Victoria Castle - Revision history

Graeham at 04:29, 4 January 2016

2016-01-04T04:29:15Z

Vic: /* Appearance */

2015-12-20T05:47:00Z

‎Appearance

Vic at 04:36, 20 December 2015

2015-12-20T04:36:30Z

Vic at 03:47, 20 December 2015

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Vic at 03:42, 20 December 2015

2015-12-20T03:42:40Z

Vic: /* Physical Appearance */

2015-12-20T03:17:17Z

‎Physical Appearance

Vic at 03:16, 20 December 2015

2015-12-20T03:16:28Z

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Daxolotl at 17:03, 19 December 2015

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Vic at 00:34, 23 October 2015

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Vic at 16:24, 21 October 2015

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 <b><div style="padding:10px 25px; background: #aac5b4;">◢ PC Rumors (Rumors from the characters of other players)</div></b>
 : <font style="color:#aac5b4;" size="3">■</font> "Quite a few scars on her - whoever patched her up must have been a pretty skilled chirurgeon." " - [[Hyrtwyda Eyhafrynwyn]]
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 ===<div style="padding:10px 15px; background: #BEC3BC;font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;">Appearance</div>===
-Imposing is not a word that could be applied to Victoria without a hearty, scornful guffaw immediately following. She stands at about five and a half fulms in height, all slender limbs, slim hips, and narrow shoulders. The word 'unhealthy' seems to click into place around her like a set of manacles tightened round a wrist. Her skin is the same sickly-white shade of a fish's pallid underbelly, and her washed-out grey eyes are perpetually underscored by bruise-colored smudges born of many stressed and sleepless nights; what nails she has are bitten ragged nearly down to the quick. Her hair is ash blonde and cropped neatly short.
+Imposing is not a word that could be applied to Victoria without a hearty, scornful guffaw immediately following. She stands at about five and a half fulms in height, all slender limbs, slim hips, and narrow shoulders. The word 'unhealthy' seems to click into place around her like a set of manacles tightened round a wrist. Her skin is the same sickly-white shade as a fish's pallid underbelly, and her washed-out grey eyes are perpetually underscored by bruise-colored smudges born of many stressed and sleepless nights; what nails she has are bitten ragged nearly down to the quick. Her hair is ash blonde and cropped neatly short.
 Victoria's features have enough definition to indicate that she's no longer a child, but the soft angles of her face give away her relative youth despite the marks indicating that she's been through some form of accident or ordeal. Her face, hands, and upper body are spattered with what seem to be shrapnel scars. One in particular streaks across her nose, another nicks her upper lip, yet another splits her left eyebrow a third of the way from its end, and the top of her left ear is ragged and tattered.

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 Victoria's features have enough definition to indicate that she's no longer a child, but the soft angles of her face give away her relative youth despite the marks indicating that she's been through some form of accident or ordeal. Her face, hands, and upper body are spattered with what seem to be shrapnel scars. One in particular streaks across her nose, another nicks her upper lip, yet another splits her left eyebrow a third of the way from its end, and the top of her left ear is ragged and tattered.
-She dresses plainly, as neither her position nor her meager income allow her to indulge in vanity. Despite her lack of means, she manages to keep herself neat and presentable, if rather conservatively attired. Even in the Thanalan heat, she seemingly never wears anything that lacks long sleeves or a high collar.
+She dresses plainly; neither her position nor her meager income allow her to indulge in vanity. Despite her lack of means, she manages to keep herself neat and presentable, if rather conservatively attired. Even in the Thanalan heat, she seemingly never wears anything that lacks long sleeves or a high collar.
 ====<div style="padding:0px 15px; font-size:14px;color:#5F5F5F;text-decoration:none;border-bottom:1px dotted;"> Physical Appearance</div>====

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 Imposing is not a word that could be applied to Victoria without a hearty, scornful guffaw immediately following. She stands at about five and a half fulms in height, all slender limbs, slim hips, and narrow shoulders. The word 'unhealthy' seems to click into place around her like a set of manacles tightened round a wrist. Her skin is the same sickly-white shade of a fish's pallid underbelly, and her washed-out grey eyes are perpetually underscored by bruise-colored smudges born of many stressed and sleepless nights; what nails she has are bitten ragged nearly down to the quick. Her hair is ash blonde and cropped neatly short.
-Victoria's features have enough definition to indicate that she's no longer a child, but the soft angles of her face give away her relative youth, despite the marks indicating that she's been through some form of accident or ordeal. Her face, hands, and upper body are spattered with what seem to be shrapnel scars. One in particular streaks across her nose, another nicks her upper lip, yet another splits her left eyebrow a third of the way from its end, and the top of her left ear is ragged and tattered.
+Victoria's features have enough definition to indicate that she's no longer a child, but the soft angles of her face give away her relative youth despite the marks indicating that she's been through some form of accident or ordeal. Her face, hands, and upper body are spattered with what seem to be shrapnel scars. One in particular streaks across her nose, another nicks her upper lip, yet another splits her left eyebrow a third of the way from its end, and the top of her left ear is ragged and tattered.
 She dresses plainly, as neither her position nor her meager income allow her to indulge in vanity. Despite her lack of means, she manages to keep herself neat and presentable, if rather conservatively attired. Even in the Thanalan heat, she seemingly never wears anything that lacks long sleeves or a high collar.

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 {{Infobox-character
 | name = Victoria Castle
-| image =
+| image = Vic3.png
 | imagewidth =
 | gender = Female

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 : <font style="color:#F77A83;" size="3">■</font> '''Build:''' Slim, almost boyish; little obvious muscle definition.
 : <font style="color:#F77A83;" size="3">■</font> '''Height:''' Five fulms, five ilms.
-: <font style="color:#F77A83;" size="3">■</font> '''Weight:''' Somewhere between 110 and 120 ponze.
+: <font style="color:#F77A83;" size="3">■</font> '''Weight:''' Somewhere between 105 and 110 ponze.
 : <font style="color:#F77A83;" size="3">■</font> '''Skin tone:''' Almost unhealthily pale.

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 === Player Rumors ===
-''None thus far.''
+::*"Quite a few scars on her - whoever patched her up must have been a pretty skilled chirurgeon." - [[Hyrtwyda Eyhafrynwyn]]
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 When asked about herself or what happened to her face, her answers are vague and evasive. If pressed, she will simply insist that she doesn't warrant any extensive interest, or really any interest at all. She is, in her own words, not anyone.
-Any verbal misstep or other variety of blunder ends up inevitably followed by a mumbled apology. She seems to expect the worst possible outcome as a penalty for her mistakes. All of these non-answers and faltering protestations are delivered in a quiet, slightly accented voice.
+Any verbal misstep or other variety of blunder ends up inevitably followed by a mumbled apology. She seems to expect the worst possible outcome as a penalty for her mistakes. All in all, she apparently strives to avoid any serious scrutiny.
 == Combat ==

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 == Relationships ==
-::*'''Zwynskaet Waekahtynsyn''' (NPC) Her boss, the seemingly-out-of-place Sea Wolf owner of Waekahtynsyn Arms & Engineering. While canny enough to own a small but fairly successful shop near the Sapphire Exchange, he's a curmudgeonly old bastard and thus not terribly inclined to answer any probing questions about one of his few employees without a strong incentive.
+::*'''Zwynskaet Waekahtynsyn''' (NPC) Her boss, the seemingly-out-of-place Sea Wolf owner of Waekahtynsyn Arms & Engineering. While canny enough to own a small but fairly successful shop near the Sapphire Avenue Exchange, he's a curmudgeonly old bastard and thus not terribly inclined to answer any probing questions about one of his few employees without a strong incentive.
 == Rumors ==