find pity for those around him. Thinking a change of scenery would help rid him of the ache he traveled to Kugane with the remains of the companies funds and opened a shop up. This did not stop his memories from existing, his heart from hurting or his anger from fading. After meeting with an old friend and hearing words that cut into him deeper than any blade could he realized he was just running from all of his issues. This was not the Wandering Flames way, and pushing himself he set off for home looking for something he can do to make his life worth what he has endured.
+:<font style="color:#f4de81;" size="3">₪</font>::: Three years following the events outside Castrum Occiden, Crow had accomplished little. Feeling as he had as a teen he went and sold the old base and moved to new lands entirely. Arriving in Kugane where he heard there was money to be had, jobs to be found, and Garleans to potentially harm was more than he needed to go. Although everything went smoothly he still just felt empty. It came to pass that one of the retainers that stayed with him on this journey finally snapped and called Crow out on his many actions following the Wandering Flames demise. She used the words disappointing, running, shameful, and coward more than once in her verbal assault. What wounds he had were not ready to then be cut deeper into with words than shrapnel ever could. He spent the rest of the day at a bar before making his decision. She was right. He was not a tribal teen anymore. He was the Sixth captain of the Wondering Flames, he had been taught better. He was not upholding the ideals of the company, his comrades, or his past self. Setting off back to Eorzea he looked at the horizon with determination. As the last Wondering Flame he must shine brighter to illuminate the dark places of the world around him.
 :<font style="color:#f4de81;" size="3">₪</font>
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